I LOVE IT !!! PLEASE update .. if it's not too much trouble

>>139942139942

DAWWW....

*ahem* Yes. I mean yes. Here, have an update.

MOAR. NAO.

Seriously, I will find you and set you on fire if you do not continue.

The press?

"Oh, you mean them root weevils that crawl around popping off cameras in your face?"  

This is really well done, Poinger. Easily one of my favorite Ditzy Doo fics.

Definitely tracking this. Quite a nice read and I love this interpretation of Ditzy (though now canonically Derpy)

Manly tears were shed.

FFFFFffffffffffffffffff.....why you gotta leave it at that?

WHATS THE DAGGER FOR!?!? WHAT THE DAGGER FOR!!?!?!?!?!

Hmmm. A look at a Ditzy who wasn't sort of out of it and kinda klutzy makes her current state.....depressing a bit. About the only good thing I'm seeing coming is that when her enemies show up, Spitfire isn't the only pony that's got her back.

That was a nice chapter, though I'm dreading what happened to Ditzy Doo to damage her so much that she's permanently scatter brained now.

this is bucking awesome I want to read more seriously, if my guess is correct then that unicorn stallion in the previous chapter is probably dinky's father and he was the one who caused ditsy's accident. I think it will be quite interesting to see what he will do.

Oh, Dinky, it doesn't work like that! Fillies...

Not only was Flash Bulb stupid in his approach, but I think it's illegal. Exploiting information from a child by gaining their trust under false pretenses, I think it's called.

Five dictionaries gave me that sentence.

oh and congratz on EQD

Origin stories and background for secondary characters? I do so enjoy them when they are done well.

And this is done very well. Congratulations on making the EQD cut.

Hey Poigner, I'm looking to become the official spokes pony for the brony community, can I get your support?

Your Timelord friend, The Baron

Oww....17 weeks since the last update? Hope it's not abandoned...

>>864334864334

Oh, nononono. You'll see the actual last edit, not last addition, was June 21. It took a fair amount of editing to get it approved by EQD, so energies were devoted there rather than to writing new parts.

Oh boy! Friendshipping! I always love me a good friendshipping story!

Anywho, I really want to know what it is Derpy, er, Ditz, has forgotten. Time to read more!

Derpy is... legendary? What?

Oh Rainbow Dash... Your outburst was a tad extreme But, at least you made up for it, so it's all good, I suppose.

Anywho, time for backstory!

Ominous unicorn with dagger is ominous...

That mysterious, ominous unicorn with the dagger still has me on edge...

But this story... I like it. I like it a lot. Well done, sir. I look forward to any updates with eager anticipation

i like derpy dont get me wrong but i wana know who Dinkiy's dad is

This is a brilliant story so far! I'm really loving your take on the best young flier competition. But who was Daggers?

I love this story. I don't normally enjoy Derpy stories, but this one actually has plot as opposed to a sorry pile of self-pity. I was just dragging along until Part 3, when I start reading Spitfire's side of it. I never realized this story wasn't complete so I was expecting a standard accident-during-performance-and-that's-it routine, but I can see that there's much more depth to it. Please continue, I'm really curious!! Also I never thought of Dinky's father and now that end of Part 5 suggests that's him and my curiosity HAS BEEN DOUBLED!

I caught a few times Spitfire misspelt as Spitifire or Spitifre.

>>997211997211 Derp. Misspellings corrected.

>>10036681003668 Where is it?!?!

Must find out what happens!!!!!

more please.

Hmmmmm... Dash would be jelly

Hehe Mr Bulb, 3 hours dungeon

... Logic would dictate that he's up to no good....

Ok i love this story and want it too be continued but its been a mouth and 12 days has this story been abandoned or do you just have the worst case of Wright block ever.

Story not abandoned: Part Six to come very soon. See blog post here:This post.

Bingo, the villain has a name-o.....(let's hope they nail the lame-o.)

No!

>>13508291350829

"No?"

"plebeian"... oh dear he's not just a bastard he's also a snob.... this is not going to end well... for him

this explains a lot but will next chapter explain how she got her disability and how she got pregnent

very interesting name "slate hooves" I wonder what exactly he did to Ditzy

IT UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! DON"T STOP!!!!!!!

HAVE ALL MY MOUSTACHES! ALL OF THEM!!!!

... Did he rape Ditzy? The whole amnesia and pregnancy thing is a bad sign.

I hope the next chapter comes soon and not in a few months, this is a big cliffhanger.

We all knew Ditzy was secretly a great flyer. Hopefully there is some redemption for at the end. I would love to a Sonic Muffin boom.

>>13508481350848

Yes.  No.

I'm liking the introduction of the conflict here.  Good times!

I saw this updated in my e-mail and dropped everything to read it

Not gonna lie, I'm very interested in seeing where this goes.

Huza an update. I has forgotten about this story, but reading this I remembered why I stared it. Keep up the excellent work.

good chapter one of the best so far keep up the good work Poinger

"Spitfire couldn’t quite manage to keep the resentment out of her voice. 'There

        'Nothing happened. I’m fine.'"

u wot m8

this was the first fanfiction I EVER decided to read, even surpassing the age of my FIMFiction account...

that was ages ago, now that it has finally updated, I am dropping everything to read it, for i know it will not dissapoint

just finished reading it....

I was right all along! it did NOT disappoint, and now that i know you're not dead.........I WILL ANNOY YOU FOR MORE

MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

just kidding I'm not that evil

>>13547011354701

That's very weird. Wasn't like that earlier. I blame import error from google docs or somesuch.

Anyway, should be fixed. Thanks for the notice.

Huzzah! Update! Huzzah!

...Ahem.

Mr. Shady Unicorn now has a name. And given the knife from prior chapters, my feelings of apprehension are quite high...

>>13634381363438

Go with that feeling. My gut tells me that he's most of why Ditzy is amnesic and disabled. He might even be why Dinky exists.

That Unicorn has something to do with Ditzy's problem, doesn't he!?

I'LL KILL THAT SON OF A BI-

No...must remain calm. He'll get what he deserves soon enough. Right, author?

...Right?

>>13554601355460

MOAR FOR THE LOVE OF CELESTIA, MOAR!

Let's hope that Ditzy gets some closure out of this. Oh, wait. If Slate even comes near her, he's going to get a face full of Loyalty.

>>15872271587227

Not five minutes after I post it and Part 7 gets love. Were you stalking me? Perhaps waiting to strike?

>>15872371587237

Not as such, no. It just showed up in my inbox while I was checking my Livejournal account.

Well, its good to see this again. I wasn't actually expecting it when I opened my tracked stories today.

MOAR!

That evil conniving.... *takes a breath* It won't just be Loyalty that he will get a face full of, you have the five other Bearers as well, one of whom as a direct connection to the Princesses (who get very angry when you mess with their little ponies), and the 'Bolts, and the rest of town. Slate will be very lucky to get away unscathed.

>>15876431587643 Oh yeah. I sincerely hope that happens.

Well I now have a new enemy #1. Your going down Slate.

MOAR

...Only thing is, according to Spitfire, Slate's supposed to still be in prison.   Assuming this is correct, then who's the Mr. Hooves coming after Ditzy?

Let's go all harmonious on this bitch!

When I saw this updated I was sad I couldn't read it soon.

But I 'm glad I did!

Slate's gona get burned!

Image: http://www.yaplakal.com/uploads/post-42-13508808564284.jpg

(fun Fact) I call all the girls I don't like melodie.

I've been looking for what I call all the guys, I have now found it.

another good chapter can't wait to see whats next

>>15876431587643

Hmm.....I'm reminded of the tape "Power Klingon." At one point, Worf said the following about a Federation tourist who goofed up a toast in Klingon: "As of the time of this recording, they are still finding pieces of him."

>>15896431589643

Epona forgive me for what I must do.

why do i have the feeling that slate got out of prison somehow

BUCK YEAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!

as ive stated earlier, this was the first story i ever followed, so im glad to see that it has been updated, my heart, and nostalgia, jumps and dances with joy!

S3 in less than 13 hours!

>>15905271590527 only 29mins away till 1st episode here.

>>15925371592537

....you stayed up all night didn't you?

>>15985761598576 I dont remember actually... I might have.

Hey. Slate. I think Twi's got a little touch of hate in her heart for you. Word on the street is Celestia taught her some... black magic~

Holy crap am I late to this update!

Anyhow, nice to see that things have finally reached present day. But Slate is coming. And he clearly means to finish what he started.

Hi! Remember me? I've finally found time to get back into this story, and I recall now what attracted me to it in the first place. :)

Oh man. I love the background you've given them and I love where this chapter ends. I may be able to get in one more today. Hope you're still working on this!

Ah, so cool! The training sequences were paced excellently, and their personalities work off each other so well. I'll have to catch up on the rest a little later. 'Til then!

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Oh, but of course. Finals have simply left me less time for writing.

I have to commend you for good flight routines. i find it's the damnedest thing to have to write, when I'm writing Wonderbolts or Rainbow Dash stories. Not only are they hard to describe while keeping the flow of the story, they're flat-out hard to come up with!

Whew! In-tense! :D

Okay I'm all caught up you can write more now! :V

>>17623801762380

Oh, my god, yes. SO much truth.

Trying to describe a flight routine, without doing too much and bogging down or too little so the description suffers, is by far one of the hardest, if not the hardest thing, I've found. It's one of those things that's inherently impossible to do 100% correctly: you just pray like crazy that it works out.

I never run out of times I can use this video[youtube=https://www.google.ca/url?sa=t&source=web&cd=1&ved=0CDYQtwIwAA&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DV595oWP5tSE&ei=8en8UMbvJsSarAHMrIFg&usg=AFQjCNGVZp5KoxFtehg9Agy8phT-SmxDWA&sig2=EulL3USCgLTVNOJWyDPnSw]

DAWW that last part

That and imma kill slate myself >:C

Yaaay an update!      This has been long awaited

Not much to say. Solid chapter, looking forward to the next.

Hmmmphhh.....of all the ponies in the world to get involved with this, she picked the second most clueless. Bookworm doesn't do nuance so she's not going to be any help with the whole "How do I deal with the fact that most of why I'm a mess is because I wanted to have an abortion?" thing.

So lemme get this straight: Slate wanted a kid so his dad could be happy and become a grandfather. When Ditzy made it clear she wanted an abortion, he purposely screws her routine over, to the point where she might lose the kid, all so that the kid survives? Logic.

>>19953721995372

Slate wanted a kid so his dad could be happy and become a grandfather. When Ditzy made it clear she wanted an abortion, he purposely screws her routine over, to keep her from become a Wonderbolt. With her dream gone, maybe he can convince her to reconsider things, to do what he wants. He at least has a better shot. But he messes up; the cloud is much more dense than he thought. Ditzy falls.

>>19953951995395

So, basically, he goofed terribly.

>>19954021995402

But with the worst of intentions.

I have no memory of this place...

wait, now I remember!

>>19954151995415

Oh, but of course. He went about this in entirely the wrong way. Granted, Ditzy wasn't in top form either, but still. His actions were rather inexcusable.

>>19954151995415

And now, because of his idiocy and her guilt about what she was going to do, three lives are going to be tainted to one extent or another.