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Lapis-Lazuli and Stitch


Profile of Retired Writer, Lapis-Lazuli, and his editor, Stitch / Inky. Thanks for the memories, FiMFiction.

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Rainbow Dash is the fastest Wonderbolt, no, fastest creature alive. Everypony knows this. So when the unthinkable happens, Rainbow goes home to Ponyville with a lot on her shoulders. She has a future to decide, and a lot of things pulling her every which way.

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Nice story, I'd like to see more stories in this verse.

That was surprisingly good for a story with a bat pony named Dream in it. You definitely know how to write!

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Been thinking about some things. But I honestly need to finish 29 Hearts, Ace of Spades before I tackle any fics that aren't one-shots.

This is amazing and there should be more of it.
That is all.

But is she faster than sanic

Your description is too vague, I can't decide, I want to read it or not.

can I get a link to the cover art please.

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thank you. that is a cute little art style... it puts mine to shame :rainbowlaugh:

Man, where has Dash been to have a batpony kid? :rainbowderp:

This seems interesting enough. Curious to see where it goes.

...So, Rainbow had a kid? Sure is fast.

5100045 First time for everything

Very nice.
I like this Dashie
Curious how you would write the rest of the main six

Loved this. I don't normally like Dash stories either, but this was very nicely done. Honest, real, and warm, with every character spot-on.

It was a pretty good story; with steller vocabulary and spot on-characters. :twilightsmile: But it confuses me about the fact that Rainbow's son is a bat-pony :rainbowhuh: The unnusual genes seem a bit random without any real info about the father

Id wanna know who Dream's dad was...since spitting out a random batpony hasnt been heard of yet.At the same time, it hasnt been debunked yet.

Kind of curious as to what is giong to happen to Rainbow now..OBVIOUSLY they wouldnt punt her for losing a race, but I dunno, I personally like more closure than open ended stuff.

Still a good little one shot, I give it a thumbs up :rainbowdetermined2:

An impressive display of detail, characterization, and worldbuilding. Bravo!:raritywink:

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The Cakes, two Earth Ponies, managed to produce twins who happened to be a Unicorn and a Pegasus.

Pony genetics are freaky. Perhaps Dream just won the genetic lotto. Or maybe Luna got a bit too involved in one of Dash's more intimate dreams.

This story touched my heart.

And as soon as I have that gaping chest wound sewn up, I'll give this a thumbs up. :twilightoops:

(Seriously, I once thought "I'll never feel old 'cause I've never felt young". Time has endeavored to disabuse me of that notion.)

It is a terrible thing to grow old.
It is a more terrible thing to not to...

5105081 Ha ha! :rainbowlaugh: That Luna part was too true. The entire theory has a pretty got point to it, actaully. I'll take what I can get :ajsmug:

That's my profile pic.

5098337 good story.
5109637 its funny that he picked your profile picture kinda makes me happy for creating this one then people can't use it for a story picture cause they can't get it.

Lots of world building here. It was nice to read although a bit much for a one shot story this length.

I really like this story, though you left some things kind of open ended. I wish there was going to be a sequel, but hey, that's up to you.^^

Love this! sooooooooooooooooooo open ended at the end though! Who is Dream's dad? What does RD decide to do? Does she start instructing or retire? What about FleetMac? Too many questions! :flutterrage:

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Does it help at all that I have the beginning of this FleetMac in the works?

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YES! :pinkiehappy: YES YES YES YES YES! :twilightsmile:

One shot??? But where did Dream come from???? Arrggghhh.

Great story and writing, more please. Eg meeting with Spitfire, Dream history etc

Damn you! What kind of a cuckold makes such a great story a one-shot! Welp, nothing to do about it except look for a sequel.

time waits for nopony.. live your life

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