this is very good I'm surprised it hasn't go ten a lot of attention

>>498497498497

I just submitted this, so I'm still waiting for feedback.

But thank you, nonetheless.

what is this a crossover of?

I'll have to read this...from the summary though it seems similar to the fic I'm currently writing called Memories. Similar, but nowhere near identical. I'll put it on my list to read later when I have some free time

>>498521498521 what is this a crossover of and this is a really good fic!

>>498755498755 It's not really a crossover. I just derped when I submitted this...fixed

well well.. what do we have here ^^. a wolf? this could be good

i always see myself as a wolf when inserting myself XD so i love the idea!

^^ that went well im loveing the conflict here! i taste a slite hint of racisim

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impressive cliffhanger sir

winter is a gentle men, im just throwing that out there ^^

a sir, to the end all right ^^

very intresting split personality disorder, i had my suspicion but now i know. things are going to get fun

>>500109500109 You're really digging this fic aren't you?

definetly going to be following this one ^^

>>500133500133 i love wolfs ^^ what can i say :D

So the fact that he only eats other predators isn't another form of racism, or it somehow makes predatory behavior easier for ponies?

>>502145502145Simply put, he doesn't like to kill anything that can't fight back. I might give it a little edit.

>>500298500298Well I'm glad you like it. I'll send you a message when I add more chapters, how's that?

>>502242502242 i  favorited this so i will know of any updates. but be my guest ^ ^

I just read this story and this is quite an excellent story. It's interesting that an OC would be a wolf. I do hope that Winter gets rid his annoying roommate in his head.

i can just picture him thinking 'This Is gona hurt like a BITCH'

i really want to hear a not pony shout I AM NOT AN ANIMAL and give a little triad when the ponies are being racest to a caracter

some people would say like a boss

but i say like a SIR

>>499851499851 don't you mean gentle wolf?

glad to see this story back

[Sees the update] Wohoo!

Awesome story. There is too few good wolf storys on fimfic.

Keep it coming.

>>10124531012453I'm not so sure about the "good" part, but thank you.

Oh shoot here we go Winter vs Fenrir/bobcats Moar!

Tip:

When you write thoughts, write like this:

The day was sunny, I thought.

OR

'The day was sunny,' I thought.

ALSO:

"Thanks." Fluttershy nodded. means that Flutters nods AFTER she says 'thanks'.

I get the feeling Fenrir is related to the Nightmare. Did the Nightmare and Loki get it on?

>>10616681061668I'm thinking of doing a prequel when this sstory is finished, explaining Fenrir's origin.

DUN DUN DUUUNNN

First and whoa this guy is creeping me out

This is very well written. Yes, there's a few mistakes , but nothing serious. The chapters are short, but poignant something I like in most writings.

The plot thickens

I know this chapter is really old, so this message will probably be pointless, but I still wanted to say something.

Applejack seemed way too OOC here. The random swearing even after the initial shock (she didn't even swear when they were fighting Nightmare Moon, or Discord, or anything else), the unwarranted attack (there is no way she could have missed the fact that Fluttershy wasn't in any trouble), the continued insults even after the misunderstanding (again, no reason she would act like that after finding out she was completely wrong), suggesting they toss him back to basically die (once again after the initial shock), etc.

Basically, I don't think AJ was in-character at all during the entire chapter, and it was very annoying. The rest has been good so far, but the part with AJ just felt forced.

For a while, the blond pony considered the option of warning her friends and chase the accursed beast out of town and took a few seconds to think of a nice enough way to tell Fluttershy the wolf just couldn’t stay.

What?

And then Rarity was just as OOC?

And then Applejack broke her promise less than a minute after making it?!

Are all of them going to be this OOC in the story? The only character whose characterization hasn't been mangled so far is Fluttershy. Everyone else could be replaced with OCs with how out-of-character they are.

I love the idea behind the story, but the bad characterization is starting to kill it for me...

MOAR!!!!!!

when is the next update?

Darnit! There hasn't been a new chapter since August! And just when the story was getting really good too. I mean seriously, what a cliffhanger, Fenrir can possess other animals even though Winter is his host!? That's really really bad! I hope you update sometime soon! This story is really good!

yes!