After a night of getting drunk with her friends, Applejack wakes up with both a hangover and the feeling that she did something stupid last night.
But how is she supposed to remember what happened when her head won't stop hurting?
I'm a princess, are you a princess too?
After a night of getting drunk with her friends, Applejack wakes up with both a hangover and the feeling that she did something stupid last night.
But how is she supposed to remember what happened when her head won't stop hurting?
Mind if I do a let's read of this story for you? I'll give you credit of course.
Nice story with great ending.
Truly, that are words of wisdom.
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Of course, go ahead! I'd love so to see that!
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Thanks!
The moral of the story: Never gamble while drunk. Or at least make sure that you'll win the bet.
Skimmed ... didn't read. Please for the love of little baby cupcakes fix your paragraphs. over 50% of them break off in the middle [unless you meant for them to be there own paragraphs then please separate them.]
So. Much. Awesome!
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Went back and made it bit easier on the eyes. Thanks for the feedback!
Fix that paragraph. [move up or separate down a line]
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That made the fic so much easier to read. All in all this was a pretty good fic. Loved the surprise ending.
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I knew I missed something....
Thanks for all the help!
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You're welcome .
Here's my reading of your story! I hope you enjoy it! Reading