Well there really isn't much here to talk about yet.  The first story is one of my favorite DashFire stories so I've got high hopes for this one, I'd just recommend taking it slow.  Take your time setting up your descriptions of places and characters to build your world as right now it's very quick and detail sparse.  Either way I'll keep an eye on it.

WHY ARE THERE DISLIKES ON A DASHFIRE FIC

Don't forget to like and favorite you guys.

I have a dashfire fic... #shamelessself-promotion

Loved the first one an I am sure I am going to love part 2.

and I know I will because you are already on to a great start! I thought they would be challenged my the new Wonder bolts, not the shadow, nice work!!

Loved thé first one , can't wait for more!

>>12588621258862

There's something of a difference between a 'Dashfire fic' and a 'fic that involves Dashfire'. The former is literally about the Dashfire, while the latter is usually focused on something else entirely with the Dashfire as a side-element. Looks to me like your story falls in the second category, there. Just wanted to clear that up.

Love this story!

and the previous too :P

But... If the Shadowbolts are coming back... Doesn't that mean that Luna is taking them on?

Loved your previous Dashfire fic, excellent stuff. Can't wait to see more of this.

Keep up the good work!

Well I vote for Derpy/Ditzy, Surprise and Gilda. Hell throw a Changeling in there, make the team really multicultural.

Derpy!!!!   and Gilda would be sweet too!!!

I just hope It's not Surprise

I am sad that Thunder is out but its nice to see him used too, good work

ok i love this story wish i could read about there wedding though

>>12714521271452

The wedding will happen. Just later in the story.

YAY

I'm thinking Luna... though an angry fluttershy can beat anything, its practically cannon

Yay update! Would have hoped for a bit more length. But you're the writer not me! Can't wait for more.

Have some fluttershy.

awesome! keep up the awesome work! I really like this story. partly cause i love dashfire stories in general

Lyra? and Gilda a Bolt?  Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't think anyone saw that coming at all!

yay!! i love ware this is going cant wait for more

Hell yeah! Spike's joining an aerial stunt team! I usually don't like the idea of Spike growing wings with maturity because it takes away one of his limitations (and limitations make a character interesting), but if it means he gets to dazzle audiences in the air alongside Dash and Spitfire, then I'm all for it in this case.

"Uh... F-fine! In two weeks we'll show down with both you and the Wonderbolts!"

Although I really like the situation Dash got them into, and am curious to see who else will be recruited to Sonic Dashfire, I can't help but think she would have sounded more badass by saying this: "To heck with that. We do this now. I can pull off the most amazing stuff you've ever seen at the drop of a hat; I'm the real thing. If you can't do the same, you ain't worth my time, and you can take your challenge and shove it where it belongs. It's now or never, chumps."

But that's just a quick little fantasy. If it'd happened, they wouldn't have gotten into this tricky situation.

>>13465301346530

Aye, if I'd done that, story would've been over too quickly. Also I'd like to think that maturity has brought Dash to be a teensy bit more patient, but not much.

Tell me, why haven't you updated this in weeks? YOU PROMISED!!!

>>14244791424479

My apologies. SInce I've been out in Illinois, there's been a lack of motivation to do much of anything. I'm trying to find my way back home, and that's meant putting a few things aside until then. Unfortunately that means writing as well. I apologize again, and hopefully I'll be back on the saddle soon.

>>14289731428973   ...Did you just say "back in the saddle?"

!!!!

Man I hope you Finnish this it's getting good.

MOAR

>>18468181846818 Indeed. My dear Sparx, I believe I speak for all of us when I say:

MOAR!!!

... or we'll find you.

Alright, to everypony who was following this story very patiently and enjoying it, I have to apologize, I won't be continuing THIS INTERPRETATION of it. Eventually, I will start it again, as a different story, more focused on the relationship between Dash and Spitfire, as was originally intended. Now, I'll keep this one up for those of you that enjoy it and want to make up your own ending in your mind, but don't expect any new chapters. I love you guys, and hope you'll be just as patient with me to release the REAL story as you were with the chapters of this one.

... Please?

You made a reference to banned from EQUESTRIA daily... Seriously? WHY

>>22232892223289

1. Pokehidden is awesome

2. You can't throw a fuss about it because you've already exposed yourself to having played/known about the game.

3. It's my party and I'll cry if I want to.

Alright first of all I don't really see how he his awesome but your option and one does not simply go on the net and not cme across r34 and implying that this story syncs with the game I would think their would be some serious STD's going around XD

But in anycase my comment was more of a joke and you may have taken it serious lol

And on a serious note I really enjoyed the first story I would say 2nd only to my little dashie

>>22274012227401

It doesn't imply anything unless you want it to friend. And nah, I never take anything seriously.

Are you honest with that 2nd favorite comment? Cripes! Thank you very much, that means a lot, but I don't think I'm anywhere near as good as some of the other stories on here, but still thank you.

Haha yea I'm serious from what I have read compare to what you got is my 2nd favourite it could be the fact it has dashie and spitfire but I enjoyed reading the story I actually really didn't want it to stop and I'm glad to hear their wil be another story focusing on dashie and spitfire again

Can't wait to read it

And I should stop commenting now starting to feel like spam haha

Good luck in your story's

why you cancel this story?

>>25334862533486

Because I feel I can do much better than this. I'm unsatisfied with the piece, and i will revisit it, but as a different story, but I'll leave this one here for now for those that still like it.