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Pen Stroke

Joined November 2011
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A fan-fiction author and computer programmer that lives in Pasadena.  ======> TIp Jar <======

Sequels

  • A Mug of Hard Cider
    Celestia's thirst for good alcohol leads her to a pair of new drinking buddies

    12,451 words · 15,038 views · 1,564 likes · 19 dislikes

Stories (19)

  • Winter Bells
    Can Nyx find acceptance with her extended family during Hearth's Warming, or will she find the holiday hymns are filled with nothing but hollow promises?

    95,681 words · 24,507 views · 2,631 likes · 34 dislikes
  • Drop of Moonshine
    A thousand years is a long time to go without a good, stiff drink
    10,347 words · 23,849 views · 2,636 likes · 36 dislikes
  • A Mug of Hard Cider
    Celestia's thirst for good alcohol leads her to a pair of new drinking buddies
    12,451 words · 15,038 views · 1,564 likes · 19 dislikes
  • Trinkets
    In the aftermath of Past Sins, Twilight and Nyx go through the things from Nyx's castle bedchamber
    7,396 words · 23,284 views · 1,881 likes · 24 dislikes
  • Into The Depths
    44,196 words · 11,440 views · 1,077 likes · 16 dislikes
  • Better Living Through Science and Ponies
    39,979 words · 21,276 views · 2,385 likes · 44 dislikes
  • A Zebra in the Bed
    4,559 words · 5,542 views · 559 likes · 9 dislikes
  • Bureaucracy is Magic
    14,347 words · 4,717 views · 505 likes · 8 dislikes
  • Creeping Darkness
    63,186 words · 5,513 views · 618 likes · 12 dislikes
  • Drift
    4,879 words · 816 views · 155 likes · 1 dislikes

Blog Posts (78)


==Originally written Fall 2011== Equestria Daily Post==

After a long day of ruling Equestria, the Royal Sisters need a chance to unwind. Luna's solution is a few glasses of her once famous Moonshine, a drink distilled from moonlight. Celestia has been sober for a thousand years, but the temptation to have "just one" glass proves too great. Yet, when that one glass turns into several, it's Twilight who will have to deal with the princesses when they’re drunk off their flanks.

First Published
25th Apr 2012
Last Modified
25th Apr 2012

Comments ( 211 )

#1 · 104w, 17h ago · · ·

I remember thissss! <3

#2 · 104w, 17h ago · · ·

yay! this is here... :trollestia:

#3 · 104w, 17h ago · · ·

OOOOO  I remember this... Time to read it again

#4 · 104w, 17h ago · · ·

Damn, it's been so long since I've read this...

#5 · 104w, 17h ago · · ·

*hiccup

#6 · 104w, 16h ago · · ·

HEE HEE HEE!  All of my favs!  I love it!

#7 · 104w, 16h ago · · ·

all i read was moonshine and i favorited

#8 · 104w, 16h ago · · ·

Wait if this is here... that mean Past Sins maybe next! Huzzah! More great fics coming to FiMFiction!

Great story by the way, your drunk Celestia is hilarious and did well in keeping her right.

In the Name of Her Serene Majesty Celestia Everfree,

Celestia's Paladin: For Honor and Duty, For the Sun and Moon

Bri
#9 · 104w, 16h ago · 1 · ·

Maybe a sequel to where Twilight does get to try it?:twilightsheepish:

#10 · 104w, 16h ago · · ·

I need more of this. :rainbowlaugh:

#11 · 104w, 16h ago · · ·

This is amazing.

You are amazing.

Thank you.

#12 · 104w, 16h ago · · ·

A quick and comedic romp, I loved it! :pinkiehappy::heart:

#13 · 104w, 16h ago · · ·

Drunk Luna and Celestia are best Luna and Celestia. When they're happy of course.

#14 · 104w, 15h ago · · ·

Gosh, I remember reading this on Fantiction.net, it was great! Too bad that website isn't too popular(And for good reason).

Glad to see it's now posted here so others can read it's spectacularness!

Auto Fav and Like initiated :pinkiehappy:

#15 · 104w, 15h ago · · ·

All right! I'm so totally faving this!

#16 · 104w, 15h ago · · ·

Yep I remember this and it was awesome. Rereading!

#17 · 104w, 15h ago · · ·

I love it! Everything about is funny. As. $#@%. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

#18 · 104w, 15h ago · · ·

Haha, it made me laugh at some parts. It didn't make me burst out laughing (not many things do), but overall a very nice story.

#20 · 104w, 14h ago · · ·

I remember when I first read this.

I give it by dawn before it's in the featured box.

#21 · 104w, 14h ago · · ·

79 - 0 oh my, jsut by the rank imma read this,

#22 · 104w, 14h ago · · ·

This is one of the best pony fics I have ever read. There's too many good lines in it. Best Line: "Oh yeah? Well, Twilight, you’re... you’re purple"

Love it!

#23 · 104w, 14h ago · · ·

>>496262 It is now!

#24 · 104w, 14h ago · · ·

I heard it through BrawnyTheOne's adioreading of this.....anther resone not to drink and wright:trollestia::trollestia:

#25 · 104w, 14h ago · · ·

It’s taste is world renowned

Goodness. How did that get missed?

Good evening, good sir.

#26 · 104w, 14h ago · · ·

>>496360 Thank you for pointing that out. Much appreciated and fixed.

#27 · 104w, 13h ago · · ·

>>496385

it’s taste is world renowned

There's two of them, sir.

#28 · 104w, 13h ago · · ·

I read this before already, but it's one of those that can just be enjoyed over and over again. :rainbowlaugh:

(Note to self: try to get Twilight drunk in one of personal stories...)

#29 · 104w, 13h ago · · ·

Whee, drunken ponies!

#30 · 104w, 13h ago · 1 · ·

Oh man, this is too funny.:rainbowlaugh:

I gotta ask, is it possible for you to write some sort of sequel? Imagine having the entire Mane 6 get drunk, along with Luna, and have Celestia and Spike try to contain them and keep track of them.

What do ya think?

#31 · 104w, 13h ago · · ·

And now I need you to write a sequel were the princesses manage to get Twilight drunk because this fic was awseome :D:pinkiehappy:

#32 · 104w, 13h ago · · ·

AWESOME! This is my second favorite pony fanfic of all time, and probably your all-time best. I'm glad to see it finally made it here :yay:

#33 · 104w, 13h ago · · ·

Hahaha, I remember this story. Was good then, is great now! :twilightsmile:

#34 · 104w, 13h ago · · ·

Of all the things you've ever written, Pen Stroke, this is my favorite.

Watching Celestia flail around in a drunken rampage, all while Twilight tries desperately to find out just what happened to her mentor, is too hilarious for words.  The comedy is really what makes this so wonderful.  I also loved how you kept Equestria's prohibition consistent with the rest of the story.  Twilight has no idea what alcohol is, never expresses any understanding of any terms related to drunkenness, and actually tries to study the problem like she would in the show.

The ending is also hilarious.  A hangover is bad enough, but man, getting turned pink?  Too painful.

The only criticism I can offer is that I felt there should have been more Luna.  She is the one that sets the whole plot moving, after all.  If she hadn't made the moonshine, neither one would have gotten drunk.  It's just a shame she spends about half the fic either locked in the library or passed out.  I know this was written just before Luna Eclipsed, but I don't mind if she doesn't match perfectly.  Having both sisters hopped off their flanks around Ponyville would have been even better.

Still, I love it.  Thanks for posting it here. :pinkiehappy:

#35 · 104w, 13h ago · · ·

I remember this from dA! And loved every bit of it!

With your permission, would I be allowed to make a reference to it in a one-shot I'm writing? Otherwise I'll feel guilty that I didn't ask first...

Frostwyrm

#36 · 104w, 13h ago · · ·

That ending:unsuresweetie:

#37 · 104w, 13h ago · · ·

I remember this!  It was hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:

#38 · 104w, 12h ago · · ·

drunk ponies WOOOOOOOOOOO!:pinkiehappy:

seriously though, great story.

#39 · 104w, 12h ago · · ·

Drunk ponies:applejackunsure:...Drunk ponies?:ajbemused:...I think we know what I've been looking for.:ajsmug:I will now read it.:pinkiehappy:

#40 · 104w, 12h ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh::heart::trollestia: That is all XD.

#41 · 104w, 11h ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh::raritycry::twistnerd::yay::trollestia::pinkiecrazy:This was more win than I imagined. Featured in under three hours, congratulations. And now for the hangover from that drunken emoticon fun::pinkiesick::facehoof::fluttershyouch:

#42 · 104w, 11h ago · · ·

Oh my! I remember this one!

#43 · 104w, 11h ago · · ·

Reviewed your fic: Link

#44 · 104w, 10h ago · · ·

Oh I remember this. :rainbowkiss:

#45 · 104w, 10h ago · · ·

i read this again but in 10 minutes flat :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

#47 · 104w, 9h ago · · ·

Hello firstly i would like to inform you that i am not The Diabolic Gnome i am his younger brother anyway Gnome is currently running up the street drunk yelling something about Princess Luna when he finally sobers up i will get him to change this comment.

#48 · 104w, 8h ago · · ·

>>496262 It already is!  and dawn isn't for a few hours! lol!

A very nice comedic story with all the joys of watching drunks be... DRUNK!  And a thumb up for you!

#49 · 104w, 8h ago · · ·

I remember this:twilightsmile:

Its been a while since Ive been properly drunk or even had a hangover. I think its been since last May that I've been drunk.

I need to rectify that soon.:rainbowwild:

#50 · 104w, 8h ago · · ·

Need sequel badly

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