• Member Since 27th Jul, 2011
  • offline last seen Yesterday

Andrew Joshua Talon


A fellow traveler...

Comments ( 26 )

Whoa. Feral Fluttershy :rainbowderp: Didn't expect that. So, what, did Fluttershy let Rainbow "borrow" Jung? I'm intrigued

Thank you for making another story for the MASH universe.

Fluttershy then remembered that almost all of Fluttershy’s elective courses all involved flying faster, better. --> Rainbow Dash's

When I saw MASH universe, my first thought was M*A*S*H, now I'm sad.

What is the MASH universe? I want to know before I read the story and get accidentally traumatized. :fluttershyouch: If I am to be traumatized, I want it to be intentional! :rainbowkiss:

Was very interesting to read, as well as refreshing to say the least.
Also, glad someone else actually saw Rockadoodle- a million points to you!

You have got to make more chapter's
I mean daaaammmmm that's pretty awesome

Rainbows story is going to suck isn't it? I actually hope it does as that would give Twilight an interesting perspective.

That was pretty hot and I was surprised by the utter crude language used with Fluttershy... But I guess it also made sense. I think you should continue, it's entertaining so far and I'm intrigued on what happens next. The actual sex scene though I wasn't expecting. More like, they just talked about it. So yeah. You've got my like and fav to follow it.

Fluttershy's first time was one she initiated. I can so see that.

5045270

I can't tell if this sentence is sarcastic or not :-\

5045733 No sarcasm from me with that one.

What exactly is MASH again? :rainbowhuh:

more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Eh.

Feels like you rushed it, to be frank.

~Skeeter The Lurker

5051704
I thought it was pretty good.
Well... your right it was a little rushed.
But still good. :pinkiesmile:

Damn :rainbowderp: That was one of the hottest sex scenes I've read for quite a while. I deserve The thumbs up and favorite I'm giving you! Can't wait for more! :scootangel:

MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice start! Thumbs up!:heart:

Is it just me, or does this constantly drift between ponies and humans?

“And that she’s gotten into the act? Mambo mi Italiano?” Pinkie asked, looking over Dash’s shoulder with a bright grin. “Boffed? Buggered? Shagged? Shaved the one eyed sailor while singing ‘Rockadoodle’ with a-”

I've never heard of over half of those.

“He… Um… He had to go back to Wulfenstein last year,” Fluttershy admitted softly. She sighed and brushed a bit of her hair out of her face. “He writes me occasionally… But he made it clear I shouldn’t… Wait for him.”

Fluttershy...

“CELESTIA’S EYES, WHAT THE TARTARUS ARE YOU TWO DOING?!” Dash shrieked. Fluttershy yelped in shock and in arousal, as Jung was plowing her up against a tree trunk. The other flying Folk was glaring down, looking bleary eyed as she hung upside down.

Each other.:pinkiehappy:

Will Jung come back I liked the pairing

Are you going to finish this story

Login or register to comment