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Button Mash has a plan to win over his one true love.

Unfortunately, that plan involves doing something athletic.

Written for the Button Mash Party.

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Comments ( 13 )

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I do believe someone planned this.

Not the least bit surprised about the ending, but still cute. A couple quick things I spotted:

"He crossed off days on the calendar in his bedroom until there were no more the cross out, just red pen encircling the day."

'to cross out' instead of 'the cross out' AND 'red ink' instead of 'red pen' Well, it could be a red pen, but why bend a good pen out of shape and stick it to a calendar?

"All of his hard work, his dedication, the dry lectures on pacing by Twilight Sparkle, it had all payed off."

I think you meant 'paid' instead of 'payed'.

5213982 Nope. Total coincidence.

5214001 fix'd

Why do you have ButtonDash in binary at the beginning of the story?

5214175 It's instead of a title thingy. Because the story is called Button Dash

you use binary code you deserve a follow

Oh sweet merciful God! A gamer doing something athletic?! That is true love and dedication my friend :derpyderp1:

Huh. Not the BB I expected, but nice exicution.

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I feel like there are a lot of ways you could go to expand on this, maybe just to build up his crush on Dash. (It feels like you were withholding her name for a big reveal, but there wasn't any surprise to it.) For what it is, it's nice though.

my heart was DASHed too by geometry DASH! geometry DASH 2.2 is not out yet and i would like to have it because u can DASH the other way and u can stop DASHing in a platformer mode so no more DASH because DASH is gone



you like how many DASHes there are

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