Time to read

aaaaa

That was a good chapter

Took me 21 minutes, thus it takes me ~2.413 minutes to read 1000 words, which is ~414.285 words per minute, which is ~6.9 words per second...

HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE?!?

need MOAR chapters!

... please

Is Dan coming back? Please? He was best pony/human! Please bring him back in the next chapter. Even if it's somehow telepathic connection, I would still be satisfied!

he better come back or ill be locking onto you  but good chapter keep em coming tracking (insert catch phrase) tracking like a missile

GAH WANT MORE.

That would be a surprise if Dan came back

As I said before, great start to this story.

I can't read this now. But I know your style of writing, so I already gave it a fav and like! I'll start when the second chapter comes out so I get more than 10k words to read. But still HHHHHNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGG to this story! (You don't have any idea how hard it is from reading this!)

ALRIGHT!! Step right up, everypony! It's time to play, "When Will Dan Be Back?" This game gives you, the esteemed Brony and/or Pegasisters reading this a chance to guess which chapter Dan will return in. The winner of the game will receive a grand prize of 1000 bits!

EDIT: you have a choice from chapter 2 through chapter 20 any dual choices will have the prize split between them if correct!

>>479569479569

I will endorse this contest.

>>479678479678 I'm glad! But I will need to know how many chapters you plan to give this story so the entrants have some amount to guess at...

*nods* An industrial revolution? New government? I say, dear chap, this story does have promise. Especially as a sequel to 7th Element

Well, you have garnered my interest. Bravo

Are you still accepting OC's?

~Charizard the Pony

I just read this on Fanfiction.net! Man, am I glad you updated! I so enjoy your writing and I can't wait for another update soon.

I hope Dan comes back, or im going to have to eat a cactus...

Already we're into the second chapter and we get action right away!

I'm really looking forward to this.

i...am....very...intrigued.....need....more..

When is Dan coming back?

>>478897478897>>498970498970>>497024497024>>479309479309>>478989478989 ALRIGHT!! Step right up, everypony! It's time to play, "When Will Dan Be Back?" This game gives you, the esteemed Brony and/or Pegasisters reading this a chance to guess which chapter Dan will return in. The winner of the game will receive a grand prize of 1000 bits!

EDIT: you have a choice from chapter 3 through chapter 20 any dual choices will have the prize split between them if correct!

>>499043499043

A chapter from 3 to 20.

>>499262499262 Nopony likes a smartflank Jagun...

>>499273499273

Smartflank my flank

I do what I want

I would have said 21 since it's the answer to everything...but Ima go with 7 or 14 or maybe the next part of the triology...

As for the story...Me gusta.

>>499043499043 Six, most definitely.

>>499043499043 Alright mate, I'll take take part in this. I think........chapter 7.

DRAMATIC ENDING!

DUN DUN DUN!

No clues about Dan. Oh well, gotta wait for the next one :(

i say 3

Can we have dan/ace now

hmm that quote reminded me of Pocket God "A DOUBLE RAINBOW ALL THE WAY ACROSS THE SKY"

ME likey but wouldnt applebloom now be considered a pedo?

Love the little scene with Blaze and Applebloom.

Now I won't say it, but I do have my own idea of when Ace might return...

>>532265532265 No he did it to her, he feels the same way Ace did about his mother and AB is also supressing her feelings if she she kissed him and didnt supress her feelings then she would

I really want dan/ace to come back in a LOTR on the 3rd dawn look to the east kinda situation, like him sensing his family in danger and breaking back into equestria, Please let the space time continuem break because of this. Actually this cant stay in equestria too long reminds me of garth nix keys to the kingdom

Dat dan

when

If Dan doesn't come back I will eat a pine-cone. I've done it before I will do it again.

c'mon dan.

how hard can it be to find your way back to another universe?

very you say?

pinkie pie thinks otherwise

This fic just keeps on getting epic as we roll along!

Next chapter:

Dan walks in

Dan: HEY GUYS!!! IT'S ME

Rainbow: AHHH THE NIGHTMARE! -pushes out of room-

Dan:

>>478787478787

Not to brag or anything but I can read at about 750 wpm from a speed reading class.

>>499043499043?

Chapter 1 of Return of the 7th Element. Do i get my prize money now?

im happy to see that dashie hasnt gone for another colt..... i would have been devastated....... and im sure dan isnt coming back in this story.

>>499043499043 i agree with akkura its chapter one of the sequel to 7th element he isnt going to be returning in this story

i wouldn't say applebloom is a pedo, because he is an alicorn. He grows up a lot faster and lives a lot longer than anypony else its like if we were a baby for about 1 or 2 years then a child for 5 then a teenager until we were around 16 and then an adult for few thousand years lol it makes sense to them.

its sad to think he wont be back for another 5 years though......

One of the next upcoming chapters should show Dan's point of view on Earth.

wow thats pretty awesome chapter...

So whe nightmare takes you over you become nightmare what ever your last name is?

I was shouting out to Twilight to not open that door. This chapter was breathtaking to read i hope blazing dawn and rainbow dash can escape somehow with her other friends safe at hoof