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Twilight has been sent by Nightmare Moon to her sister Celestia. She thinks she's about to be lectured because Twilight ended up going into a restricted area. But when Celestia traps Twilight in her bed chambers, she quickly realises that a simple talk to is not what Celestia has planned.
What can I say that I haven't already? You did a fabulous job with this. I would've thought that if someone made something like this I'd be disgusted. Quite to contrary. You handled this beautifully, and captured the spirit of the story and characters too. Well done, Leon. Well done.
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Ah Alternate Universe fics *rubs hands together* Okay let's see... in that universe I'd be Stormtrooperkev. The writer bent on creating fics simply to shock and I have a goatee.
And he'd say weird things like this.
"Oh now this is a fic I can get behind... though I do get behind many things hahaha!"
Alternate Universe me is kind of weird. Anyhow, well written, a few grammar problems, and it's good :)
That means a lot to me coming from the original author of True Colors. Thanks again for the thumbs up when I decided to go public with this story piece. And all your work with the pre-read. 
If you don't like Celestia being evil there is a cure for that… Watch the original show! 
And do check out the original story of True Colors! It's very different place from the Equestria we all know.
Well this is an offshoot from True Colors so the sequel is going back to True Colors.
And thank everypony for your support! I'm very happy to receive it seeing as this is my first fic! Thank you!
I would say you made it good enough that its understandable without reading True Colors, but it is in my read later list.
Love dark fics as long as its not just gore for the shock effect and such. (can be dark without gore like here, i know)
And while your free to stop reading whenever you want, i tend to stick to a story that i liked enough, even if it starts sucking badly later, probably hope that it will get better eventually or that the ending will redeem it. I dont like quitting what i started reading something. >.<
but i do eventually drop it if i really cant like it anymore.
>>492628 Well, I'll admit my portrayal of Celestia in True Colors is not very good until the most recent two chapters. Actually, Leon here gives a better reason for Twilight's rape than I did. However, my portrayal of an evil Celestia is getting better, and the rest of the story is not bad in my opinion. I would say more, but as I'm the author of True Colors I'm not an entirely believable source when it comes to how good my story is, am I? I also don't like to toot my own horn either. Still, I hope that when you read it you do enjoy it.
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Why thank you, good to know that story is understandable even if you just trip over it before you read True Colors.
And I'm the same as you when it comes to paperback books. Can't stop reading even if they're not up to par. I'm reading three books IRL right now. City of dragons by Robin Hobb, The great book of Amber by Roger Zelazny and Anansi Boys by Neil Gaiman. These three I highly recommend to anybody. And then there is Renegades Magic, the book I'm reading when I have nothing else to do. Mostly because… Well I've already read half of it so why not???
Hi again Echos! Just thought I'd but in on your comment here to DoctorWhooves. The big question that prompted me to write this was why Celestia did what she did. As I saw it Celestia had nothing to gain by doing what she did. That's when it hit me. Celestia could probably have anyone or anything she wanted. Most ponies would probably throw themselves at her. There was only one little purple mare that didn't like the way she looked at her. And even worse in her opinion, she seem to like someone else more. Since Celestia grown accustomed to having everything she wants, and then find herself alone with Twilight. She ends up doing something well... not so good…
Ah poor Twi. The third best pony can't be raped by Tia! It just isn't right!
Although it was pretty hot.
Wait does that make me weird?
What about the fact that I called ponys hot?
Or that I...... Never mind it would take me too long to list even 1/32 the things wrong with me.
So yeah... Great story! Watched and faved.
Now back to echo's story!
A fanfiction of a fanfiction, very meta. Your writing was very excellent and I have incorporated this into my mind-canon for true colors. It has really added something to my readings of how Twilight reacts later on. The line "...she was looking downright anemic." is completely stuck in my head because of you. Just the way it is said so flippantly just increases the indignity of what happened to Twi. Huzzah to you and write on! 
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Echos told me about this, in fact 
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