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Every kid had nightmares growing up. So what happens when your childhood monster comes back? Rainbow Dash has to deal with the growing relationship with her new girlfriend, the drama surrounding her adopted little sister, and now... A monster with only two legs? Fallow Rainbow and her friends as they have a spring break vacation none of them will ever forget.

Teen tag for cursing, sexual references, and mild violence.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 11 )

You've caught my interest. A lot of good stories have started out as dreams. There are a few mistakes that I caught like missing words or where the wrong word is used such as ideal being used instead of idol. Other than that this is off to a good start i look forward to seeing more.

5155959 I'm glad I caught your interest! Sorry about the mistakes, I'll be sure to fix that.

5156240 Thank you! I can't say for sure when the next chapter will be up, but I'm glad you enjoy it! How does the whole editor thing work?

5159108 Well ok, but how do you want me to send it? Like, through email or something?

5160518 Awesome, once I'm done with the next chapter I'll send it your way.

I was under the impression that the monster was human? So if the characters are human, what is the prevalence with the monster being two legged? Well, I'll follow anyway.

5353300 I will say that the monster is not human, but I see why you would think that. As more chapters come, slowly but surely, it will all make sense.

This is really good, when will the next chapter be out?

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