Noxiel, Angel of the night, followed by the Night itself, might have made a mistake. While he bore the title of Tyarel, Angel of Knowledge, he discovered that he was an artificial soul, created by his former lives, long time ago. Actually, you might call this immortality through rebirth.
His research had influenced the whole multiverse, being against the first god command to angel, ''do not create life''. The crossing of this rule had been made on the human world, called purgatory, and in Equus.
It's up to the newly-created soul Noxiel to fix his former life's mistake. Will he handle it and go back home, or will he fail, and remain trapped in Equestria forever?
And, the most difficult question even he can't answer: would he really be mad, sad or angry, if he was trapped in Equestria?
Holy commas batman!
had grammer and english problem but enteresting
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Thanks. And sorry for the few (more like too many) errors/typos, i'm usually writting in the bus or while walking, on my cellphone.
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That's almost the point. I actually don't have much of an idea of where i'm going myself, but i do know the end. I'm a DM, so planning isn't my thing; I prefer improvising and going where the story leads me.
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That's how i roll.
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Okay. Well, if you were trying to sell me on reading the story, it didn't work.
5099432 well for me it has promiss but the hero is protraded as badass but gets scared over five six trees/demons
i stell follow the story so far i dont like hero/heroes to be one dimentional but its stile the begaining 
5099557 Thanks, dude.
I'm still trying to fit in more depth to the main character, but finding holes to punch in some background kind of breaks the rythim of the overall story (and I hate myself already for I have broke it too much already), though the basic idea was that the story was incomprehensible until the ending chapters, when I'd throw all of the background and add depth to make an epic final chapter. Though it would have been too much work for such a sudden story.
Still working on ch.5's end, which I can't seem to find how to put things in words that would sound good enough.
good story
Wheres chapter 7?
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This is kinda on hiatus, been thinking about either giving this up or re-writing it. In both cases, i'm too busy working on another projection, but i might just give this fic another shot.
6276764 i dont know about others but id like to see a return for this
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Aiight then. I'll be working on this as soon as i get the opportunity. I'll end up the first episode and re-write the first ones after that. Got a lot of ideas for this fic, 'just need to work a little on them and nurf the main character a bit. (More like a lot of bits but eh)