Well done! Life without Celestia sure is different. Keep it up

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yes he does

Lawless Lands - The Sword

>>479716479716

I'll look into using the song when the time is right

That was pretty good, except of course the soup part. Waiting for next chapter.

Also...FIRST

Hmm, somehow, I don't think Discord is behind this.    

17 chapters already but yet not featured and only 5 comments?

Wierd...

Yo dude what up I am Dieter N.'s Best friend. He told me to come talk to you and read your story. I think its great but i dont have much time to read that much i gotz to go to school in a few minutes. Cool Story Brah.

But you could probably tell by my icon with him on the left and my old OC on the right.

Omfg sa2b and safe were the best games ever.

And btw my icon is outdated the one on the right isn't correct anymore but the one inthe right that is dieters is still correct.

i mean left is dieters.

Also forgot to mention I always wear a big pair of triton headphones and he's a gamer.

Hahah my OC shall be here soon

Aww, she misses me. Don't be sad, Twi. I'll be there, soon.

Also, KEEP GOING! KEEP GOING!! IT'S MUSIC TO MAH EARS!!

Extra, not to demand or anything, but what you should do, is like, every, maybe 5 or 10 chapters, you can show what's going on on the Ark, so you'll have more time to show the survivors.

Keep up the story, mate.

>>514840514840

Don't push it.

"They had even passed a tree trolling in the middle of an intersection."

I lol'd hard at that part!

The Dramatic readings are mainly just for fun so they are messed up at alot of points, but that doesn't mean the story is bad. The first chapter was read only by Fiiasco

Finnaly i get to read about my OC thanx so much man.

Thirty Seconds To Mars is one of my favorite bands. My day has been made.

BTW: The song isn't in Itallics like normal and the Intro/Exit isn't in Bold. Don't know if that wa son purpose, but anyway, great chapter!

Thanx for puttin my OC in. It's pretty cool so far.

>>524134524134 that's because this was rushed and not very well revised. That's atleast what I infer from what he told me on Skype.

i love 30 secs to mars

No worries, mate. The chapter was still amazing.

And, I als-wh-wait, Twilight's missing?!

OH NOEZ!!

Wow and you call me a try hard you unoriginal moron you Skype me and say your original and call me a try hard. You bucking coppied from amnesia and sonic the hedgehog.

i smell amnesia, its not a bad game and its not scary tho if it were real that would be bad, BUT IF THE ISHIMURA WAS REAL I PISS MY SELF!

That was pretty good. Waiting for next chapter...

>>536308536308

NO SHIT!

I'm also copying from MGS and RE if u wanna bug me about that!

>>536481536481

I don't know exactly what the Ishimuria is but from searching it on youtube I can tell it's from Dead Space.

>>538282538282 fine I will.

>>538288538288 its the ship from Dead Space one and it apears in Dead Space 2 but not for athe whole game, and yea i am terry fied of dead space cuz: Realisticly, All you need too do is find a door that gose out side or a window and then you can leave and theres nothing bad except monsters you can hide from, but you only see them one at a time so as long as your hidden you can leave and be done with it. In Dead Space tho, You can fight back but if you were too gets ganged up on realisticly, you be screwed, you can try too leave but you may die tryin. thats my opninion

>>539688539688

Amnesia is much worse since in Dead Space u can actually attack back at the enemy while in Amnesia the enemy is faster that u (so retreating isn't an option) and you have no weapons (so attacking isn't an option) The whole point of the game is to test out your skills in the art of survival by utilizing the skill of defense.

>>540055540055 i know, i was talking "Realisticly" like if it some how became real, i know how the games work i played the demo for amnesia, and i played dead space one but that was way back

Well, looks like we know where Twilight ran off to. Don't know how she got out of the castle though.

>>544378544378

She never followed the rest of the group into the castle.

She escaped them when they weren't looking and headed off towards the Ark.

Why did you think I didn't make Twilight talk or even say anything about her in the past few chapters?

>>544395544395 smart, smart lad.

I found a lot of misspelled words in this chapter, more than I'm used to. I'm disappointed Racecarghost. Shame.

>>581042581042

Don't worry!

Be happy!

I was wondering what Snake did with the Golden Ray.

Also, FIRST!!

P.S. Good job DarkWolf. Plus, I didn't see any spelling errors in the chapter, but 2 in the Author's notes at the end. SHAME ON YOU RACECARGHOST!!

>>654966654966

I hate you, Word 2010!

What about Ace's GIANT flesh wound? Is he over the pain or something?

My poll choice shall be C!

I guess B, but I think you should name the ship... >_> <_< ....Titanic

*Runs away* I regret nothing!

>>709161709161 Ha.

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<__<    >__>    *whispers* I agree with that name completely!    *Runs upwards*

THE CIRCUS OF DEATH!

SWEET!

Im sorry, but I have GOT to do this because it was what I was thinking of the entire time when I read this part.

Turning back to the group, Ace began to explain the plan. “Ok, here’s how it’s gonna flow. When I give the signal, Rainbow Dash, you dive out there and do a little spin around Chrysalis while she’s still distracted and venerable. Then, once you get her confused and dizzy, Thunder, Twilight, and Rarity. You guys go out and use your magic to hold her down. Rarity the arms and legs, Thunder the body, and Twilight the neck and head. Then, we tell her to spill the beans on what she’s really planning to do with the rest of Equestria and her army of changelings. If she refuses to tell or any of her changelings try and save the day, I give the signal, and Strife here gets..."

"Alright, times up! Lets do this... LEEERRRROOOOYYYY JEEENNNKKKIIIIINNNSSSSSS!!!!" Strife yelled out as he charged right into the throne room.

"...Oh my god, he just ran in..."

Anyways, now that I have that out of my system, nice chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!

Wow, I had thought this story had died. I assumed you moved on to focus on the PMV's you had been making. Glad to see I was wrong! BTW, the chapter has a lot of errors in there, but overall good chapter and I am glad you are back!

Racecarghost... you get a 2 on your OEQ's and you write 40 chapters for FimFiction... you should show Mrs.Szmidt that you can write   really?

>>514862514862 I know this comment is almost a year old, but I happened to get a little demanding. Don't worry, I'm not like that anymore.