Short story. Fed up with the mocking and insults of being weak like his aunt, Blueblood decides to kill the one who is giving his "reputation" a bad name: Celestia. Will the Princess actually do the unthinkable?
Take place after "Rainbow Rocks Remake".
Freeky!
Your sentences are repetitive, and your grammar is awkward.
I suggest finding an editor.
I'm glad this turned out as a dream. I've always believed canon wise that prince blueblood & celestia have a good relationship and wish more people portrayed it positive. Jerk or not,if he was really that dark at heart she wouldn't of allowed him to the gala or even keep his title.
5128676 This guy is beyond saving, mate. He thinks he's already perfect and didn't need editors like we peasants do.
I'd just like to point out a few tense changes and odd word choices (that you still haven't changed since I last read this in October):
*remove -de
*remove -d
*replace -s with -ed
*remove 'sternly'
*replace 'with' with 'in'
*remove 'He stated what he was tired of, it has to stop.' (That explanation is completely useless. Your dialogue has already conveyed the message to your readers.)
You write weird, guy. Really weird. Is English your first language?