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You fall onto one knee, holding out the rose. “Fluttershy, light of my life! Though we’ve never met, I feel like I know your every beautiful thought, your every feeling! The walls of my bedroom are covered in printouts of you! It’s all been for you Fluttershy, this crazy pony journey, all for you!”
Fluttershy looks at the rose, and then tilts her head as she looks into your eyes. “Um, no.” she replies softly.
“Um, yes!” you counter with, waggling your eyebrows. “C’mon darling, don’t fight it! You’re mine now, it’s your destiny!” Fluttershy just gazes back at you.
Too late, you realise she has used The Stare. Your vision swims as you feel the tendrils of her mental powers curling around your brain. “N-nuh!” you mouth, but soon you lose even the power of speech itself.
Fluttershy turns and walks out of the house. You find yourself unable to resist following her in a stupor, stumbling along without a will of your own. She finally stops in a forest clearing and points at a pile of leaves. “These need tidying up!” she snaps. “And once you’ve done that, you can make sure all the bird nests have pillows in them!”
You nod jerkily as you fall to your knees, your mind now completely taken over by Fluttershy’s mental powers, grabbing armfuls of leaves and piling them up. It is backbreaking work, but it is for Fluttershy so you don’t mind.
Which is good, because Fluttershy has a lot of jobs for you to do.
BAD END
(Or GOOD END if you really really like Fluttershy)
Comments ( 50 )
BLARGHHHHH BAD END 3 TIMES IN A ROW. Though this was amazingly fun. you've got a new watcher.
So, everybody, what have we learned?
1. Fluttershy can control minds.
2. She is still really cute.
3. Seducing ponies USUALLY LEAD TO BAD ENDING.
I wanted to say hello. Ended up as a slave.
I don't think I like fluttershy anymore.
Everything starts off fine when you begin dating, but boy! Do they turn into real slave-drivers eventually. ![]()
I dunno, I will love to be forever with Fluttershy but my politic of free-man-no-slavery counters this. Curse you human asshole
DAAAAAAAARN IT! Twice, Lost when suducing fluttershy pillow, now this! ...... Still worth it! Loving this so far man! Brilliant idea!
Next time, I don't tuck into the feast. Asking for bacon? REALLY Bad idea...
... So... Is this a death or not, because I like Flutters, but not QUITE that much, but it would be okay, so...
So, that kinda broke the story, seeing as there were no options. ![]()
Please tell me that there is a way to just say hi? Maybe kick Angel for slapping Fluttershy like a wife beater a few episodes back?
(You're making me
a lot.)
Worth it. Though I am not....sexually attracted to ponies! but if I was I would prefer Rarity over Fluttershy ![]()
Nooooooooooo, THIS WORK IS TERRIBLE! Working with animals... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Not sure if gusta... ![]()
Dare to be Different, Carpe Diem, and Live Life to the Fullest! /)(\
I don't consider this a good or a bad ending. But I do consider this a fitting ending, given how insane this guy is. ![]()
good job! i ended with the fluttershy ending. that certainly brightened up my day!
Thank god it's over! *Presses back until I'm back in Ponyville*
Now then... Let's go meet some more ponies!
I knew this would happen. I'm glad she did the right thing. Good thing I used one of my clones! He can be bossed by Fluttershy and like it forever.![]()
At least, I think I sent a clone...![]()







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