This story is a sequel to The Party Adoption
Matt11 gave me permission to go off of his story, thanks a bunch man...Its been about 8 months since the incident with Diamond Tiara, But Scootaloo isn't worried she's having the time of her life with her new family... but little does She know she's being tracked down by a mare no ponys seen in over twelve years. A mare that could change Scootaloo's life for ever. But change it for better or for worse
needs some work grammar wise and split the sentences up its a little hard reading it when there swooshed together, but its a good story.
uh you might need to put that I gave you permission in the description other wise people will thank you stole or something.
5247925 fixed it
5247910 when you say spilt the sentences up do you mean like make more paragraphs
5248164 here is an example, yours
and how I'd love to see it.
do ya understand now and see the difference?
5248212 yea I see the difference im writing the next chapter chapter now so I'll make a note in my book. thanks for the clearing that up for me
Loved it!
5248700 thanks this is my first story that Ive written in ten years, not my original idea though. Many thanks to Matt11 for letting me go off his story
whats with her dad?
5251649 Silver's dad?
5251933 scootaloos dad whats with him is he dead or something
5252438 oh, this is a sequel to The Adoption Party by Matt11. It explains it there.
Can't wait for the next chapter
5271876 Thanks I had alot of trouble with this one, I re-wrote four times
hurry up zack this is gold
This ever gonna be updated lol?
I lost all my information on this so I'll have to read the story that gave me the inspiration for this one again
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its cool still look forward to it yohr a good writer