Sometimes you sit at the screen for hours and never type a word.
The day music died so did my career. I can't say I'm mad, but damn, it could have waited till I was prepared to stop making music. Well, I'm not ready to stop. I have to do something to get back on the public's good side. Something...crazy...something... drastic..something... idiotic...something involving a sunglasses wearing, pony DJ.
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Dis gon b gud.
Edit: Dis rlly gud
5110815 I'm glad ya think so. A weight off my shoulders.
5110837
I should have a crossover between my (soon to be) Octavia story and Vinyl story!
5110843 Well there goes my chapter 3. *Edits Octavia out* and Coolio.
5110857
Dogg, my character from AS, is getting Octy.
5110859 WE really should have clarification about these things. But go on
5110869
Go on? About what?
5110875 The whole AS Octy thing. Separate story or what? Babz n Octy
5110879
babs and Octy WILL meet up, but it's separate story.
5110883 Hmm alright. can't wait to read. Good thing I didn't get to deep with Octy. Just a sentence.
5110889
What was said sentence?
Minor point: there should be spaces between the punctuation and the following words. Same applies to certain phrases later in the chapter.
Not that it actually detracts from the story itself, which is good, it's just a few mistakes that could use fixing. If you can, maybe try typing the thing up on Microsoft Word and transferring it over or something, that way Word will notice quibbles like those.
I must say: your phrases stick out to me in a very, very good way; the thoughtfulness, intentional or otherwise, of your sentence construction is certainly above average and FIMFiction needs more writers like you who are, in some way, proficient.
Keep it up and good luck. Liked.
5110891 I just put the whole section
5110892 What's funny is that I actually do transfer it over. I just write that way. My bad. And thank you. That makes all this writing worth it. Definitely one of my favorite comments on my stories so far.
5110914
I claimed her first before you.
5110922 Danggit. Shouldn't be too hard to edit her out.
5110934
I see the romance tag is absent. Care to explain?
5110940 Well before Octy was stripped form my grasp, I planned to make Vinyl n OCty a couple. In this tale, Vinyl is a bro
5110944
So Vinyl is NOT a female?
Taking this out of canon and into custom orders
5110951 A bro and female.
I have a feeling Mason may have bitten off a bit more than he can chew here. He really needs to learn that, especially if the "product" is a living being, you should always read the instructions! Keep up the chapters!
5110953
So they're being best friends rather than lovers?
5110969 Exactly
5110975
Ah.
Dogg IS a family man with a wife and kid, so Octy and Vinyl should date?
5110984 That's what I think. We've seen human x Vogon ponies but haven't seen live between them...in this sense.
5111022 There's a story behind it and a proper reasoning. You'll find out eventually my friend. Just follow the whole vogon world.
5111022
There's a huge debate that went on in my Vogon story about if the ponies are brainwashed. I'll explain, but MASSIVE spoilers for the universe.
The ponies Vogon sells are the actual characters. Discord, or better known as "Drocsid", saved all of the characters from the destruction of the planet. So he goes to earth and gives them a new home. The "brainwashing" thing is simply just a bonding from the companion and the owner. They aren't specifically sold as slaves, just as companions, like a dog or cat.
5111088 Imma go find that story. Then Imma read it.
5111088
Well, that's disturbing. It really is as creepy as I had originally feared. Well, time to wait until all of the characters learn this! If the main characters from the story I'm doing learn this, they're all going to feel like colossal assholes even if it did prevent the ponies from a certain death. Also, Discord probably could have just turned them human and let them adapt on their own. It would be a lot less morally grey that way at least.
It seems pretty good, but you need an editor or at least a proofreader.
5111103
And a lot of D'Awwwwws
Speaking of good old Octy, where is she? I see Vinyl is the "brutally honest" type. So, they're breaking the law within 24 hours of meeting each other? I think they're going to get along swimmingly.
5127424 That basically sums up this chapter. Octy's tale is being written by Guardian and Babz soon enough. And yeah, bros break laws within minutes of meeting each other. Form a bond.
'an'
This sentence seems off.
Definition please?
His girlfriend's a jerk, Vinyl called it!
Yeah, I'm not liking Anastasia much. Too much valley Girl, not enough brains. And how in the Nine Hells do you not like Vinyl?
That's like saying you don't like eating…
This... this Chloe girl... how could anyone be interested in
that abomination of a personalityher.I am not a fan at all of electronic music (more of the Rock 'n Roll
), but I like the way you write this.
This is lacking actual feels.Its like youre missing the details.Yes,this chapter was better,buy it still needs lotta work.Please work on that.And by the way,Vinyl here is anthro(human??) or a pony?Cuz Chloe said the horse,but Scratch said my hand...???
5147882 Feelz aren't my forte. even in real life Im stoic. I'll see what I can about the details but the feels may be an entirely different ordeal.
5144051 wait...you're not liking ana? or do you mean Chloe?
5149626 I was thinking of Chloe. (I hate writing in a hurry...)
That last line from Mason...
Not something friends would say in a situation like this. There is a time and place for lines like that, this was not it.
Poor Vinyl, having memories of a jerk of an ex being dragged up as well as having to go through heat without Octavia there for, well, you know, "help".
Non-Gayness aside, I fucking love you.
5152757 this was the best for this. they are friends. it alright. he did it in a loving manor.
5152760 maybe too much for one chapter....hmm? I don't know.
5152912 least someone liked it
5152950 That I did.
I think tomatos are cosidered berries now.
Missing letter.
Octy is coming...
5168900 Noice. [cello ensues]