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This is a joke fic about bad fanfics with self insert black and red OC alicorns. The poor writing is intentional. The first person narration is intentional. All the things that make a bad fanfic bad is intentional.
Now that is out of the way, onto the actual description. Mary Sue and her brother, Gary Stu, are suddenly taken to Equestria after their mom tells them to do homework. We all know how this song and dance goes.
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This sounds suspiciously like my life. Have you been watching me?
5250032 He has. I watched him watching you.
5250048 Impossible! You were watching me watch you watch The Watcher watching Watch Dogs wearing a watch!
5250088 Cameras pointing at cameras inside the Large Hadron Collider.
... I really don't know what to say... Many feels go about... And I'm glad that all of that was intentional...
I vote that we change because potatoes to because bananas, since for some reason, everyone at my school thinks banana is the most random thing. So every random thing is the same. The exact. Same. Thing.
5250099 And the large Hadron Collider is full of the weird mirrors that make everything look like there is 20 of them.
And this is all being shown on TV. Sadly, its Fox News, so nobody sees it.
For whatever reason, I found this hilarious.
Eh. I've read better [worse?].
I have now read your stories, you are now my favorite comedy author, and 2nd fav crossover author, and you get a follow
Same could probably be said about most politicians.
I enjoyed the story! Though, some part of me wished it was a serious story, that way it'd be even more hilarious!
Anyways...LUNA SOON YAY!
I loved it!
It could have only been worse (better?) by giving them bat wings.
The worst part is there are actually serious stories about this kind of thing.
But this one was pretty funny.
This is so bad that it is good again. Somehow.
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Now this! This is a Red/black OC story I'll read!
Well done, good Lad, have my favorite Emoticon:
ALL OF YOU... YOU NEED TO WATCH THIS. THIS HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THE STORY, AND I'M VERY SORRY. (great story btw)
Okay you know what, sorry I had to use caps like that. Just watch this. Even if you're not a Harry Potter fan, which im not, these videos made me laugh until my i almost pissed my pants. For real. Make sure to watch both.
Enjoy! Awesome story, once again!
5250832 headcanon accented
5251052
The uncensored videos off of Oney's Video Hole are even funnier.
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OK, OK... my favorite perspective and the slander of the same aside, I will admit it is one of the harder ones to write in, and to actually have it be interesting, you have to keep that one character ignorant of stuff, something that can be hard to do at the best of times.
You get to live. Just this once.
Now onward to the train-wreck proper.
5251921
On finishing...
Eh.
I'm not going to pretend I'm a great satirist, but there's a difference between making fun of cliches, and just following a check-list while winking at the audience.
A cute try, but it just didn't do much for me.
This line made me LOL.
And this line earned all of my yes. Yes! YESS! YES, VALIDATION! Oh God in Heaven, that feels better than sex!
It's like mind cancer! It's hurting my ideas!
To me, this fic was a lot funnier before they went to Equestria. I liked the ridiculous dialogue between them and their mother. The dialogue with the Mane Six was just a cliche checklist, but the dialogue with the motther was actually pretty funny.
5251918 Agreed
5252928
Where's the score?
5252665 It's like the Ralf Wiggum of real life... Look away for two seconds catch it eating glue and crayons!
Holy mother of god, that was indeed a masterpiece. Instant fav and like, and i give you a Headcrab cuz i like the Half-Life series.
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5252974
What score? My /2563 score?
5253706
Yeah, that one!
5253713
I usually only do that for my "Judging Fics by Their Covers", and sometimes for fics I really like. I don't do it all the time.
But to make you happy:
Overall: 1986/2563
5252982 It just that bad.
This story is just, crazy go nuts. I have so many favorite lines in this story. And the story was the best shite ive ever read. Good job
5253722
So, you're recommending this?
5253927
It's satire poking fun at badfics...
And I think the score I gave it is like... a B- ? Not really must-read, but probably worth your time.
5253997
Perhaps I shall read it, then.
AND NOW1!!1!! 4 TEH THRILLING SEA-QUILL!
RAIT 5 STARS OR I WILL HUNT U DOWN 6EVER!
5252665 Yet at the same time it's so smooth you can't take it!
Brain cells. Dead.
5255844 Said every author of bad fanfiction ever.
Hang on, first person narration is bad? Says who? Nearly all of the best stories on this site are first-person. If you wanted to make this story ickier, you'd have used second person.
Let's just say that using is instead of are in the description is also intentional... Is it?
Also, I think the bad writing fits it. It's like a 8 year old daydreamed about this happening in the middle of maths class (hence the homework).
Wow. Just... wow. I loved the whole Lyra and Derpy thing at the end, the way they had more page time than AJ, Rarity and Fluttershy. Perfect, in a non-perfect way.
Instant watch, was so bad that it rocked
And the Rainbow Dash and brother kissing thing. Oh my god. Amazing.
Scratch that.
This is pure genius.
I try to stop reading... but I just couldn't stop , it was hilarious
Oh god, it's like a train wreck. I shouldn't look, I don't want to look, and yet here I sit, staring in sheer goggle eyed horror.
Didn't get far into the first 4 paragraphs without gagging
and then I decided to go further. OMG I CANT READ THIS IT IS SO DUMB ALL YOU HAD TO DO TO WRITE A BRAIN KILLING FANFIC WAS GONTO RIGHT THERE OMG OMG OMG
“I’m in love with you suddenly!” Rainbow Dash says as she flies up to my brother and kisses him.
WHY THE HECK DID I READ ON
Yeah, I should probably stop spamming
For the worst MLP fanfic ever, you have a pretty good rating haha.