Rainbow Dash is unaccustomed to formal gatherings. It's not that she doesn't understand them, of course; she just doesn't like them. That said, she couldn't possibly say no when Twilight begged her to go along with the rest of the girls to some fancy pants party being hosted by some fancy pants pony in his fancy pants mansion. But she had no idea what was really lurking in the building, and just how serious it truly was...
Cover art by the amazing SilFoe, paid for by Vertorm. Oh wait, that's me!
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This was amazingly written, and had me LITERALLY on the edge of my rubbish chair. Good bloody job, mate.
Daaaaayyyyyyyyyyuuuuuuuuuuum.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Thank you very much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. ^_^
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No fic is every truly christened at birth unless Skeeter has commented on it! Thank you, Skeeter, I'm glad you liked it.
I have to say if any of my mates did that to me I would have killed them. Quite happily. Well done, mate, well done. I thought RD was going to get tortured and killed or something!
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Nah, Fish Fillet just wants to be loved.
Thank you for the compliment, I'm glad you liked the story!
That was a well written and spooky story which I enjoyed. Thank you for creeping me out. especially as its halloween (favourite time of the year).
-Frost
5209158 Where did you get your new avatar icon?
Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
In all honesty you did lose me a bit with "Fish Fillet," because I did laugh a bit at that apparently being his name. Otherwise, this was fantastic. You really had me believing everything, even when there were times where I assumed it would all be a prank. And Twilight deserves an Oscar for her acting performances, and convincing Rainbow she was scared by crying.
However... who was ghost?
DJRD
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I honestly just did the name as it was for two reasons. First, his name made the sentence rhyme where he says they can't get away, and when I wrote it like that on accident, it made me laugh so hard that I kept it. Second, the idea of a butcher who's special skill is flaying meat, and he's killing ponies...? Fuck, I had trouble coming up with a name that doesn't sound like his parents named him to become a psychopathic murderer in his later years. Fish Fillet feels like a real name a pony could have, if he was maybe a fisherman who specialized in selling his meats to other races that actually EAT meat. I didn't want his name to be something that a kindergarten teacher would feel creeped out by if she had him in her class. Fish Fillet would probably just be the son of the town fisherman.
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No I have not, honestly. I've never submitted anything there, because I doubt it'd ever make it in.
5210618 Well putting it that way, Fish Fillet actually makes a lot of sense. I could see that being an actual pony name, considering how it'd be attached to something he did, like Mr. and Mrs. Cake.
Great story! I loved it
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Thank you! I'm glad to hear it.
5210637 I dunno, I think you could.
Can't hurt to try, right?
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I suppose not.
Oh my God, you totally had me there, it was so delightfully creepy and confusing! When I read "Surprise!" I fell back onto my bed and laughed while hitting myself on the head
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I'm very glad you enjoyed it! It was my first attempt at anything even remotely dark, so I was worried people would see through the story instantly. It looks like it worked out though. I'm glad it had you to the end and had you enjoying yourself! ^_^ There's no greater reward than knowing your story brought a smile to someone's face.
5743744 You're so welcome! Really fantastic writing