Hurray sequels. Two hammy villains for the price of one, this gonna be good.

Charger?  With the coloring and ram's head cutie mark I thought it was Ramulus?

more please

>>499553499553

It's a pun.  Figure it out.

>>499809499809

I got the pun. It's just that Ramulus is my favorite transformer of all the series. I almost had a fangasm when you described him.

Favoriting, simply for the presence of Transformers.

There's only one comment that needs to be said here.

Image: http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c234/Incisivis/Blog%20Post%20Images/olympians_bwmegatron.png

Yessssss

>>500179500179

Ditto.

Whoa. Hold on. Wait a minute. So this isn't the original Megatron who has a T-Rex for an alt-mode at the beginning of the Beast Wars saga? He's the upgraded version after his Transmetal form, isn't he?

>>522620522620

Nope, 100% Original.

I hope the Maximmals will be involved in this! There's already Dinobot, but I'd like to see the rest.

The Maximmals could be the Equestria division of Autobots!

>>523092523092

So from Queen Chrysalis's point of view, the T-Rex head that's on original Beast Wars Megatron's arm looks like a dragon's head to her since she doesn't know what a T-Rex is. Wow, you really threw me for a loop on that one.

I'm not up on my Transformers lore, how long can an autobot live? Much less a human hybrid of one?

Alicorn Twilight-John and BW Megatron-Chrysalis shipping?!?  Normally I'd quit following this fic right now, but since this is one of, if not, the best series I've read, I'll let it slide.

@ warpd: Primes are basically immortal since they can only be killed by another Prime or one of the brothers (Primus and Unicron).

Lulz. "Think of what their children would look like!

Autobots can live close to forever w/ proper maintenance. Human/autobot hybrid? Half of forever?

>>529965529965

Thanks for filling me in. It is an odd pairing, but the story is still enjoyable so far.

Those kids though...that might be a really dangerous hybrid. If it works at all.

>>529965529965

Believe me, I was hemming and hawing on the first one myself.  As for the second one, let's face it, it's a Chrysalis fic, shipping's required.

>>529973529973

o.o Excuse me. *fetches the bleach. Lays head against table, right ear pointed up. Pours bleach into ear. Caps ear, shakes head vigorously* x_x WHY ISN'T IT WORKING???

Damn, dude. Just, damn.

The Twilight/John shipping tease.

The story's good so far, and the shipping between Gyvon & Twilight and Chrysalis & Megatron should be interesting. Still, I would love it if the Autobots could create their own Maximals to help even the odds with the Preds. But even if that's never the case, I still find it interesting. =3

Keep up the good work. =3

>>535342535342 that's what the children will look like silly!

Hahaha Luna with shipping goggles on lol. Gyvon is already a triple Changer (human, robot, jet), he should try to add a fourth mode (pony!) to it :p.

Now go and ship Dinobot with Fluttershy

>>545835545835

Sorry man, I;ve already got two ships, and I only planned on one going into this story.

>>545880545880 I wasn't being serious anyway I was just trying to think up a crazy pairing involving Dinobot.

If you're planning on having a theme for John & Twilight, and judging the direction this story is going, may I make a suggestion?

Would've had this one up earlier if my internet hadn't acted up.

And here comes Unicron.

I'm guessing that Megs and Chrysalis will find the other Golden Disc?

Ponies driving cars...sure why not. DO NOT GIVE PINKIE ONE!

>>564253564253

Considering the other one's the Voyager Disc and Voyager's currently barely past the Sol System's Oort cloud, I doubt it.

Not surprised that Unicorn would show up.

By the way, you should use "Love For Ever" by M.C.R. for an opening theme.- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nPYLT9qzVFs

Oh geez... this ain't good.

Will Shining Armor and Cadence get to meet the OTHER royal couple? You know, the boring british one

Here we go!

I was wondering if everypony's favorite insane ant, Inferno is gonna be in this fic?

These chapters are too small, I want more.

yay new chapter cant wait for the next one

>>606744606744

I actually planned for this chapter to be longer, but since I can't guarantee an update next week,  I decided to find a good stopping point (where it is now).  if I weren't already behind schedule (I wanted this chapter up Tuesday, but other things distracted me from writing), this chapter could've easilly been over 5k words.

>>606884606884 I'm just being selfish really. Still nice chapter.

So, who else caught the line from 'Toy Story'?

yay life lessons cant wait for the next chapter

Immortal life is lonely without any other immortals around. Pesky mortals and their need to die.

Don't you mean four friends? Twilight, Celestia, Luna, and Dinobot.

>>671817671817

Dinobot aint a friend, he's just an aquaintance.  Before anyone brings up Cadence, they've only just met.

Short but sweet! Nice chapter!

>>672973672973 Ya need to fix that man! Dinobot and John need to spend more time together so they can become buds! Though doesn't he have any other Autobots he can call friend?

Haven't checked in on the Preds in a while.  Also threw in a little action.

Chrysalis' new form based on Airachnid from Transformers Prime.

I come back watching E3 and find that this has updated!  

Want more you tease. I was wondering what they were up to.

>>695191695191 Nice choice! Can Chrysalis fly in her new form?

>>698401698401

Yes, actually.  I missed something in the description.  Fix'd now.

O... K....

That red part takes place "within" John?

If so then is this going where I think it's going? What with 2 specific "Local Life-forms" being present at the scene.

Oh well... Will read regardless.

Keep up the good work!

holy shit, Johns scanning a pony

>>732184732184 Well, with Twilight and Celestia being the closest ones...

Well that's just Prime. You couldn't leave well enough alone, could you Gyvon.

He's already a Prime, slag it all. Now you Maximize him as well?

;)

Ooooh, the Vok are here.

Hope they don't turn the moon into a Planet Buster, Luna would be heartbroken.

OMG, Male Alicorn form initializing.Someone is about to become a triple-changer.

>>732634732634

He was already a triple-changer.  He's losing a form here.

His poor precious fingers. All gone. Everypony is having a weird day.

>>732645732645

OUCH.

I knew you would find a way to get the mysterious third faction from Beast Wars into this.

I have two questions:

1. Is the moon a planet buster?

2. When will the Tripendectus Council show up?

>>733113733113

1) No, this chapter is pretty much a setup for the next story in this series, "Mystery of the Vok" (working title; and yes, I am confirming a third instalment.)  The Vok are gonna be a little different than their BW incarnation.

2) Dunno.

>>732231732231

*M. Bison Face* YES! ...YES!!

Oh CRAP! The Vok! And Alicorn Gyvon woot!

Also, Dinobot complaining about a vermin?! Who could that be?

>>732915732915 he'll still have a robot mode for those.

>>737223737223

Please let it be Raptrap! =3

When I read the title, I already knew The Vok would be involved. Not surprised there.

John ganging a maximal form...didn't see that coming.

Can't wait for the next chapter, as well as "Mystery of the Vok."

Keep up the good work.

>>740705740705

Raptrap

Fo' shizzle.

>>732645732645

Which form? his robot mode? or his human mode? Either way, not fair!

I hope in the future he figures out a way to regain his lost form, and add it back in as a fourth mode.

>>740709740709 speaking of title... 'Mystery of the Vok' doesn't sound very... Vok-ish of a story :p Shouldn't it be 'Origin of the Vok' to keep the 'OV' theme going??

Yippeee!!!!! Alicorn fun.

Love the book title!

Oh, and I wonder how much of John's DNA has changed. I mean in regards to that little statement about children. Genetics is tough stuff and his DNA must be far enough from Twi's for this to work. Wait, what? What did I just wrote???

Whatever...

Keep up the good work!

lost his jet mode? NNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

ha ha! love the chapter, especially the reference to "So, You've Grown Wings"! My younger sisters and I loved that story and I got quite a kick when I saw it mentioned in your story! keep up the truly amazingly awesome work that is your imaginative process!

So now they've both decided to see if something can be.

NOW WE SPERARATE THEM!  THE DRAMA! IT DEMANDS IT!  IT WILL NOT BE DENIED!

Damn voices in my head that refuse to be quiet.

He took that really well. Granted he has seen some crazy stuff in his life, but this really takes the cake. Speaking of which that surprise cake from Pinkie Pie is going to double in size for both Twilight and him when she finds out about this.

:| You referenced So You've Grown Wings. Have my Right Thumb Up.

... You referenced NCIS. Have the left, too! :D

Dang, he's not a triple changer anymore!! Plus he still doesn't have a Prime trailer ;p

>>768641768641 I was thinking that too! Some crisis is gonna come up and they won't get to talk until the end of the story.

There shall be ham.  Lots and lots of HAM!

This gonna be GOOD.

WOAH WOAH WOAH!

Megatron has a crush on Chrysalis?

At least the hilarious verbal interplay between Luna, Tia, and John made up for the nightmare fuel of MEGATRON hitting on the Changeling Queen.

Usual wager... (snicker)

Unicron...

>>564990564990

I agree.  Two things that Pinkie Pie shouldn't be within several miles of:  automobiles and COFFEE

I love how it takes Twilight a couple seconds to register that she does, in fact, have wings.  Brain not quite awake, Twi?

But seriously, I love the character interaction going on here.  Much more natural than last time.  Funny too.

>>781054781054

Thanks. I learned a lot while writing my first story.

Oh hai Sunny Skies!

>>781081781081

Finally, SOMEONE points that reference out!

>>781105781105

I'm surprised no one else caught it.

Arguments with the subconscious rock.

I sense an incoming battle scene.

EDIT: Gyvon, you might want to check out the songs "In My Remains" or "Roads Untraveled" from Linkin Park as an ending message song.

Luna and the Internet.  That has to be one of the funniest ideas I've ever seen.

Luna is a gamer.

I love this story so much!!!! MOAR!!!

About damn time Chrysalis got back in the story!

Now let's get some action!!!

Two chapters and an intermission all within seven days?  WHAT COCKERY IS THIS!?

Those of you who read my blog know that I said that there might not be an update this week.  Turns out, I lied.  I was having trouble with pacing, but at the last minute, I got a brilliant idea.  Throw in another intermission.  It's been a few chapters, I can get away with it.  Next chapter, expect action.

Now, for those who do NOT read my blog, why?  I post progress updates and ideas for new stories there.

Well aren't you the worker bee...or is it worker changeling?

Why is Megatron so interested in her?

>>809214809214

she has the ability to turn into every organic existing

>>810337810337

I don't think she can turn into all of them. A full grown dragon might be beyond her.

>>810802810802  >>810337810337

I'm gonna go deeper into Changeling history and abilities in later chapters.  Also, why Megatron is infatuated with Chrysalis.

A GOOD DAY? What madness is this?! 'tis but the calm before the storm I bet! Yikes. In the rain no less...

Oooh Chrysalis on the inner path of redemption? Maybe she's the one who'll bite it, sacrificing herself to stop Megatron?

>>809214809214 She's hot and is a charismatic leader? I find it odd Megatron can even care about somebody else

Megatron and Chrysalis. Gyvon and Twilight. Creepy like hell!

But.

Because "Flesh and Stell" was a awesome story, I give you chance.

And Luna, you are so funny.

Again, another character turned into pony.

*sigh*

WHY!? Why fans have this obsession about changing every life form into ponies!?

*slams head on desk*

ANOTHER

*slams head on desk*

FUCKING

*slams head on desk*

IRREVERSIBLE

*slams head on desk*

TRANSFORMATION

*slams head on desk*

INTO

*slams head on desk*

PONY!!!

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!!

AND WHY?!?! BECAUSE SHIPPING!!!

YOU... YOU... YOU...

GAH! Now I want kill every brony who likes changing humans into ponies.

And for the first time, I hate shipping. Fortunately, only in this story.

*sigh*

All right. Next chapter. Maybe you can still restore my interest in this story.

>>812367812367 It can be argued that he doesn't really care about Chrysalis. Granted, we don't get to look into his head, but odds are good that he lacks that essential component of all True forms of love: valuing another's life over one's own. The author is very careful at all times to describe Megatron's feelings towards Chrysalis as infatuation, which, while certainly a starting point from which love can grow, isn't love.

Luna and Internet. Priceless!

History of Chrysalis and Changelings. Very interesting.

Rarity and her dress obsession... ... ... ah fuck this.

Twilight and John shipping. I don't like. Not after that transformation.

But I'm almost able to forgive you the last point thanks to Internet Luna. Almost.

>>814495814495 Maybe Megatron has a weird leg-hole fetish

>>814551814551 Oh yeah Internet Luna! I want to read Luna's blog