I'm not sure if my description before reading...was this a play or a story.

Then i read, pretty good

First

This should get featured. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!

> covered in grim.

Grime

This was a wonderful story!

>>483958483958

I fixed the mistake.

Thank you for pointing it out.

>>484352484352 No problem

I don't understand why more people aren't reading this story. It's great!

I hope you continue to write at this kind of level.

Applebloom the method actor.  How amusing.

I didn't know you put this on here.  Good.  Now I have another one of my favorites logged on this site.

20 thumbs up and 189 views? Seriously? This story is woefully under-appreciated.

>>18615741861574

Thanks for your comment. It's good to know people are still reading and enjoying this story despite it's age.

Part of the reason for so little views is that the story was originally in a Google doc when it was sent in to EQD, so all the initial traffic went there.

Is it bad that I somehow managed to get the "tune" for a song for which only the lyrics actually exist stuck in my head? Because the "A Wonderful Day" reprise is stuck in my head now ._.;

This story is great fun - both the inner play and the stage production bits. Good job!

“Why won’t anypony save my cat!” a filly yelled from outside the inn.

Damn it, Stone Knight, you're useless!

I hadn't even realized this (or you) was on Fimfic! Great to see this story again.

>>23330952333095

Hello again. I still remember the review you gave this story. Thank you for introducing me to the wonders that is the em dash.

Very cute and awesome story. I characters were great and blending the real stuff added a lot. It feels a bit cut off that there's no final scene showing them celebrating with the audience or packing up and discussing their feelings and DT getting told off by Cheerilee. You could have had AB come and defend her which would've been a nice bookend. Still a good fic despite the abrupt ending

>>23398732339873

I've heard a few times now that the ending seemed to come too soon. I'll have to look into adding one final scene after the curtains close to tie off a couple of the loose ends.

>>23465302346530 Yes please!

>>23505202350520

It took awhile, but I finally found time to write out the new ending. The B plot gets a better wrap up, and it should hopefully seem less abrupt when it does end.

>>24687902468790 OOh! *scampers off to see.*