Commissioned by TheMusicalBoy93
Tell me you've heard this story before? An awkward pony who doesn't have many friends happens to have a crush on the one pony, who is shy herself, that has been kind to her for a long time while others are always indifferent or mean.
Kind of seems like a cliche story, huh? Well, hopefully I can make this story a happy ending and never be alone again. If I don't anger Rainbow Dash that is.
Edited by Corpulent Brony
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Chapters (1)
Most adorable pony + 2nd most adorable pony?! THIS IS MADNESS! YOU'LL KILL US ALL!!!!
*alone again (in description)
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thanks
5156216 No worries.
It's weird. I've read everything you've put out, yet I'm not following you...
Well, fixed that!
5156190 Which one's which?
Definitely Feature Box worthy. MUCH more worthy of attention than a good number of the fics I see there.
Derpy is a good mare, and she deserves good friends.
I have to admit, I wanted to punch RD at one point.
This is just another example of the excellent works that you produce. Outstanding job, my friend.
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5156461 LMAO!!!
My brain was just fried with cuteness
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I completely agree with your statement.
That line had me cracking up. Could totally see it happening to.
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The problem is that RD is pretty much Kim Possible with a rainbow-coloured mane: she can't see past surface impressions or through psychological defense mechanisms. This means that she tends to get effect and intention mixed up and makes an ugly fool of herself.
that was actually pretty nice and i think i would like a longer story about that pairing. that is one of only a few One-shot´s i really like.
Maybe Derpy being a poor Mare and my favourite main six Pony Fluttershy were crucial, but hmmm yes for the moment it is going into my top favourite folder.
This sounds nothing like the ponies I know and love. Just, plan heartless at times.
This was such a nice sequel to derpy's life in cloudsdale
Oh wait, this is a different dimension.
Dash was pretty harsh but I'm glad she made things right with Derpy.
Angel Bunny's a jerk!
Overall, a very good story!
good thing you apologized RD, cause if you didn't, i'm going to open up portal that will give you a one way trip to the most torturing cage in tartarus
and watch, happily, as you keep begging for mercy
hi hi hi hi (maniacle laughter)
... i think i'm going crazy again... sigh...
... aw well, all is fair in war and love
why is there only 100 likes?
there should be 10,000 likes
I was kinda hoping Carrot Top would get some kind of commupence but still good all the same.
Kind of sad that Derpy is treated as a walking disaster in this story. Glad about the romance though.