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A fellow pony notices that Princess Luna may have a serious problem: there is a small, sentient race inside her mane and they have been living there for quite some time. Luna must decide what to do about this.

A random short story I made to help bring the smiles.

--You will most likely enjoy this story if you also like:--

Luna freaking out

Celestia being totally chill

Sea ponies!

Explosions taking place inside people's hair

Entire wars taking place inside people's hair

Absurd and Absolutely Delicious Comedy

If you liked Mic the Microphone's Audio Version of this story:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WIY268lNxeU

First Published
25th Apr 2012
Last Modified
25th Apr 2012
Axz
#1 · 241w, 18h ago · 24 · ·

i don't know what i just read but it was funny as hell:trollestia:

#2 · 241w, 18h ago · · ·

WHAT THE FUCK? 'Sentient race in your mane'

#3 · 241w, 18h ago · 4 · ·

O.o whoa, that's kinda trippy....:applejackconfused:

#4 · 241w, 18h ago · 18 · ·

AND THUS THE HUMAN RACE WAS IN LUNAS MANE.IT ALL MAKES SENSE!:pinkiegasp:

#5 · 241w, 18h ago · · ·

I tip my hat.

#6 · 241w, 18h ago · 8 · ·

Sir, you must write this from the point of view of the little sentient beings!

IT HAVE TO BE DONE!

#7 · 241w, 18h ago · · ·

What a silly little story. Well written and funny. :pinkiehappy:

Good job, sir! :twilightsmile:

#8 · 241w, 17h ago · 1 · ·

Amusing concept! I'm just a little confused about the seapony's presence... plus, how can she "walk" over to Princess Celestia?

Zyrian
Story Approver
#9 · 241w, 17h ago · · ·

>>497451

Well, it said sister of the ambassador, so maybe there was a bit of species mix or something like that...who knows?

#10 · 241w, 17h ago · · ·

Brilliantly done! Though I have to admit, I can't imagine Luna bald or with a rainbow mane and tail. :rainbowlaugh:

#11 · 241w, 17h ago · 1 · ·

>>497451 Or wear overalls, for that matter? She has no legs!

In any case, this was a hilarious random story that actually makes an odd kind of sense. Well done!

#12 · 241w, 17h ago · 3 · ·

Well, that explains everything about our exsistence.

#13 · 241w, 17h ago · · ·

This is random as fuck. Lovely randomness. :pinkiecrazy:

#14 · 241w, 17h ago · 1 · ·

>>497432 This! Do what the man says!

Strangest thing is, this actually made sense to me...

#15 · 241w, 17h ago · · ·

that was amazing.:pinkiehappy:

#16 · 241w, 16h ago · 2 · ·

“Our mane does not take to water very well. It’s made of space!"

I laughed pretty much all the way through this story. It's just such an odd concept and you did a great job with it. My fav line is above, I laughed for a good minute after reading that.

This story gets 10 out of 5 space pirates in Luna's mane.

#17 · 241w, 16h ago · 1 · ·

Pfft, a race in Luna's mane and tail. That's awesome. :pinkiehappy:

And the ending was incredibly sweet of Celestia. Best big sister ever.

#18 · 241w, 16h ago · · ·

Okaaayyyy....

#19 · 241w, 16h ago · · ·

This is the most random fic I've read in a while, but it's nevertheless fun!

#20 · 241w, 16h ago · · ·

i liked it...

and the whole time i was thinking GROX GROX GROX!!!!!! RUN FROM THE GROX!!!:pinkiecrazy:

i laughed sooo much:)

#21 · 241w, 16h ago · 1 · ·

WE MUST ACTIVATE THE WARP ENGINES AND FLY UP TO MEET LUNA AT ONCE!

INB4 featured

#22 · 241w, 15h ago · 1 · ·

Gahhahaa!  Poor Luna! :rainbowlaugh:

Sea ponies.

Mane Verse.

Ulysses.

:trollestia: “I’m sorry war was declared inside your hair.”

The giggles won't stop.  You're killing me.

Spectacular job.  Send this to EqD. :coolphoto:

#23 · 241w, 15h ago · · ·

>>497605

Maybe it's because I played too much Portal 2, but I read that line as “Our mane does not take to water very well. It’s made of spaaaaaaaaace!!"

#24 · 241w, 15h ago · · ·

>>497700 *Imitates Lewis' voice from yogpod* "Spppaaaacceeee?!?!"

#25 · 241w, 15h ago · · ·

>>497432 WE MUST IN THE NAME OF SCIENCE!

#26 · 241w, 15h ago · 2 · ·

Insta thumb up just for the idea:pinkiecrazy:

Read later

#27 · 241w, 14h ago · · ·

>>497432

(M Bison) YES! YES!!

#28 · 241w, 14h ago · · ·

It was weird. But hilarious! Well, at least they don't destroy this race/races. Anyway, thumb up.

#29 · 241w, 13h ago · · ·

This was hilarious and awesome. And the ending made me d'aaaaaawww. :trollestia:

#30 · 241w, 12h ago · 1 · ·

"“I’m sorry war was declared inside your hair,”"

Well, that's definitely something you don't hear on a daily basis.

#33 · 241w, 11h ago · · ·

lol! awesome random story!

#34 · 241w, 11h ago · · ·

That story was... erm, it was rather... hysterical! :rainbowlaugh:

#35 · 241w, 11h ago · · ·

That was a pretty funny story. Though I should imagine Luna would perceive herself as the progenator of the tiny things inside her mane and tail, or at least I would hope so considering that was probably the human race.

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Sleep tight

#36 · 241w, 11h ago · · ·

I am now going to play Sins of a Solar Empire, pretending that this is EXACTLY what's going on. And I will love it.

>>497451

There's a sentient race waging interstellar war inside Luna's mane, and you're nitpicking a RED Engineer seapony moving on land?

#37 · 241w, 10h ago · · ·

....wat. XD

#38 · 241w, 10h ago · · ·

.... da fug?

#39 · 241w, 10h ago · 2 · ·

“Where’s my old hair?”

“Somewhere in space"

...

Space within space... Spaceception.

#40 · 241w, 10h ago · · ·

You watched Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends before you wrote this didn't you.

#41 · 241w, 10h ago · · ·

...

I-*pauses*

...

I have absolutely no idea what I just read, but I loved it.

#42 · 241w, 10h ago · · ·

Dude what were you smokeing and where can I get sum?

#44 · 241w, 10h ago · · ·

This was awesome haha

#46 · 241w, 10h ago · 1 · ·

1.- Da fuq?

2.- great as hell

3.- even funnier

4.- I fucking love you for doing this

5.-You sire, are fucking awesome

#47 · 241w, 10h ago · · ·

>>497497 It might mean "Seapony" as in the color of her fur and ect. Like, you might call Lyra a Sea-foam pony but that's not really what she is, it refers to her color.

Comment posted by Smug Antlers deleted at 6:42am on the 8th of April, 2016
#49 · 241w, 9h ago · · ·

So awesome!

I love it, but what's really funny is that "Nightmare Night" by Glaze and Mic the Microphone came on as I started reading this.

Just saying, but if this had happened to me, I would've immediately began peace and trading talks, and possibly begun micro-manufacturing from there. Think about it, entire micro-manufacturing plants, the size galaxies, sitting quietly in your hair... You could make a fortune! and think of the Science! and the fact that you'd have an ENTIRE CIVILIZATION AT ARMS REACH!

I'd be helping them form inter-dimensional transports as quickly as possible... :pinkiehappy:

#50 · 241w, 9h ago · · 1 ·

Sorry but that was my army dont kill me princess :moustache: oh wait you cant I'm invincible

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