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Paragon Knight


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Celestia has been secretly going to the Everfree forest on her own lately. She has been quiet about it, and Luna, unable to enter her dreams to find out what is going on , follows her sister. When Celestia tells Luna of a threat that will attack Equestria, Luna agrees to help her sister.

With the help of an old foe, the two sisters will find something hidden in the Everfree forest that will change their lives as well as Equestria 's future forever.


NOTE: The cover art is not mine. All credit for the cover art goes to mark331

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This was a good read hope for more soon

5441044
Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

Wow. This was pretty cool! It really gives that neat little backstory. But I always thought Xerneas would be a girl. Whatever.

5441044 i love your destiny avatar

This was nice. It was. Really... and I don't say that so easily about crossovers. Though I have to say that I know next to nothing about Darkai and Xerneas.

5443186
Thanks. I didn't really put much thought about Xerneas being a male or female when I wrote that scene. I guess I just automatically made Xerneas a guy because in the majority of the movies the legendary Pokemon are voiced by a male actor.

5443586
I know what you mean. Crossovers are difficult to pull off. Honestly I was worried that this story wasn't going to be received well, but reading comments like yours lets me know I did something right.

5443914 I thought Xerneas had a female actress in the newest movie though... huh.

5444120
I wouldn't know I haven't seen it yet.

5444125 Oh. Well, it's pretty awesome!

*slow clap* good jop i really injoyed it allthough i did see some grammer mistakes h ere and there

this was an interesting read. xerneas' explanation as to why the everfree was full of his kind kind of made sense, i think. i dunno. might have been over thinking on that part. also, you might want to think a little bit on the first two teams that time periods were given. by that, i mean the number of centuries that celestia said. it's annoying trying to make sure comments are all that spoiler-ific, you know. witnessed a few errors here and there, as well, but none of them took away from the story as a whole.

5447985
If you like, you can send me a PM so that we can talk more about it

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