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Really nice work dude.
I enjoyed every minute of this, from the football game victory to Rumble and Scootaloo's romantic encounter.
Offense count: 40.
Favorite part: Cross-dressing Featherweight.
Not bad. Thumbs up.
Great fic bro
I WIN
I WAS NOT OFFENDED ONCE
THIS STORY IS AWESOME!
AND PIP, GOD FUCKING DAMN IT, I SALUTE YOU FOR THE EVIL GENIUS YOU ARE!
does nobody think about da herpies? like seriously.......
Gonna miss ya bro, story came out wonderfully. Loved the final additions.
See ya in 62 days, Soldier. ;~;
5216288 Pip: "Sorry, Miss. I can't hear ya over all the incredible sex I'm having!"
Coach: "What are ya, GAY!? Now get out there and bury yourself so deep into them they walk with a limp in their step for the next week!"
Featherweight: "So that's what that weird itch was..."
It took me like, 5 minutes to figure out the author's note.
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LovEd it dude. Keep up the great work
Truely glorious, though I'll laugh if Pip's comment earlier about the pull-out method turns out to be prophetic.
Magnificent.
Simply magnificent.
~Skeeter The Lurker
The words 'my hips are moving on their own!' did not come up once in this story.
You should be ashamed.
It's okay.
5217073 Yep, because precum has semen in it too, so there's a chance howeeeever small that that might happen.
F*cking Genius
You spelled 'Receivers" wrong. Also, that has to be the best title for a clopfic related to football/hoofball.
5216480 *rolls eyes*
As a football player/fan, I love this story already.
You gave me boner, I'll give you fave.
Looks like Rumble turned that tight end into a...*sunglasses*...wide receiver.
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I vote for a sequel with a Rumbloo/Crossdressing!Featherbelle foursome!
No, I don't care about the typo.
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Not sure if want in Scootaloo's butt...
5219808 You do realize that the typo is the pun, right? I'm certain that the author knew that it is really called a tide end.
5220588 Tide end? really? Sorry but it is called a TIGHT End
Man. That scene in the middle of the clop just made the story for me.
Actually that was the only love confession I’ve ever gotten, but it was still pretty damn weird.
Arn't they all?
Wow.
That is the funniest thing I have read all week!
5220588
I like your humor, unlike that Jewish guy above you.
Fuck this storyline... Fuck the sex... To hell with the character development I want more Crab Apple XD lmao
Ffffff Holy shit that was hot
About the only thing I think I could complain about is that Rumble going with Scootaloo despite knowing how she was stalking him seems a bit... wish-fulfillment, I think. I guess we could chalk it up to Rumble being desperate enough for a chick to "like him" like him, or alternatively because he's just a forgiving person, but all the same, that happened a little too quickly.
It would have been a bit more believable to have Rumble see Scootaloo getting off on his jersey, then spend the weekend thinking it all over, THEN confronting her on Monday. Of course, the rest would be largely unchanged...
...unless of course, you have a thing for getting it on in a locker room. Then by all means ignore my complaint.
But good overall. It gets the likies.
My one problem is the stupid announcer at the beginning... He's talking like a radio host. Announcers only tell you what happened after the play, they're not allowed to talk during a play because it would be very distracting like playing music during a play.
I was disappointed. The entire story seemed to be leading up to some, *ahem*, "Adventures in the Rosebud", but then, *poof*! Scootaloo conveniently has a condom of her own.
Other than that disappointment, it was fairly well done.
3.5/5
Hot steamy love between two thoroughly horny teenage ponies ... and then came the flash back ...
I LAUGHED SO FRIGGIN HARD
Please tell me this is a pun of what I think it is.
"Colt 45 and two zig zags, baby that's all we need,
We can go to the park after dark, smoke that tumbleweed."
5237998 Ya goddamn right it is!
5216175 same here offence count: 0
5216535 There was something to figure out? o.o
Pipsqueak is a genius, Featherweight is a freaking ninja that's bada** with wordplay, and Crab Apple is just plain glorious. I want to see three one-shots, one revolving around each character in some way.
That aside, this is amazing and I wouldn't mind seeing a sequel.
5255917
...what was that again about you not being a creepy stalker person?
5257753 Hey, you know what's fun and exciting? Private Messages. Those are fucking radical. You ought to try 'em.
Loathe,
Your Antagonist
5257865 Sorry. Not used to having that option. Heheheh...
5258506 No harm, no foul, friend.
Nice story! Crab Apple is a fuckin' riot too! So where were/are you off to? BCT?