*I have a horses who's breed is Clydesdale and Appaloosa. LOL* Also I expect hate comments about my grammar. Don't comment if you're gonna rage about my grammar. Also i'm at school again.
"They taken Princess Candace! WE MUST SAVE HER" Shouted one Royal Guard. "We will get her back!" Commanded another Royal Guard. "We must tell Shining Armor!"
It was another great day in Equestria as Twilight Sparkles and her friends Rarity, Applejack, Fluttershy, Spike, Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash, Also known as the Mane 6, pass through the gates of the entrance of Canterlot, the capital of Equestria, a land owned and ruled by to leaders, Princess Celestia, the ruler of the day, and Princess Luna, Ruler of the night. The Mane 6 Mane (No pun intended) intentions were to visit Twilight's brother Shining Armor, but let them tell the story.
"I sure can't wait to see him again, its been 3 years!" Sighs one lavender unicorn known as Twilight Sparkles, the star pupil of Princess Trollestia. She and her friends had been going to visit Shining Armor for his birthday party and he had invited his sister and her friends to his party because they help save Equestria from the evil.(I forgot the name) lady.
So our heroes gotten off the train, and walked into the door to the royal ball room where the party was expected to be. Ponies were talking and laughing. "This is going to be great!" Said the Cyan Pegasus pony with her rainbow mane. "Eye Cant wait tew rainbow." Say a southern voice from the apple farmer known as Applejack. "Twilight, everyone, you made it in time the party is just about to start." But after he said three royal guard ponies burst into the ball room calling Shining's name at the same time. "Calm down guys what's the problem." Asked Shining as he took a sip of punch. "The....Princess was... Foal napped....by humans..." Panted one royal guard in a reply to Shining's question. Shining spat the punch he was drinking on the ponies in front of her. "WHEN WAS SHE TAKEN!" He asked in outrage. "20 minutes ago we believe sir." Replied another. "We will get her back!" Yelled Shining as he got his armor and sword. "One way or another." Shining walked out the door, followed by Twilight and her friends. "Twilight go back inside!" He commanded to his sister in annoyance. "No! Were gonna help you get her back with the elements of harmony. "Fine, we may need you." He sighed in defeat knowing his sister. "Thank you Shining, we won't let you down!" Said Pinkie Pie as she was bouncing upside down on the roof. "Uh no problem... Right now we have to get Candace from the Humans." The humans were a species nopony knows so much about, except that they talk and walk on two legs and live on a faraway planet called 'Earth'.
23 minutes later at the Equestrian Meeting Room.
"We need to think of a plan without violence to get her back!" Says one pony.
"Maybe we can trade to get her back!" Says another.
"How about we invade their planet Earth and take her back." A few ponies considered this idea.
"That's what were gonna do. We will invade Earth!" Agreed the other ponies.
"Get the Equestrian Army ready. This is going to be one heck of a war."
"Yes sir!"
Meanwhile at the Philydelphia army training grounds.
"We got news for you ponies! Princess Candace has been abducted by Humans and Celestia wants us to get her back" Shouts General Hoofton. "Any question mares? No? NIEGHRA!" 12 ponies ran to the battle wagon, a wagon with a cannon on the top of it, operated by magic from the unicorns. It moves on tracks instead of the rubber or wooden wheels unlike the rest of the wagons. it was 8 feet wide. 13 feet tall. and 18 feet long. [ Image here : http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTjtn_Nf3miJf6yeAIg6p9K8Zw-w8pqZp9NML1w7QxhOf_308KA7Q ] it was a crimson red finished with a set of spikes on the front. Equestria has 21,000 of them only used 12 of them in The Great Pony War I. The ponies operating this masterpiece were highly trained. The cannon shoots 20mm explosive rounds while also spears can be fired from it.
It was truly the greatest machine ever created by pony kind. Only Equestria owns this beast.
While the ponies were training for war, other ponies were planning on how they invade this planet the ponies never touched before. They had decided they would capture a Human and interrogate him or her until she reveals where they hid the Princess. They figured they would capture some land for Equestria to start colonies later on.
They would attack this planet next week using skyships on the 21st of May.
It was may 16 and 42,533 ponies have been trains. 540 battle wagons would be used while 34 skyships would used to be troop carriers and airsupport.
What the ponies don't know is the firepower the Humans have.
More and more ponies have training and their army is rapidly growing by the thousands as all the ponies want to save princess Candace. The sky ships have been armed to the gills with 65mm cannons, 12mm auto-cannon, 30 bomb bay, and a shield operated by the unicorns, it was truly the greatest ever. [ Skyship image: http://t2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSLBW17cf6_AE7AnviRYr6y4pFh_a0tWidrylTdjjtfkJ3tqigMzA ] It was 780 feet long, 603 feet wide. Everypony has their roles in the war. Here are the volunteers from Ponyville.
Pinkie pie: To surprise the enemy and...do pinkie stuff... and kill the enemy.
Rainbow Dash: Provide long range air support and surprise the enemy with a sonic rainboom.
Twilight Sparkles: Become magic support and drop the magic bomb.
Fluttershy: Be a medic to heal wounded ponies.
Rarity: Build the weapons and armor for the guards, also to assist Twilight.
Applejack: Uses battle wagon A3345 with 3 other crew, she also provides food for the team.
Big Macintosh: Move heavy equipment and also uses explosives.
Shining Armor: Lead and command the Equestrian army in the invasion.
Lyra: Scout the area so the troops can advance.
Vinyl Scratch: Fly and command Skyship like a boss!
Octavia: Provide entertainment for the army and also help wounded ponies.
They all have been trained for their role and everypony expects them to do well in their role. The Equestrian army grew to 69,023 ponies and 612 battle wagons have been made. 6 more Skyships had been created.
It was May 21st.
It was time for the invasion to begin.
Comments ( 9 )
Dude fucking hell this is going to be great! I am your number one new follower!
I don't give a shit about grammar remeber that plus dude the plot is awsome possum haters gonna hate you better contine the story on one condition
Please include great Britain fighting back aswell! plzplpzlzpzlzplz good sir? SAS ftw
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some run ons, minor grammer errors overall not that bad. i am curious as to where this will go.
No one in their right mind would ever invade the U.S. and U.S.S.R. simultaniously. Realism would pretty much depict the ponis invading and getting slaughtered by a mass quantity or aircraft and infantry unless this is the 1870's. Even then they would have alot of trouble.
Not to mention if this is post 1945, then you have two superpowers with mass quantities of men and machines that could shred ponies like paper. Celestia and Luna are powerful but not invulnerable. Hell the Nazis would put up a hell of a fight even into 1945 if the allies and U.S.S.R. were not going after them.







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