Pinkie has never heard of Hearts and Hooves Day, and certainly not the idea of a "Special Somepony". But the idea of having a "super best friend" is enough for her to find one.
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I enjoyed it thoroughly! Pretty innocent, it always makes me happy to read things like this. I hope more people read it.
I get a notification
*thinks it's for a thread*
*comes in to congratulate you on getting a special somepony of your own*
*sees it's a story*
*comments on silly chain of events*
That was rather cute.
Thanks for wriring!
p.s. Would you mind if I were to add this to the group: Holiday Stories?
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Thank you. And feel free to add my story to your group.
Dawww cute!
Haha, wow, that was a pretty cu- I mean, cool story.
Pure innocence solemnly surrounds this story in ever corner! The grammar was pretty fine and the pacing looks pretty intact, if you ask me. However, there are just a few little teeny tiny wriggling things in your story. For example, I thought there could be more to this quote right here from Mr. Cake:
Him just blatantly stating that bothers me for some reason. Like, he didn't look at the calendar or call Mrs. Cake his "shmookums" or something like that? But, this isn't really a major problem, just something I wanted to point out. Also, I appreciate you trying to write Fluttershy as Fluttershy-ish as possible, but i think that you overdid that small texts and the "ums" just a little bit.
But overall, this was a cool little one-shot. I look forward to seeing what else you can write.
So cute and innocent
lol, oh and nice sequel too 
I like how this story turned out. You can take this one-shot as a shipping of Flutterpie or just two new friends having a fun time together. Nicely done.