A stormy night in the city of Equestria called Canterlot two young foals find shelter in the most interesting of places. Filly Twilight needs her brother to make her feel safe. Will he?
note: this was written while listening to B.B.B.F.F the whole time i was writing it.
the picture is something i found from the show.
HNNG MY HEART
WHY MUST YOU MAKE SO MUCH ADORABLENESS!!!
This was a very nice story.
A FORTRESS! YES!
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Cute, but a bit OOC. Also a couple typos here and there, but not bad at all.
>>Recon XD i'll probably be fixing those pretty soon.. yeah its just the first draft, i plan on fixing it a bit. Shining Armor and Twlight are the two i write about the least... so i kinda expected for it to be OOC a bit. sorry about that. I just wrote how i would see them.
D'AWWWWWWWWWWWW JUST WHAT I WAS LOOKING FOR.
510050 I am so glad that you liked it. I was going for just that. Really hope you enjoyed reading it.
Um, I think it's Shining Armor, not Shingning Armor. He's not from Hong Kong, but Canterlot. It's a nice story, and covers a lot in like one thousand words. Bravo!
2251777 oh yeah... XD i kinda wrote this late at night one night when i couldn't sleep.
‘We’re lucky to foals that get along so well.’
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