Eddard Stark and Tywin Lannister. Two very different men whose deaths were the beginning of the end for their families.
Eddard, Warden of the North, Lord of Winterfell and Hand of the King, a man bound by honour and justice, a caring loving father and a dutiful lord and friend, his commitment to the law saw him executed for the amusement of a Bastard King and sparked a War.
Tywin, Warden of the West, Lord of Casterly Rock and Twice Hand of the King, a man of Intelligence, Ruthlessness, a successful player in the Game of Thrones, his family and legacy the most important thing, so much so he neglected his own children, especially the one who would end up killing him.
Now they find themselves not at deaths door as they thought, but in a strange land filled with strange people on the brink of war, with the two men caught in the middle. Now they are forced to work together to bring peace to this new land. For Ned, its a second chance at redemption, for Tywin, a simple choice of adapt or die again. Will these two men survive the dangers of this world, and most importantly, can they survive each other?
EDDARD STARK-IN EQUESTRIA
! Oh Dear God, yes! I love this concept, and funny enough, I had my own idea of having Eddard in Equestria, granted, Tywin is with him, which kind of sours it, I really don't like Tywin.
The concept may be interesting, but charectirisation is a bit off, dialogs feels forced, as well as serious show vs tell issue.
5045546 OK Fair enough, I am new writer and this was just a quick experiment to see what worked what didn't. So any tips on how to improve it? It will be greatly appreciated.
Oh, Discord, are you playing with the space-time continuum again? That never ends well.
(Reformed Discord... and the age of the three tribes and the windigos. I wonder if he has a plan to not overlap himself...)
There's a lot of missing commas and stuff like that, it became more than a minor annoyance. Also everything that
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But, still, get an editor and continue.
so I got to ask is Ned and Tywin going to be turned into ponyes
Hmmm. Interesting.
In the book Tywin died of a bolt through his groin. I've never seen the show so I don't know the differences.
Enjoyable read. Following story.
5054456 No. At first I had the idea of turning them into a Lion and Direwolf to not only fit in Equestria, but also give the story another jab at symbolism and add the drama of ponies fearing and mistrusting them at first. But then I realized that might be too tired and cliche, plus I fear that idea might be turned down as unoriginal. What do you think?
5054459 Well one difference is Tywin got 2 bolts to the chest rather than his 'happy place', and Tyrion and Tywin both share a very well performed scene where Tywin says he may have wanted Tyrion dead but...well see the scene for yourself
5054670 I think they should be ponyes but I really do like the Lion and the Wolf idea
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Yes, indeed. Tywin always struck me as being cold and aloof. Shame his wife was only alluded to in the books.
So, any chance you'll continue? It's really good.
Yay!!! The Story Lives!!!! Great Chapter too
I'm intrigued.
If these two ever did work together it'd be known as "The Age here Everything was Fixed" XD
5056922 I think I heard somewhere that his wedding was one of the few times he smiled. Tells you a lot of his feelings for his wife
... You have me intrigued and ready for more
5913539 Still waters run deep, or so it's said. Although the books never mention it outright Tywin was never seen with another woman till Tyrion killed him. In my opinion Tywin is a simple man with one overriding passion, his wife.
5913724 Well his passion was his family legacy. His wife was the one other happiness he let himself indulge in... You know how that ended
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Nooooooooo, i should have noticed the cancled sign, shit.
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I think it's a nice idea. George R.R. Martin is a lover of symbolism himself, and it shows up several times in the show, so why not?