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    A fellow pony notices that Princess Luna may have a serious problem: there is a small, sentient race inside her mane and they have been living there for quite some time. Luna must decide what to do about this.

    A random short story I made to help bring the smiles.

    -BGB

    First Published
    25th Apr 2012
    Last Modified
    25th Apr 2012

    Comments ( 386 )

    Axz
    #1 · 59w, 6d ago · 4 · ·
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    i don't know what i just read but it was funny as hell:trollestia:

    #2 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    WHAT THE FUCK? 'Sentient race in your mane'

    #3 · 59w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    O.o whoa, that's kinda trippy....:applejackconfused:

    #4 · 59w, 6d ago · 5 · ·
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    AND THUS THE HUMAN RACE WAS IN LUNAS MANE.IT ALL MAKES SENSE!:pinkiegasp:

    #5 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I tip my hat.

    #6 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Sir, you must write this from the point of view of the little sentient beings!

    IT HAVE TO BE DONE!

    #7 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    What a silly little story. Well written and funny. :pinkiehappy:

    Good job, sir! :twilightsmile:

    #8 · 59w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    Amusing concept! I'm just a little confused about the seapony's presence... plus, how can she "walk" over to Princess Celestia?

    #9 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>497451

    Well, it said sister of the ambassador, so maybe there was a bit of species mix or something like that...who knows?

    #10 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Brilliantly done! Though I have to admit, I can't imagine Luna bald or with a rainbow mane and tail. :rainbowlaugh:

    #11 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>497451 Or wear overalls, for that matter? She has no legs!

    In any case, this was a hilarious random story that actually makes an odd kind of sense. Well done!

    #12 · 59w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    Well, that explains everything about our exsistence.

    #13 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This is random as fuck. Lovely randomness. :pinkiecrazy:

    #14 · 59w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    >>497432 This! Do what the man says!

    Strangest thing is, this actually made sense to me...

    #15 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    that was amazing.:pinkiehappy:

    #16 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    “Our mane does not take to water very well. It’s made of space!"

    I laughed pretty much all the way through this story. It's just such an odd concept and you did a great job with it. My fav line is above, I laughed for a good minute after reading that.

    This story gets 10 out of 5 space pirates in Luna's mane.

    #17 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Pfft, a race in Luna's mane and tail. That's awesome. :pinkiehappy:

    And the ending was incredibly sweet of Celestia. Best big sister ever.

    #18 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Okaaayyyy....

    #19 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This is the most random fic I've read in a while, but it's nevertheless fun!

    #20 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    i liked it...

    and the whole time i was thinking GROX GROX GROX!!!!!! RUN FROM THE GROX!!!:pinkiecrazy:

    i laughed sooo much:)

    #21 · 59w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    WE MUST ACTIVATE THE WARP ENGINES AND FLY UP TO MEET LUNA AT ONCE!

    INB4 featured

    #22 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Gahhahaa!  Poor Luna! :rainbowlaugh:

    Sea ponies.

    Mane Verse.

    Ulysses.

    :trollestia: “I’m sorry war was declared inside your hair.”

    The giggles won't stop.  You're killing me.

    Spectacular job.  Send this to EqD. :coolphoto:

    #23 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>497605

    Maybe it's because I played too much Portal 2, but I read that line as “Our mane does not take to water very well. It’s made of spaaaaaaaaace!!"

    #24 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>497700 *Imitates Lewis' voice from yogpod* "Spppaaaacceeee?!?!"

    #25 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>497432 WE MUST IN THE NAME OF SCIENCE!

    #26 · 59w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    Insta thumb up just for the idea:pinkiecrazy:

    Read later

    #27 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>497432

    (M Bison) YES! YES!!

    #28 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    It was weird. But hilarious! Well, at least they don't destroy this race/races. Anyway, thumb up.

    #29 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This was hilarious and awesome. And the ending made me d'aaaaaawww. :trollestia:

    #30 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    "“I’m sorry war was declared inside your hair,”"

    Well, that's definitely something you don't hear on a daily basis.

    #33 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    lol! awesome random story!

    #34 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    That story was... erm, it was rather... hysterical! :rainbowlaugh:

    #35 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    That was a pretty funny story. Though I should imagine Luna would perceive herself as the progenator of the tiny things inside her mane and tail, or at least I would hope so considering that was probably the human race.

    ---

    Sleep tight

    #36 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I am now going to play Sins of a Solar Empire, pretending that this is EXACTLY what's going on. And I will love it.

    >>497451

    There's a sentient race waging interstellar war inside Luna's mane, and you're nitpicking a RED Engineer seapony moving on land?

    #37 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    ....wat. XD

    #38 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    .... da fug?

    #39 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    “Where’s my old hair?”

    “Somewhere in space"

    ...

    Space within space... Spaceception.

    #40 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    You watched Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends before you wrote this didn't you.

    #41 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    ...

    I-*pauses*

    ...

    I have absolutely no idea what I just read, but I loved it.

    #42 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Dude what were you smokeing and where can I get sum?

    #43 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :moustache:

    #44 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This was awesome haha

    #46 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    1.- Da fuq?

    2.- great as hell

    3.- even funnier

    4.- I fucking love you for doing this

    5.-You sire, are fucking awesome

    #47 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>497497 It might mean "Seapony" as in the color of her fur and ect. Like, you might call Lyra a Sea-foam pony but that's not really what she is, it refers to her color.

    #48 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Every time I look at stars or luna, I will think of this. FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF

    #49 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    So awesome!

    I love it, but what's really funny is that "Nightmare Night" by Glaze and Mic the Microphone came on as I started reading this.

    Just saying, but if this had happened to me, I would've immediately began peace and trading talks, and possibly begun micro-manufacturing from there. Think about it, entire micro-manufacturing plants, the size galaxies, sitting quietly in your hair... You could make a fortune! and think of the Science! and the fact that you'd have an ENTIRE CIVILIZATION AT ARMS REACH!

    I'd be helping them form inter-dimensional transports as quickly as possible... :pinkiehappy:

    #50 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Sorry but that was my army dont kill me princess :moustache: oh wait you cant I'm invincible

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