Thehumanoidtyphoon
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TheHumanoidTyphoon
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ALRIGHT! More anarchy.
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Anarchy for the win!
This is actually quite good, barring a few easily forgiven grammatical errors. The only real problem is the length, but that can be easily addressed. Try and shoot for somewhere between 5000 and 10,000 words a chapter; less flak that way.
Too bad Gaige would be stoked.
To the guy below me, no grammatical error is forgivable.
Hell yeah to this story.
I'm glad you like it and as for the grammatical errors if you're talking about things like when I spelled colour that's because I live in Canada and that's proper grammar here. Also I only wrote this within a few short hours so no it's not very long but I'll try to make it longer next time as I'm already working on chapter 2.
5034424 This. A third of of Gaige's skills in game are references to MLP, the care bears, or other "childish" properties. Painting her as wanting to leave reeks of sloppy characterization and forced conflict.
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She'd freak out. And she'd probably bond with the Cutie Mark Crusaders who are now close to her age.
CRUSH THE SYSTEM!!!
Potent as Pony BEST SKILL EVUR!!!
Let Butt Stalion here as the villian! Could be cool.
All around the library the derpy chased the muffin
the derpy was just hungry and stuff
POP goes the muffin
writen by Scoter + friends
Deathtrap isn't capitalized
Neither is the term "Vault Hunter"
Spelling errors
Grammar errors
Lazy paragraphing
VERY lazy writing all round actually
Sanctuary isn't capitalized
So far so bad
She doesn't say 'fuck' or 'shit'
She doesn't have a Legendary cause I don't know
More grammar errors
Fix your shit, Author.
5039235 Wow, way to make yourself come off badly, it helps to add what you think about the story, not just saying whats wrong and not leaving any comment on the story its self.Your way to aggressive and to the point.
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I call 'em as I see it.
5039441 Not always the best way to do things.
Small suggestion. Break some of your larger paragraphs down. A "Wall of Text" usually sends reader fleeing for the hills in the first chapter. Also, when someone new speaks,
"Start a new paragraph!" exclaimed Twilight.
Thank you Twi.
"No problem." She stated.
You see? Makes talking so much easier to read. And this applies to thoughts too.
It's just to make for an easier read to the viewer.
Simple author courtesy.
And, while he was an ass about it, CrystalHero97 DID have some points right. Certain words need to be capitalized. Names, Titles, and Locations.
I don't know about her swearing, she could for all we know, but do try to keep it to a minimum. "Damn" and "Ass" sure. The Hunters use those all the time. "Shit" and "Fuck", not so much.
Just think about this stuff okay? I'll follow this story for now, and we'll see where it goes.
Welp you caught my interest with the idea. Now to see if you can get me to stick around with a good story.
I really hope you do since way too many good ideas get a bad story.
Here, have a 100th like. Please don't abandon this fic like so many have abandoned theirs.
what happened to chapter 2. I was looking at the data for the story and it said that there was a second chapter posted. was it taken down to redo it?
Yes.
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Yeah I'll be doing that its just that there wasn't a lot of conversation in the first chapter. Also I'm not an experienced writer so there will be issues but I'll try to catch them the best I can.
5046957 As long as you try, I'll keep reading.
*Gasp!*
About goddamn time! Somebody finally wrote a BL2 crossover with Mecromancer!
Hmm... Borderlands and My Little Pony. What more could you want in life? Anyways, pretty interesting so far. Can't wait to read more!
and so close to the release of pre-sequel. please continue, i find you're taste in cartoons and video games quite refreshing
More please.
If anyone has any, I'm open to ideas for the story. It might speed up the process of writing it.
Faved, but not liked. You have a little grammar to work on, as well as formatting. Paragraphs should not be huge chunks.
Hoping it gets better, though, and it seems somewhat interesting, so I'll wait to see where it goes before liking or disliking.
5062765 That's the kind of thing you should put in a blog, not a comment. That way, people will actually see it.
The best weapon that I have ever or ever will use in a Borderlands game, is the Elephant Rifle.
..I wanna hug heeeeeeeeer...............
me the sandhawk
Gaige is best borderlands 2 character. That is all.
Love gaige so much, especially her back story!
Haven't even started reading it and I love it.
I especially love the comment of Rick Riordan in the summary. I'm even more intrigued.....but for now! To my read later list....
I should really get back to playing borderlands two, still have some DLC I need to finish.
mmmmmm 16 days, Im so excited I wanna die. PRE HYPE
1. and that's why you always have close enough to go with anarchy.
2. my best weapons currently is a grog nozzle x vladof Stalker Pistol (amazing short range weapon/indoor weapon) gunzerker combo
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Yeah, she seems to have the most prominent personality and has the best backstory. That and I seem to have a weakness for people with cybernetic limbs (they're so badass). For example; Edward Elric, Vash the stampede (I think), sir hammerlock, and of course Gaige.
5089743 Ya, have to agree with you totally on the fact that there awesome. I just remembered, you should have Gaige find a infinity pistol XD that thing is OP as heck with anarchy.
5062765 lol this is good so far I'll give it a like and a follow. Oh and you get instant browny points for your not so suptal? Subtal? Love of Trigun and Vash the Stampeed/The Humanoid Typhoon.
5089743 yep this story is amazing and I expect more chapters soon.
I apologize if I take a lot of time with my chapters. I tend to get distracted easily so bear with me.
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Borderlands: The Pre-Sequel is out.
MORE DISTASIONS FOR YOU!!!
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Dude... You don't know the half of it.
Aww, so sad that this hasn't had any updates in a while. It looked like you were just getting started here.
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Sorry about that. A lot of new stuff has come up for me.
Borderlands: The Pre Sequel, Fallout 3, Titanfall, Payday 2, Battlefield 4 final stand DLC, Borderlands Timothy the doppleganger DLC, etc.
5293952 Ah. I get it. It takes quite a lot to get into the right mindset for writing. Heck, I know how hard it is for me, and when you got a gameplay lineup like that... just, don't forget about this. Your brain children will always stay safe in your head, but what really spreads the joy is when you can share 'em
.
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Don't worry. This chapter is a little longer and it should be easier to write the fun chapters. While I do have a lot of Ideas for this story floating around in my head, they don't really fit in this early on.
Gaige uses Maliwan SMGs?
Fucking noob.