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Ugly-Duckling123


I'm a girl living in Ashley, New Milton. Loved mlp ever since it started showing and got to learn about these fanfic in October 2013. (Also I have dyslexia, so if I make mistakes sorry)

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Since it's my birthday, this is just something I've thrown together using a few 'Ugly Duckling's' for idea's

Basically one day Fluttershy finds a baby Pegasus and adopts her as her own.
And because of her little wings, that baby Pegasus gets laughed at by her class mates. But working with her friend Rainbow Dash, they work on getting their wings stronger and helped each other to fly.
Then one day, the baby Pegasus finds her real family...

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Not too bad. There are a few issues which I can point out if you want, but overall, it isn't a bad piece of work at all. Also, happy birthday/belated birthday if it's past your birthday.

This feels like it needs some kind of sequel.
Great story, though.

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