Oh my, this looks like it has great potential. Tracking, can't wait to see some more.

An interesting start and premise. Kinda makes sense that she'd be the one to undertake a quest like that.

nopony likes being left behind. tracked and thumb.

Tracking device...ACTIVATED!>:D

Trixie demands more. NOW.

Oh Twilight. You stupid, silly pony. You're going to regret this, and you're going to end up over your head, just in time for your friends to pull a Big-Damn-Heroes-style rescue.

Looks promising thus far. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.

tracking lets hope that you release chapter 1 soon :D

Shape shifter spell?

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oooooh, this sounds like it has potencial. i look forward to more of this!

I expect adventures of epic proportions and edge of your seat moments!  Make it so!  Nah, jk what ever you want to do is fine.   Like the story so far!

good chapter considering its a filler. my hope is that twi will learn that she is being followed and thus try to shake them of as she doesnt want them to come with her as they will just keep trying to get her to change her mind; creating a sort of drawn out cat and mouse game. i would also like to know what the princesses think about this, especially celestia.

lastly! i want more!

I wouldn't be surprised if Celestia was beating herself up with guilt over this.  She dismissed Twilight's fears along with everypony else.  So much for "I trust you, completely."  If Chrysalis had killed Twilight instead of imprisoning her all would have been lost.  Now Twilight has taken upon herself a quest of extreme danger to make up for her failings.