Take it down, please! Its not your story! Wait... *looks at autors name* My lord!

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FUCK YA PORTAL

Read this on EQD. Excellent work!

Ah, the very first FiMfic I ever read. I daresay it's the one that got me addicted to the fandom in the first place. Lovely to read it again.

-Tricondon

Yay now I can think with portals and ponies!

Ok time to read this again. God, I loved this the first time it was published.

The amount of Internet win that comes from this fic can be described with one word: WIN.

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AND A MILLION MORE TIMES

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This is my FAVORITE FANIC EVER.

... And now its on FIMFICTION?!  

FINALLY I CAN EXPRESS HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS MASTERPEICE!!!!!!

YUS! One of the best fanfics out there is now on Fimfic! AWESOME! And RIGHT when I wanted to reread it, too! Thanks! Hope everything's going great with you and Batty! /]

~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria

OMG Penstroke is now on Fimfiction.

FANGASM

Oh hey, this finally made it on here. I might just have to re-read it now

AH LOVE THIS STORY!

Penstroke, you might want to include the argument/fight between Celestia and GLaDoS.

Oh hey look! I love this one! What a great excuse to reread it!

By the way, the cover art is awesome. I don't remember seeing it the first time around, even though I read it at least four or five months after it was published (I think). So I guess it's new for FiMfic?

OH YEAH! Read this on EQD!

ITS TIME TO SPIN THIS SHIT ON OVER TO FIMFICTION

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This.

Is.

Awesome.

Oh lord it's the first fimfic I ever read

  I still love it

it's here! read it all the time on DA.  why did it take you so long to make it here?

wow, my first fanfic is finally on my fimfiction...

yay~

*le sees new stories*

*looks at authors*

*sees pen stroke is here*

*le insta read all stories for the 4d time*

and still havent had enough of the good stuff

ೋೈಾೇದಸಾ ಹಸಸಸ, ಸಬ ಮದಸಸಾಲೂೇ ೋೀಾ ಗಲ ೇದಸಾ ೈಾಗೀ್ ೋೀೋವಗಮ... ಘ ುಹಾೇೇ ಗಟಸ ಸಹೂಾ ತಗಕಾ ಮಪಾತತ... ಗತತ ರಹೇೂ ಾಂಜತೋಗಲ ಗೂ ೈಗೂಪ ಾಸದೂಾೇ ೂಪಾಲ ಗ ುಹಾೇೇ.. ಪಾೀ ುುದಾೇಛ

ಓಸೋೆಗಲು, ೋ ತಗೂೂಾ ಮಪಾಾಾೇಬ, ವಹೂ ೋಸೋೆಗಲು

This? Here?

There are not enough words in any language to describe this story's sheer win.

This is a pretty.... SUPER AMAZA-AWESOME STORY!

Everything about it; Astronomically epic win.

And it should totally be a mod for Portal, or a model pack for Gmod. Actually, both. 100% yes.

This story was very well-done, I especially liked the added challenge of GLaDOS being given a "body" to use in a true boss fight (and just like a true boss fight, the friend you brought along was almost useless!).

Very well written, staying a fave here.

Look, i know we both said things you're going to regret, but i think we can put our diffrences behind us. For science. YOU. MONSTER.

you got GLaDOS spot on... its so... maniacal. manically funny, but maniacal.

Thank you for coming up here! You don't know how much this made my day! If it wasn't 11:06 I would be screaming like a filly in my room! You are a god among writers!

Prepare yourselves, the portal jokes are coming... THE CAKE IS STILL A LIE!!!!!!

Ok, im done with the cake jokes, for now... Anyway, are we going to see wheatley and the space core?

Why is this fanfic the first fanfic ever to everypony (including me)? BECAUSE ITS AWESOME!!

awsome

First

I really hope wheatley retuns

Double first!

Oh GLaDoS, you are so mean, but it is soooooooo funny!

Also... Triple first

YES! The great Pen Stroke returns!!

Where is the credits song? There must be one somewhere

Ah, heh, now I'm wondering if you did this just because I suggested that you should... I'll assume not.

First! I like being annoying

>>495009495009

me too!

....wait, are you me?!

but in all seriousness, this was the first fan fic I read for the story (rather than "so bad, I cant't turn away from this horribly funny train-wreck), it's what made me seek more pony fics.

So thanks Pen stroke!

I see now why Gabe Newell admitted to enjoying ponies--he must have discovered this fic at some point.

This is easily one of, if not THE, best FiM crossover ever written.

>>495451495451

Just when I thought my favourite .gif could not be any more perfect, you post THIS.

Have an internet, my friend

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Oh wow, so much positive review, I feel I must read now (why did I join the herd  ).

I now have a reason to set to my "Top 5 Stories* list.

Granted, it'll look rather sparse until Creeping Darkness and Past Sins gets posted, but still.

>>495009495009 this is the first i read but it did not get me into the fan base R U MEH CLONE?

This was my first ever fan-fic :D

10/5

Great read

A Wild Pen Stroke Has Appeared!

>  Attack

>  Run

> [Hug]

I love this story, and Joe England's addition to it. Nice to see it here :D

Portals on Chell's flanks? That sounds dangerous for a sword fighter if he or she was to stab through the portal! Or at least lucky for Chell!

Oh wow. One of the first fics I read. That was SO LONG ago!

This is one of the few fics I've gone all the way through when it was on GDocs. TOTALLY favoriteing!

first!

Lol Sarcastic glados is Sarcastic

Finally! WOOOOO

Its cool that you're (finally) uploading your stories here Pen.  Its bad because now I HAVE TO REREAD THEM ALL! Wait on Past Sins plox I got finals coming up.

love the pic

Death to Portal, no really, I hate it to death.

I can't wait for the next story: GLados vs Discord.

The two have so much in common.

Why do people always asume Chell was in stasis for decades??? She was in it forcenturies!!!!! The legal of decay and plant growth present in portal 2 could have only happened after centries of decay.

"If this was what freedom was like, she’d rather die than go back to the Enrichment Center."

TEMPTING FATE THERE AREN'CHA CHELL

*Leval. Not legal derp

Heh, this fanfic of a fanfic was very entertaining. Well done, Trollestia.

>>495009495009

Oh Luna you too? I've never actually played portal for myself, but I've seen various Let's Plays. This fic is great. Might just reread it.

How did Chell get off the top of the mile + tall facility?  Just jumping off would have surely raised some questions.  

Artificial tofu?   Now i've seen everything.

>>497705497705 long fall boots, silly filly

>>497649497649 Its level.

Man, I read this and was like "O shit no wai!?" Loved this story. You get my thumb good sir.

SPAAAAAAAAAACEEEEEEE

the fanfic that got me into fanfics arrives here!?

AWWWWW   YEAAAAAAAH!

this looks somewhat EPIC. One shall read this later.

HAHAHAHAHAHA

Go Celesita go! Its so awesome to see Glados OWNED verbally!

Trollestia at her finest.

Aw yiss, one of my absolute favourite fics!  Makes me all nostalgic for some reason.

God, I don't think I would be able to hold up as well as they are. GlaDOS knows EXACTLY what will hurt the most and is using it against them... that's just sick, twisted and evil. I approve

YOU FINALLY MENTIONED DR. WHOOVES!!!! I thought he would come in with the T.A.R.D.I.S. and crash on GLaDOS' pony body and kill her and he would come out and say, "This isn't Platform 5! Well this just won't do!" and teleport away.

I love this. Favorite, thumbed, watched, and LOVED. Thank you for being epic. I love Portal, and Ponies, and you just made my dreams come true. I love you.

Second! Rereading this during Psych class FTW!

Dun dun dun...

Beast

I don't quite agree with how GLaDOS fell into the issue of being called "fat".  Considering she sees herself as a machine, and machines really can't be "fat".  They can be bulky or big, that is not their fault, but more the fault of the designers and engineers.  Machines gain their elegance from function, not form (though when both work together you get something great).  

As for Chell, sure she can talk at the end, but how will she ever be able to use her talent ever again?  It is like Twilight without her magic, Rainbow without her wings, Applebloom without her... wait, she doesn't have anything, HA, poor "blank flank", forever forced to continue getting covered in tree sap.  

My first FiMfic, back when i was on a Portal spree and WAY before I truly go into MLP:FiM. Will just have to re-read.

Which, btw, is rare, if never seen.

>>497742497742

But how did that not raise any questions?  I would think Fluttershy would still be flustered after watching a pony fall for a few miles.

>>497219497219

Of course not. You are my clone. I've been looking for you. Now, get back here. I need your healthy liver. (+15 nerd points if you get the reference)

>>496911496911

Close; I'm the other half of your split-personality. Nice to finally meet you.

-Tricondon

Awesomesauce.

'nuff said.

>>498129498129

good point.

Honestly, I would LOVE to be stuck with her for an hour, if only so I could learn what I'm really afraid of...

>>497848497848 SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WANA GO WANA GO TO SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>>498176498176 I AM THE BEST AT SPACE... Reclaimer.

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>>498183498183 False. I am the best at space.

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>>498192498192 FALSE. I will say it again, Reclaimer. I AM THE BEST AT SPACE

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Mabye so, but I am space police.

>>498124498124 I'd be pissed if I were her, think about it. She just got called a bulky machine, in my mind she views herself as an elegant streamlines machine of perfection. it's like a laptop being called a desktop. It's a smaller lighter machine that can do it's job just as well as it's bulkier cousin. You're more likely to call a laptop a sexy machine then a server cluster.

But I think she would have defended herself by saying that the most advanced intelligence in the world requires size... She's still smaller then Watson.

SECOND!

/shot

It's so much fun rereading this!

i can't believe there are at least ten down votes for this fic. They don't know a Pen Stroke when they see one...

HUZZAH! A most glorious ending!

"What do I do if GlaDos goes rogue" Hahahhaha brilliant!