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Carmack21 51275

Joined April 2012
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    Carmack21's Stories (5)

    • In the home of our Princess!
      A sequel too A Day To Remember.
      5,782 words · 949 views · 47 likes · 8 dislikes
    • The Few
      Embracing the night has never felt so good.
      15,519 words · 144 views · 8 likes · 0 dislikes
    • A Day To Remember!
      A task of observing a rainbow!
      4,439 words · 1,734 views · 48 likes · 13 dislikes
    • Freedom Comes From Teamwork.
      "Croft, wake up, wake up you stuburn mule, come on man we are pinned down we need you."
      3,328 words · 149 views · 4 likes · 0 dislikes
    • THE PAST RECOLLECTS
      1,914 words · 251 views · 3 likes · 3 dislikes

    Carmack21's Blog (12)

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    THE PAST RECOLLECTS by Carmack21

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    Tragedy Sad Random Adventure Slice of Life

    Can the cyan colored Pegasus push her body through the pain she has never felt before, to prevent what had destroyed Ponyville in the near distant future? How would this even be accomplished, and how could she warn the past version of herself without Twilight's magic? Is this the end? Has Eqestria fallen into nothingness. Is there any Hope?

    I would like to thank Eqestriadaily.com for awesome pics.

    First Published
    25th Apr 2012
    Last Modified
    30th Apr 2012

    Comments ( 5 )

    Carmack21
    #1 · Chapter 1 · 56w, 3d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    I am new and dont exaclty now how to set it up but i posted it as a short story. think i should continue it?

    Fallen Stars
    #2 · Chapter 1 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Hmmmm... I'll read this later, when I have time. But one thing that annoys me in the description: without twilights magic Two things: Twilight should be capital, as it is a name, and Twilights should be Twilight's, possessive.

    Carmack21
    #3 · Chapter 1 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    Sorry, late night typing, I will change it asap. Right now busy.

    Carmack21
    #4 · Chapter 2 · 55w, 3d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    Any ideas?

    Carmack21
    #5 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 3d ago · · ·
    Reply 

    If you want to see this story continued, please comment, or send a message

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