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“This is my destiny, Twilight!” You hold the sphere above your head as you make your way to the door. “I must go to Canterlot immediately and give this back to the princess!”
You run out of the library, the precious cargo of the Time Sphere tucked under your arm as Twilight eagerly runs after you. Panting and out of breath, you almost collapse, but Twilight picks you up. “Come on!” she cries. “We’ve only gone three metres! Hop on my back!”
You agree to this, and leap onto Twilight’s back. She’s a small stubby pony, and you are pretty heavy, so she sinks to the ground with a grunt, struggling to stand. “Hi ho Twilight!” you cry, tugging on her mane as she slowly starts to trot in the direction of Canterlot.
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After a long and slow journey, you finally arrive at Canterlot Castle. “We’ve made it!” Twilight croaks, finally collapsing to the flagstones. You give a cry of surprise as your ride falls, and you bump your behind.
“Careful Twilight!” you tut grouchily as you are forced to stand up, cradling the Time Sphere carefully. “We’re not even at the throne room yet, stop being lazy!” Twilight has passed out though, and despite many carefully administered kicks, she doesn’t seem to want to get up.
You leave Twilight to recuperate on the floor and storm your way to Celestia. “Princess!” you cry in triumph as you burst into the throne room, holding the Time Sphere aloft. “Fret no longer, for I bring you the Time Orb!”
Celestia takes one look at the object in your hand and frowns. “That’s not a Time Orb!” she snaps. “That’s a Time Sphere! Anypony can see that!”
Your face falls and you drop the Time Sphere onto the ground in shame. “Oh.”
What will you do?
Explore the castle to look for clues
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For the love of... this guy is a complete imbecile!
>mfw people aren't taking this story as the joke it is
I was happy at first about the idea of a choose your own adventure for MLP. Instead it is another stupid clopfic. I don't know how this got featured on eqd. I mean one or two options I could see but nearly every turn something about seducing a pony and when you get to Fluttershy you have no choice. It was also poorly written. You get some points for making a choose your own adventure but it ends up being a 1/5 because of the poor writing and constant clopping.
>>510630 >>511879 It's semantics. Semantics are very important to magic, as saying the wrong thing will get you the wrong thing. Maybe the Time Orb and the Time Sphere have different magical properties, but they're both 3D circles. We can't call them both the Time Orb, because then we could get confused over which we're talking about. So, we have the Time Sphere, but no one ever told us there were two circles, and we're idiots, so we tried to give that one instead. In the process, we managed to torture my favorite pony for absolutely no reason. I'm going to go look for more ways to kill myself, now.
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First off, I would never do such a thing to Twilie! Secondly, an orb IS a sphere!
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I MUST NOT BE KICKING HARD ENOUGH!
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