I love psychology and writing. I tend to write origional/experimental stories. I am the head of the School for New Writers and the EFNW writing track. My new favorite quote is "Why so ˈsir-ē-əs?"
The Writers' Group56,381 stories ·9,290 members
One-Shots18,903 stories ·2,369 members
Scootaloo3,262 stories ·2,569 members
School for New Writers9,608 stories ·5,008 members
Scootaloo faces her demons and finally grieves for the death of someone she found dear. This is a story about how one girl pulled herself up after she hit rock bottom hard.
Second place winner for the Weekly Contests group's 10th contest.
Special thanks to my editors and pre-readers
Asylum1388
Quill Scratch
mikemeiers
and Bad Dragon who has his own entry for this contest.
Page generated in 0.118 seconds
Total duration
1,006 users online
1,458,572 hits today, 2,004,447 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I've gotta admit, I don't really like this story, but it IS well-written.
5258546
It's defiantly not for everyone.
very well written and woven together.
I would recommend try to make a little more scootalo-ish, because if it didn't have her name in it, it would have been hard to know, and I should be able tot tell without the name.
5293597
Thanks, the characterization was the one thing I wasn't really happy about.
Very well written.
It makes me sad though.
5379863
Thank you.
It is sad but it's also meant to be happy. She ends her sadness, confronts her demons, and goes out to live life. Maybe I made it a bit to sad though.
5380650 I had to reread the ending. I think I had the wrong idea of what happened. So I do see the happiness now.
I also feel much better about it.
Thank you.
1: Needs to get edited.
2: Did she commit suicide?
5434164
0) Somehow never got your comment in my notifications. (My apologies)
1) It has been, if you see something that needs work let me know.
2) No. She decided that she was going to live a life that would make him happy rather than wallow in her sadness.
5660435 Then would you please explain this part? Cause I think I'm missing something.
5670760
I clarified something in that paragraph. It turns out that while writing/editing it I didn't realize how obtuse it was.
GOOD FOR YOU SCOOTS !!!!!!