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VortexTalon 211157

Joined February 2012
18 followers

    VortexTalon's Stories (2)

    • Vortex the Dragon
      VortexTalon is taken to Equestria by Discord just so he can spread a little chaos.

      6,650 words · 464 views · 19 likes · 17 dislikes
    • Talon the Gryphon Dj
      the gryphon Dj start his new life with a young foal named Darta, while trying to become a famous Dj
      6,959 words · 249 views · 7 likes · 4 dislikes

    A black gryphon named Talon becomes a Dj after adopting a foal and moving to ponyvile. Along the way, he will make a few friends and even find love. He also manages to balance everything with his other job with the ponyvile weather team.

    First Published
    25th Apr 2012
    Last Modified
    10th May 2012

    Comments ( 20 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 56w, 3d ago · · ·
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    seems good so far, but you might need an editor or a prereader.

    :moustache: :moustache:

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 56w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Wat.

    I'll favorite and like it and stuff, but...

    Wat.

    You said there was a "mare" you found and her name was "Cotton."

    Now she's a filly, her name Darta.

    Wat.

    Well, good chapter anyways, and I see you are getting better at your spelling/grammar.

    Keep up the good work.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    IMMA GET DRUNK OFF DIS SH*T!

    -Digit

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 56w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>497366 I forgaot I named her alright, I,ll fix it right now ok.

    #5 · Chapter 3 · 55w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This story just keeps getting better and better

    #6 · Chapter 3 · 55w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>535972thx dude, glad you like it

    #7 · Chapter 3 · 55w, 2d ago · · ·
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    also, anyone got any suggestions, let me know

    #8 · Chapter 3 · 55w, 1d ago · · ·
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    every time a new person speaks you should start a new line.

    #9 · Chapter 3 · 55w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>542345 thx for the tip dude, I'll use it well

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 55w, 7h ago · · ·
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    Wait.

    I haven't read this, and now I am.

    You referenced MY story and YOUR story in one chapter?

    Damn.

    Well, next chapter!

    -Digit

    #11 · Chapter 3 · 55w, 6h ago · · ·
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    Wait...

    I'm so confused...

    Vortex is indeed NOT from my story, nut one from yours?

    Well, now I see her as a fucking sky blue gryphon! What the fuck!

    -Digit

    OH WAIT!

    Can you use (possibly) one of the characters from my story?

    I mean, if that's ok with you... :fluttershyouch:

    -NOW Digit

    #12 · Chapter 3 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>547297 I think that can be arranged.

    #14 · Chapter 3 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>550521 just tell me witch one you want me to add.

    #15 · Chapter 3 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>550544

    Hm...

    Why not Stargazer and Cobalt? It might not be canon to my story, but who cares?

    #16 · Chapter 4 · 54w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Short but still good:ajsmug:

    #17 · Chapter 4 · 54w, 19h ago · · ·
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    >>574895 thx dude, I do aim to please

    #18 · Chapter 4 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Hey, could you add my OC?

    #19 · Chapter 4 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>925623 um, sure. I don't see why not.

    #20 · Chapter 4 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Why dont you join Cloudsdale :(

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