While working on a new trick to show off, Rumble ends up getting scratched and bruised. Fortunately, Apple Bloom happens to have some experience when it comes to patching up a pegasus after crashing.
(Based on the sketch by Ambris)
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[He/Him] Just a writer who likes MLP and hopes to make a living off it: https://ko-fi.com/ink_hoof
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Short and sweet. I like.
D'awww.
Very nice and cute story. That being said, I found something you may want to edit.
Shouldn't that be "library's"? Please correct me if I'm wrong.
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No. You're right. It's supposed to be a contraction for "library is"
awww I wish you could continue it.
WOOOO! My request inspired a RumbleBloom Story
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I didn't like it.
#waitingfordownvotes
Real cute. Was hoping for something more substantial, but I suppose it's okay.
This was quite a cute story
(and it certainly helps that I have a sweet spot for RumBloom 
)
Still, I think this could use a pass over by an editor. There are a few sentences that could have been structured a lot better, and such.
Also, I guess it could have used having a bit more substance, but it's still pretty cute.
Adorable story. Mind if I do a let's read of it for youtube?
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I don't mind.
5061275 Cool.I'll link you when I do it.
Aaaannnnnnd diabetes....
Couple of minor remarks:
"furry gray from" should be "furry gray form"
"larger the", "larger than"
"a cool line. have", "a cool line. Have"
Other than that, it's a sweet oneshot with lots of warm fuzzy feels
The interaction feels genuine, and it doesn't get into painfully awkward territory, which can be a trick balance to manage, so kudos on that. Also kudos for using the Pinkie emergency rations as a plot point. Good use of canon there.
ah so cute
Rumble x Apple Bloom feels so rare, bit of a shame, it has good couple potential. Still nice to see something, a well made story if I may add.
Not bad, I might have a new ship I like
This was just one long D'aww after another. Good work.