How is the kid making Captain Falcon refferances when he wouldn't have been invented for another two and a half decades?

I consider this chapter a jump the shark moment. The snooping ponies come out of no where with no explanation and are not related to FiM or Resistance in any feasable way. This chapter feels primarily like a draft you wrote while sleep deprived and a little bit crazy.

You should scrap the entire thing and stick with FiM/Resistance rather then this convoluted wish wash.

>>6492464924 Well, first of all, it's an alternative world. I was thinking that a hero, similar to Captain Falcon was invented before hand.... Yeah, maybe it's a weak explanation.

Oh, and secondly, it's not a jump the shark. These characters actually have precidence in this story. I wouldn't just throw something in for no reason.

Third, I write these stories by myself, so I don't have anyone helping me through it. If you have some pointers, I'd be glad to hear them.

Lastly, I'm not crazy. You're crazy.

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I'll wait untill the next chapter... but I have my eye on you...

>>6498964989 And I have my eye on you.

Damn it! You turned them into ponies. Whenever the human gets turned into a pony I immediately find these stories unreadable. Shame, I was really enjoying it too. Oh well, you are a talented writer and I shall leave a rating.

>>6539665396 Please don't stop reading. I just turned these few into ponies. It's all apart of the story. (And a really good multi story arc, if I'm lucky.)

And don't worry. There will be real Chimera soon enough, but not yet. PLEASE don't diss it now.

Okay, I shall keep reading. I must admit you are a good writer. I just usually find it  annoying when humans get turned into ponies. I hope there will be humans that do not get changed though. Onto the next chapter!

Nice. Looking forward to seeing where you take the story next.

Oh lord. Equestria is doomed!!

Golden eye unintentionally trolling carrot top was hilarious!

Ending was awesome! And I liked the way you portrayed Diamond Tiara.

>>7807978079 Glad to see someone noticed her. Yeah, I actually kind of like Diamond Tiara. She is a stuck up snob, but I don't see her as really a bad pony. Just misunderstood is all.

>>7766577665 I'm glad you enjoyed it. I always strive to make my readers smile and get into the story.

Did a those two Chimera just get a WINGBONER?!

>>114594114594 Eyup!

I had doubts that a Resistance, Friendship is Magic crossover could be written in such an enjoyable fashion. I love this story, it's so well set up, very enjoyable and has excellent characters. I have enjoyed every chapter and hope to see many more .

This is brilliant

MY stunned expressions after reading this chapter :).

You write this story really well. Your gradual change of the Chimera's personalities and the fact you give them believable ones is a credit to your writing skills Evo you wizard .

I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter, I am positive I will be impressed

>>181179181179 This is why I love fimfiction. Such warm and inviting people work here.

Thank you for the comment. Hopefully, more people will notice this story. Maybe even an artist. One can hope.

>>181184181184 Perhaps the answer you seek lays in the new group system? You could find a group that's about your type of stories and add them to the group. I'm certain it will get more recognition that way.

Can someone please explain to me what is the song? Im not that into Resistance so id really like to know. BTW GREAT STORY AND MOOOOOOAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

>>186863186863 If you're talking about the song I used in the trailer,

It's from The Last Samurai soundtrack, specifically it's 'To Know My Enemy', by Hans Zimmer.

I meant the song the Chimera are talking about.

>>194572194572 Well, I'll let you in on something. In the Resistance series, the Chimera are kind of controlled using telepathy of some sort. If you watch a couple of cut scenes from the second game, I'd advise it. Both Deaedalus and Nathan, both of whom had turned into Chimera, talked about a song. I got it from that.

Do something else AMAZING next group or else i will feel

>>200043200043 I don't understand your comment. What are you trying to say?

Brilliant chapter Evo, I really enjoyed it. Your story telling skills shall continue to impress and entertain the masses .

Really good chapter, I enjoy the gradual chnages you make to Chimera and the fact that Carrot Top and Ditzy act a bit like they do in the mini-series life with derpy

>>209803209803 Thanks for that. I liked this chapter too. I was planning on including a couple of other things, but I decided to save them for the next chapter.

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No problem Evo. Also I have a few other things to link you to. I commented on your trailer for Resistance: Equestria on youtube and mentioned Maledictum Insanity it's actually called Maledictum Insania by by the awesome author Nero Darkard.

A link to Maledictum Insania here on Fimfiction Link

A link to the Trailer for it on Youtube Link

I like already and i agree to your description WHERE IS AN ARTIST

Fun chapter, Quizler is Equestria's Pimp XD

>>281606281606 Quizler gets all the mares!

And the plot thickens...good job I hope I see more soon! Good day

Soooooo. Do the Chimera replace Daleks as the big bads in this universe? Or do Daleks and Chimera exist as foes of The Doctor?

Also brilliant chapter, I saw what you did there reinventing Eccelsons scene where he met a Dalek, a survivor of the Time War.

>>334546334546 Daleks don't exist in either universe. So, yeah, Chimera kind of replace them. (Though, Daleks are my favorite Doctor Who aliens. EXTERMINATE! will never get old.)

>>340937340937 Yeah I know, Daleks are classic. They even have an entry in some British dictionaries

YAY! Junebug is Chester.A Bum's counterpart. Zecora kicks flank and the story continues to be awesome overall.

Good job on finding an artist. The cover looks great. Your so lucky.

Hello!

>>448389448389 OH MY STARS! YOU"RE HERE TOO?

You know what this calls for....A PARTY!

I just love the interactions between the characters. I'm liking the Resistance characters more and more (Paul's becoming a favourite) and I like how you're fleshing out the background ponies. Derpy as a mom took me a little by surprise, but she's such a sweetie to her kids. I loved Surprise from the beginning. Then again Pinkie's one of my favourite characters so anypony with similarities to her is bound to steal my heart!

>>448506448506 Paul seems to be one of the favored characters of this fic. (I actually like him a lot more then a thought I would.)

And thanks for the feedback. I always love to hear my readers thoughts.

First off I have to say I like your portrayal of DT A LOT better than her characterization on the show. I wish Screwball was a canon character. She brings out positive qualities in that girl. Plus from the description she was a wicked cool design.

I'm starting to really feel sorry for the Advanced Hybrid, but at the same time I hope other ponies keep bugging him since his frustration is hilarious!

I know I kind of petered out on reading in the beginning, but now that the relationships are more developed it's really pulling me in! I should be all caught up by the end of the weekend, no problem at all!

>>448580448580 :yay

And it's nice to know some people appreciate DT like me.

An interesting turn of events! I was particularly impressed by the Sniper twins in their stand against the Advanced Hybrid. I liked them from the get-go, so I'm glad to see them siding with the FiM crowd. Also the visual of Rampager being dragged and shoved around the hospital made me laugh! It's going to be an interesting day for the nurses when he wakes up!

I have a question: Is Surprise yellow or white. I remember her being yellow in previous chapters and in this one you describe her as white. Was that a design change?

Anyway, good stuff.

I'm still not a fan of her, but it looks she'll be okay in the context of the fic. I'm just happy to see a different side of her, even if it's fanon. Paul and her make an adorable pair I must admit!

>>448603448603 Yeah, the sniper duo did take a lot of guts to do that. Actually, it's the bravest thing anyone can do. For their whole lives they did exactly what they were told, this is the first time they decided to do anything for themselves.

Surprise is white. (I kind of forgot what color she was, so I said light yellow, but then I looked up some pictures on her and it turns out she's white. )

And again, thanks for the feedback. (I love it when people go in depth about their favorite parts and characters. Makes me feel good inside.)

Great chapter! I got some pretty hilarious mental images during the dinner with Golden-Eye. Ravager's moment of gratitude was a great way to wrap up. Like Tonto said, the gradual changes in the Chimera as they spend more time in pony form is very interesting to read.

I was wondering when Spray-On and his pal Portobello were going to reappear. They're hilarious!

The scene in the mayor's office was great. I just love how Bullseye tries to keep the upper hoof but something always seems to make a fool of him. He'll be lucky if the stress doesn't give him an ulcer!

Tickle attack!! Even though there are a lot of different things going on at once, you do a great job of keeping readers updated on them. I'm really digging the direction that Sparkler and Golden-Eye's friendship is going, even if her dad would disagree with me!