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  • T A Mug of Hard Cider

    Celestia's thirst for good alcohol leads her to a pair of new drinking buddies  · Pen Stroke
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  • E Trinkets

    In the aftermath of Past Sins, Twilight and Nyx go through the things from Nyx's castle bedchamber
    7,396 words · 28,097 views  ·  2,183  ·  28
  • E Winter Bells

    Can Nyx find acceptance with her extended family during Hearth's Warming, or will she find the holiday hymns are filled with nothing but hollow promises?
    95,683 words · 31,389 views  ·  3,092  ·  43
  • T A Mug of Hard Cider

    Celestia's thirst for good alcohol leads her to a pair of new drinking buddies
    12,451 words · 17,512 views  ·  1,758  ·  22
  • T Into The Depths

    Celestia must brave the depths of her old castle to save Twilight and Luna
    44,246 words · 14,070 views  ·  1,259  ·  19
  • E Better Living Through Science and Ponies

    Not all is well in Equestria when a failing portal gun brings Aperture Science to the land of ponies
    39,979 words · 44,694 views  ·  2,649  ·  49
  • E Bureaucracy is Magic

    Can Ponyville survive when our favorite six mares have to fill in for the mayor?
    14,347 words · 5,394 views  ·  545  ·  8
  • E Creeping Darkness

    Alan Wake must write a story where Twilight faces the Darkness of his world to save Equestria
    63,186 words · 6,565 views  ·  685  ·  12
  • E A Zebra in the Bed

    Applejack must give up her bed to an ill Zecora
    4,559 words · 6,251 views  ·  598  ·  10

Blog Posts101

  • 2w, 1d
    Life Pulse & Nevermind

    12 comments · 467 views
  • 8w, 3d
    Ice Bucket Challenge & Game Project Plug

    So, I was challenge by BronyWriter last evening, and so I had to squeeze this fun little bit of brain freeze in during my morning routine as I got ready for work.

    To reiterate from my video, I challenge Blankedmind, Gremlin Grenade, JustAnotherTimeLord, The Illustrious Q.

    The challenge to Kkat has been retracted. She isn't in a position where she can perform the challenge due to a lack of equipment & funds as well as her personal preferences about the internet.

    Also, on  side note, a project I contributed to is back on Kickstarter. Scott Easley's 3x3 Wildstyle Basketball, a mobile street basketball game. If you supported it last time, please go do so again. If you haven't, please go check it out.

    28 comments · 713 views
  • 11w, 5d
    Bronycon Day 2 Plan * Identifying Attire

    Day one was awesome. Met too many people to list off in these few minutes I have to write this. Today looks to be more awesome and my busiest con day since I have all three of my panels today. I'm wearing an Applejack shirt today and blue jeans. Hope to see you around. Best time to catch me is after my panels.

    - Do's and Dont's of Fanfiction - Hall of the Sun - 10:00 to 11:00 AM

    - Worlds Beyond: Crossovers in Fanfiction - Hall of Stars - 1:45 to 2:45 PM

    - Quills and Sofas Hangout - 3:00 - 4:00 PM

    - Shattered Kingdom Game - Hall of Stars - 5:30 to 6:30 PM

    2 comments · 323 views
  • 11w, 6d
    Bronycon Day 1 Plan & Identifying Attire

    So, since there are folks wanting to meet up with me today, here is a rough idea of where I'll be and when. Also, such a late start today. I slept in, but I had a reason. Work made me stay up all night Wednesday to put out a last minute fire.

    0) 12:00 Float around the convention, likely checking out vendor hall

    1) 2:00 - Vendor Hall Shadow Box booth. Someone ordered something Past Sins related and they wanted me to sign it.

    2) 3:00 - 4:00 - I'll chill out at the Quill's and Sofa's room for an hour. Probably the easiest time you'll have finding me.

    If your looking for me today, I'm wearing a gray plaid long sleeve shirt and blue jeans.

    Hope everyone has a wonderful time at Bronycon today and I hope to see several of you around.

    4 comments · 347 views
  • 12w, 5d
    Bronycon, Shattered Kingdoms, & A Plug for a New Past Sins Movie Project

    Bronycon looms just next week, and I look forward to the fact I once again get to attend this year. So I hope to see lots of friends and to meet anyone new. One person asked in e-mail if I'd be willing to sign his/her copy of Past Sins while I'm there. I'm totally cool with doing that for anyone that asks, just be sure to have a pen since there is no guarantee I'll remember to have one.

    As to Bronycon itself, I get to be on three panels this year. The last one I'll speak about in greater length, but the first two are writing panels. I'll be returning properly to the panel I kind of snuck onto last year, the Do's and Don't of Fanfiction. I'll also be on the Worlds Beyond: Crossovers in Fanfiction panel, both on Saturday. In fact, all three of my panels are on Saturday this year it would seem. It makes for a very interesting day.

    Now, as for the last panel, it is for a project I've been contributing to as a partial-writer as well as a story adviser. That project is "Shattered Kingdoms" and I'll be on the panel with several other members of the development team. Shattered Kingdoms is a game project that has been going on for several months now. The team lead, Gremlin Grenade, has a blog post from Fiesta Equestria last year that tells a lot more about the project then I can really fit into such a multi-purpose blogpost.

    Now not only is the development team having a panel this year, but there will be a live demo of the game available to play. I believe it will be in the Baltimare Arcade room, since it's the only electronic game room I'm aware of, but I'm sure Gremline Grenade will post up a blog soon with more information on what the demo will contain and verify where it can be played.

    Also, the team is looking for more writers to fill out its ranks and to ensure the story is as polished and properly complex as possible. So if you have any interest, drop Gremlin Grenade or come see us at our panel. The time and place are below, along with the time and place of my other two panels.

    - Do's and Dont's of Fanfiction - Hall of the Sun - 10:00 to 11:00 AM

    - Worlds Beyond: Crossovers in Fanfiction - Hall of Stars - 1:45 to 2:45 PM

    - Shattered Kingdom Game - Hall of Stars - 5:30 to 6:30 PM

    Again, I hope to see a lot of you there, and I'll see if I can't do something to make myself easily identifiable. (Besides the fact I basically wear the same outfits to every convention :P. Saturday I'll be sure to save my Applejack shirt and red, plaid short-sleeve button-down shirt.)

    And to wrap up this blog post, a commenter on Past Sins point out a new animation project that is starting to get underway. Someone new has begun a project to make Past Sins into an animated feature. It takes a lot of effort for someone to get far enough to even have a teaser trailer for something like this, so go give these guys some love and get hyped. (Especially because their design for Night Stone Castle looks pretty amazing!)

    TLDR version:

    - Going to Bronycon

    - I'm on three panels (check the list above for times and locations)

    - I'm a member of the Shattered Kingdom's dev team

    - We're having a panel and live demos at Bronycon

    - We're looking for writers, contact Gremlin Grenade.

    - Watch the video above for a Past Sins Movie Teaser Trailer, and give the creators some love.

    EDIT: To clarify some misconceptions in the comments, I am not doing the movie. Just giving a plug to the guys/gals who are.

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==Originally written Fall 2011== Equestria Daily Post==

After a long day of ruling Equestria, the Royal Sisters need a chance to unwind. Luna's solution is a few glasses of her once famous Moonshine, a drink distilled from moonlight. Celestia has been sober for a thousand years, but the temptation to have "just one" glass proves too great. Yet, when that one glass turns into several, it's Twilight who will have to deal with the princesses when they’re drunk off their flanks.

First Published
25th Apr 2012
Last Modified
25th Apr 2012
#1 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

I remember thissss! <3

#2 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

yay! this is here... :trollestia:

#3 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

OOOOO  I remember this... Time to read it again

#4 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

Damn, it's been so long since I've read this...

#5 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

*hiccup

#6 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

HEE HEE HEE!  All of my favs!  I love it!

#7 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

all i read was moonshine and i favorited

#8 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

Wait if this is here... that mean Past Sins maybe next! Huzzah! More great fics coming to FiMFiction!

Great story by the way, your drunk Celestia is hilarious and did well in keeping her right.

In the Name of Her Serene Majesty Celestia Everfree,

Celestia's Paladin: For Honor and Duty, For the Sun and Moon

Bri
#9 · 130w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

Maybe a sequel to where Twilight does get to try it?:twilightsheepish:

#10 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

I need more of this. :rainbowlaugh:

#11 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

This is amazing.

You are amazing.

Thank you.

#12 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

A quick and comedic romp, I loved it! :pinkiehappy::heart:

#13 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

Drunk Luna and Celestia are best Luna and Celestia. When they're happy of course.

#14 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

Gosh, I remember reading this on Fantiction.net, it was great! Too bad that website isn't too popular(And for good reason).

Glad to see it's now posted here so others can read it's spectacularness!

Auto Fav and Like initiated :pinkiehappy:

#15 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

All right! I'm so totally faving this!

#16 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

Yep I remember this and it was awesome. Rereading!

#17 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

I love it! Everything about is funny. As. $#@%. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

#18 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

Haha, it made me laugh at some parts. It didn't make me burst out laughing (not many things do), but overall a very nice story.

#20 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

I remember when I first read this.

I give it by dawn before it's in the featured box.

#21 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

79 - 0 oh my, jsut by the rank imma read this,

#22 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

This is one of the best pony fics I have ever read. There's too many good lines in it. Best Line: "Oh yeah? Well, Twilight, you’re... you’re purple"

Love it!

#23 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

>>496262 It is now!

#24 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

I heard it through BrawnyTheOne's adioreading of this.....anther resone not to drink and wright:trollestia::trollestia:

#25 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

It’s taste is world renowned

Goodness. How did that get missed?

Good evening, good sir.

#26 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

>>496360 Thank you for pointing that out. Much appreciated and fixed.

#27 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

>>496385

it’s taste is world renowned

There's two of them, sir.

#28 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

I read this before already, but it's one of those that can just be enjoyed over and over again. :rainbowlaugh:

(Note to self: try to get Twilight drunk in one of personal stories...)

#29 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

Whee, drunken ponies!

#30 · 130w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

Oh man, this is too funny.:rainbowlaugh:

I gotta ask, is it possible for you to write some sort of sequel? Imagine having the entire Mane 6 get drunk, along with Luna, and have Celestia and Spike try to contain them and keep track of them.

What do ya think?

#31 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

And now I need you to write a sequel were the princesses manage to get Twilight drunk because this fic was awseome :D:pinkiehappy:

#32 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

AWESOME! This is my second favorite pony fanfic of all time, and probably your all-time best. I'm glad to see it finally made it here :yay:

#33 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

Hahaha, I remember this story. Was good then, is great now! :twilightsmile:

#34 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

Of all the things you've ever written, Pen Stroke, this is my favorite.

Watching Celestia flail around in a drunken rampage, all while Twilight tries desperately to find out just what happened to her mentor, is too hilarious for words.  The comedy is really what makes this so wonderful.  I also loved how you kept Equestria's prohibition consistent with the rest of the story.  Twilight has no idea what alcohol is, never expresses any understanding of any terms related to drunkenness, and actually tries to study the problem like she would in the show.

The ending is also hilarious.  A hangover is bad enough, but man, getting turned pink?  Too painful.

The only criticism I can offer is that I felt there should have been more Luna.  She is the one that sets the whole plot moving, after all.  If she hadn't made the moonshine, neither one would have gotten drunk.  It's just a shame she spends about half the fic either locked in the library or passed out.  I know this was written just before Luna Eclipsed, but I don't mind if she doesn't match perfectly.  Having both sisters hopped off their flanks around Ponyville would have been even better.

Still, I love it.  Thanks for posting it here. :pinkiehappy:

#35 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

I remember this from dA! And loved every bit of it!

With your permission, would I be allowed to make a reference to it in a one-shot I'm writing? Otherwise I'll feel guilty that I didn't ask first...

Frostwyrm

#36 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

That ending:unsuresweetie:

#37 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

I remember this!  It was hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:

#38 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

drunk ponies WOOOOOOOOOOO!:pinkiehappy:

seriously though, great story.

#39 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

Drunk ponies:applejackunsure:...Drunk ponies?:ajbemused:...I think we know what I've been looking for.:ajsmug:I will now read it.:pinkiehappy:

#40 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh::heart::trollestia: That is all XD.

#41 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh::raritycry::twistnerd::yay::trollestia::pinkiecrazy:This was more win than I imagined. Featured in under three hours, congratulations. And now for the hangover from that drunken emoticon fun::pinkiesick::facehoof::fluttershyouch:

#42 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

Oh my! I remember this one!

#43 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

Reviewed your fic: Link

#44 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

Oh I remember this. :rainbowkiss:

#45 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

i read this again but in 10 minutes flat :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

#47 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

Hello firstly i would like to inform you that i am not The Diabolic Gnome i am his younger brother anyway Gnome is currently running up the street drunk yelling something about Princess Luna when he finally sobers up i will get him to change this comment.

#48 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

>>496262 It already is!  and dawn isn't for a few hours! lol!

A very nice comedic story with all the joys of watching drunks be... DRUNK!  And a thumb up for you!

#49 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

I remember this:twilightsmile:

Its been a while since Ive been properly drunk or even had a hangover. I think its been since last May that I've been drunk.

I need to rectify that soon.:rainbowwild:

#50 · 130w, 1d ago · · ·

Need sequel badly

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