With the past winter being exceptionally harsh, the Apples harvest come summer may not be enough to keep the farm going. What lengths is Applejack willing to go to save her farm?
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Hello, I am new here and just started writing Pony fanfiction. I have written some stories on other sites but I am barely starting out with ponies, so I hope you enjoy my work!
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First of welcome to fimfiction.
Secondly that was Dark but awesome your writing was good and the story it's self was very intriguing. I'd say this is a good start for you.
5062394 Thank you very much!
As far as writing, I'm glad to hear it wasn't too bad, I'll try to keep it up~
I do not especially like dark stories, but this one is well written!
5062405 I have to ask do you plan on expanding this story as I think you could expand this story.
5062407 Thanks! I don't normally write very dark things, and I try to keep the violance and such more vague, I'm glad you like it
5062412 I actually don't at the moment, I kind of like leaving a little to personal imagination heh
But you never know, maybe I will in the future if I think of a good way to expand it without it feeling to forced for me
5062538 That's reasonable.
That was quite good. The whole concept and idea was very intriguing, very dark but in a way that makes a good story, certainly chilling in some parts. Excellent work.
Nice. Dark and well written. It's interesting that Fluttershy is willing to kill a friend over her dead animals. I'd also love to see a sequel, especially if it touches on Flutters going crazy.
Though AJ could've just asked Twilight for a book about proper composting techniques and branched out into the garbage collection business. Sorry, I'm just the type of person who over analyzes things.
5063049 Yeah, that may be an interesting angle to take it, I think I can see where that would be fun to write, hmm
Yeah, but honestly the AJ is would she go to somepony like
for help doing what her family is king for haha
5062593 Thank you very much~ I'm not a huge fan of needless gore, though I know some are, so I rather build it up
Are you familar with the Twilight Zone episode "Free Dirt"?