There was no room in her heart for love, or so the song went. But love has a tendency to find a way, despite all odds.
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PrometheusDark
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"Is overwhelming urge to be a nice guy." - His overwhelming urge to be a nice guy, perhaps?
Edit: 486168 Oh well, at least now I'm FIRST!
Oops, I think you may have made a mistake. All the other comments have been deleted...
486168
Oops. Oh well... I guess I can't get them back, can I?
I assume they got deleted because he compressed the chapters into one (good call btw)
486187 There's no way I know of, but now I have FIRST, so thank you.
486191
Hahah, thanks. I doubt I'll do the same on Fanfiction.net, honestly. That site makes it to much of a hassle to edit things. Thank you for the feedback!
486202 Oh, god yes. It's so much easier here. I really do prefer the rating/comment system instead of the review system Fanfiction uses.
486202
Meh, this site is so much better anyway. No real loss.
Heh, can't wait for the next adorable installment.
486312
Adorable? No, this story is edgy! Its dark, brooding!
I aim to please!~
Welp, my mind was blown at out of all the shipping bait that the finale gave us. Spike x Pinkie, Spike x Sweetie bell, Discord X Queen Chrysalis and Soarin x dash...that's only going into the somewhat normal shippings and ignoring the slash pairings. I feels like you said fuck that and jumped to the odd ball of this type of fic. It was also well handled as well. I look forward to reading more of this.
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Peace Out.
To the author: There is nothing wrong with adorable and I like the tone of this fic, it's different from the other stuff we're bound to see.
>>PrometheusDark
I do not intend to offend, but I believe you have misinterpreted the phrase "dead meat." The phrase "dead meat" in meaning is essentially the same thing as the word "doomed."
Hey, where are your apostrophes?
Stuff that doesn't look right but I'm too lazy to point out what's wrong:
"It was completely by chance that he'd find her"
"If she had the power to, he'd smite him where he stood!"
486445
>Queen Chrysalis
>Spike
>[Romance] tag
Not sure if want...
Also,
you accidentally an S.
Unless Spike suddenly gained smiting powers, which would be pretty awesome.
Looks like this is gonna be good. Can't wait to see how it turns out. Keep it up
“Twilight led Chrysalis from the library, and headed for Sweet Apple Acres.”
to the element of honesty?
she's might be bucked out of luck now.
486397
I won't lie, I'd ship anything with Spike if just because he's my favorite male character. But Spike x Rarity, and even Spike x Twilight, had been done to death. I wanted to try something new, fresh, and completely out of left-field. Also, love the picture.
486479
I coulda sworn I fixed that one. But the first baffles me "it was completely by chance that he'd find her." Should it be "found" perhaps? I'm no master of my own language, as this has shown me.
486504
I aim to please!
486979
You know how these things go, it seems? Yes, she's in for a hard time.
487133 When you have nothing but free time, internet access, and this website to read stories, you tend to pick up a pattern.
487216
I know what you mean.
Thanks for the feedback, all these comments make me feel warm and fuzzy like a cup of coffee wearing a snuggie. 
487133 Yes, found dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Mr_Cake.png
This was great! I've been looking for good Chrysalis fics and my search is over it seems. I demand more chapters! I need my fix...
487416
Hahhah! I'm writing on the second chapter right now, its gonna be about as long as this one. Most likely will be up within the next few hours. Thanks~
487424Yesssssss. Thanks bebe, I look forward to the next installment.
"If it were anyone else, she'd have laughed right then and there.
But it wasn't anyone else."
Awesome! Chryssy is becoming nicer)
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No. Just, no. Two days since the episode, and Queen Chrysalis has already been shipped with a BABY? A BABY? PEDOPHILIA MUCH?
This is just sad. Requires AU tag, considering it's canon that Chrysalis wouldn't love. And that Spike's already fallen for Rarity.
Don't break canon without an AU tag. People like me don't like that.
what will happen next?
What the hell is this shipping. I thought the constant shipping Big Mac with everypony was retarded. But this is just completely abstract. Sure I get the concept of crack parings but calling this a crack paring is to lenient because crack can't make someone think this. I call this a "I was completely wasted out of my mind that I couldn't even preform breathing properly" paring cause seriously what the fuck is this shit? In the great words of Master Discord http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z9KsnqlzxaU
Ones a baby dragon and the other is a queen of a race of bug shapeshifters that feeds off of ponies love. This is totally shippable. Although I do give you credit that you used Spike rather than Big Mac because at least Spike was in that episode and if you used Big Mac than I would have lost all of my one sliver of hope for the shipping community.
487754Woah calm down it's a fanfic it's well written and the concept is a bit interesting plus it's spike it's nice to know he being shipped it gives a warm thought in my heart. To each their own I guess
WOOO~ THIS IS GETTING GOOD! Cannot wait to see what happens.
Oh shits getting real shes falling for him
i like this paring
don't know why but i just do
odd aint it
just thought of something dragons are omnivores right?
so he was probaly hunting Right?
Edit: Flyingspud you know spike is only like 2 or 3 years older than twilight
I wonder what'll happen when she gets found out......
Spike just hoped this would be enough to fool Twilight.
you cant fool twilight spike it just not possible now you can make her jsut say screw it but thats beside the point
487754
Would it surprise you if I told you this started as a friendshipping story rather then a romance fanfic? Probably not, but it did. The idea was just to give her a friend, help her see the error of her ways. This is very much a cliche, child's storybook fanfiction.
Also, I don't drink.~ Its unhealthy.
487652
Don't worry, friend. This will all be explained. As for not being able to love, just allow me to suspend your disbelief for the short moments it takes to read my story.
I see it as friendship evolving into something more later. Kudos on making Chrysalis sympathetic towards his situation at the end. Spike's very nature is to be helpful, kind, sarcastic and witty. Still there will be that point where that awkward moment comes when it's revealed he's dating the equivalent to the devil, but considering that hell has all the best music then it ain't a bad place to be.
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Peace Out.
488864
Surprise twist! He's really in the friend-zone, and Chrysalis ditches him to date Big Mac!
Nah, I wouldn't do that. Or would I? How should I know?
Thanks for the feedback!~
I don't normally read non-clop, but this is highly interesting...
487604
I wouldn't necessarily say becoming nicer, just... closer.
Also, you have a random parenthesis hanging off of the edge of your comment and it's bugging me so much because there will never be another parenthesis to complete it.
Cool chapter bro. I wanna see how this plays out
489163 Wow, I never thought I'd read that sentence. Internet, you are stranger than I ever imagined, and you have my pity.
in the words of dende "I'm a nice guy"
I just love how adorable Spike is being. Just playing the nice guy. Thewaffler is right, Good-Guy Spike. Now get writing! Hehe
jk, best wishes!
491073
I have someone reading over chapter 3 as I type this. Trying to find errors for me and what not. It should be up soon.~
shit hits the fan. And ponies will notice changelings abducting ponies....
this gonna be good.
491195
I'm glad you like it! I aim to please.~
Some people may feel that Spike eating meat is wrong but I think it's important that dragons are omnivores and they play a vital role in keeping the phoenix population under control seeing as they resistance to most magic and they are the almost immortal fire bird's only natural predator. They keep over population from turning into an ecological nightmare.
That being said I really like the build up of Chrysalis's change of heart.
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Peace Out. Oh and let me know if you think these images are getting a tad annoying.
Crap well I was hoping this was going to be a simple romance story but since shit just got real come at me bro
491240
Meat is important because it gives you the necessary vitamins and such, even omnivores can't survive without a balanced diet. I know I'm sort of bringing science into a cartoon, but still.
I hate it when stories just go "They're in love because they looked in eachother's eyes and saw TRUE LOVE!" because that is not how it works. Relationships build slow. I'm glad you enjoy this little story of mine.
Also, no, don't stop with the pictures. They're hilarious.