LOL, it's all dramatic and stuff, and then

"So cliché…"

I have actually been waiting for this type of story. I'll be watching it as long as ya don't mind my two cents.

Heh, they're in for a surprise.

Hmm...reminds me of Dan vs FIM. I'll try to read it later ;)

>>735554735554

o_o IT DOES!  Shame DvFiM got cancelled.

interesting HiE concept. I think I'm going to give it a shot (after college this week)

>>735558735558 Cancelled? Few days ago author upload a vid on youtube so don't lose hope

Edit:One chapter readed. Looks nice ;) Rest, after school.

When I first read this I only thought Francis got transported into Equestria...

Image: http://images.wikia.com/left4dead/images/d/d2/Left_4_Dead_Francis_Hates_by_MysticalNomad_-_Copy.jpg

Brilliant.

Nice premise!

I've never read anything with quite this take on HiE, I'm looking forward to how your characters handle things.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!1

Ha, finally done with chapter 2 ^^ And i need to say it, this is going to be buckin great! Haters stuck in Eq with they friend who is a closet Brony.... Horror, the horror!

>>735562735562

OH! There is something new!

>>736165736165 Why do I have this strange feeling that we are connected. Almost every story I read, I see you commenting. Something really fishy is going on here.

Teenagers.....amirite?

They're like little angels

bbaaaahahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, another story I must wait for mmmammaaaaaooooorrrrrr     

Frack! I hate it when i miss all the comments... But THERE ARE SO MANY! I shall try to answer them...

>>735547735547

Cliche, yes. Surprises, oh... there will be many!

>>735551735551

Lol two cents only makes me richer!

>>735554735554

Omfg i TOTALLY forgot about that...

But no, this is actually based on a few times with me and my own friends... Yeah, sad, innit it?

>>735560735560

Ahhhh college... Poison to my mind~

>>735658735658

...I have no clue how to respond to that...

>>735822735822

No, just dapper~

>>736078736078

Lol oh, as do i... as do i...

>>736165736165

MAYBE MAYBE MAYBE!

>>736706736706

WITH MORE HORROR! Oh celestia, i am tired...

>>737638737638

Yes, angels with devil's horns~

>>737923737923

NOW I MUST WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER DO TO YOUR LONG COMMENT! HUZZAH!

>>738282738282

Then I have completed my job. MASS CONFUSION AWAY!!!!

>>738282738282 Sad if things go wrong with you friends. If they not accepted you as a brony they are not you real friends. Really... who can "hate" or dislike someone because of show/movie/book? I now a girl who like "Twilight"(You now, sparkling "vampire" and shit...blargh ) but she likes "Witcher"(books not a game) so... everybody like diffrent things sometimes in really weird combinations. Like me. I like to watch a mature, serious (or just bloody, Hellsing ) anime or read books/manga/comic for adult thanks to topics but i love some colorful, freaky ponies who live in great world with no rapes, theft, wars or murder happening every day. We all know that Equestria is not too safe world thanks to animals and monsters but... it's better place even with no magic and shit. So... i can be a big fanboy of "Berserk" and "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic"- this is really freaky combination... i wonder when Guts and gang fall from skies and end up in Equestria !

Image: http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m08817qofa1qgppkx.gif

Sooo...that's all. Sorry for my poor English

And go on with writing! Next chapter incoming!

>>738282738282 Actually it is not too bad. Especially philosophy of mind is very ... enlightening

ZOMGWTFBBQ!!!1!!1

again. Shit just hit the fan.

I like it

Awesome

This...this is simply brilliant. Plenty of people have put humans who like the show in Equestria, but I'm sure you're the first to put haters in the show. Pure genius. I can't wait to see where this goes.

On my to-read list.

But did you read my mind? http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/37015

A slightly entertaining HiE story that isnt just a pointless self insert?

Ok maybe it is. But still.

MADNESS! MADNESS I SAY!

I must Fav!

Pure awesome!

CLIFF HANGER WHY? I am going to cry. MOAR or I may die( I have story cancer and the only cure is moar.)

>Brony hater.

>Says "For the love of Celestia!"

Thismakestotalsense.jpeg

Haters are gonna hate, Trollers are gonna troll, but Bronies are gonna BROHOOF!

This is exactly as good as I expected. The text is a little bit dense though. A bit of extra spacing would do some good for the readability.

The dr said I require MOAR of your story. Plz fill the prescription

>>739572739572 i think i saw that comment in 2 stories now

>>740147740147 Well thats me. The 'ZOMGWTFBBQ!!!!1!!' guy. I say that when shit gets real.

>>740161740161 Well then, SHIT. JUST. GOT. REAL.

Anti-bronies with a brony inside Equestria, nice.  I wasn't too sure when I started reading but this is really interesting.  I'm suprised no one else has thought of this

>>740191740191 You kinda get those thoughts anyways so nobody thought it would be THIS GOOD

>>740212740212

That's why the rating bar was made, to promote stories and get them on the featured bar.  I actually found this while going through an authors fav list

>>740233740233 That is the best non-fiction i've ever heard.

>>740298740298 Who did?

>>740321740321

Me did!

>>740332740332 This deserves a purple word cause its awesome. Yay.

HE WOULD GO PSYCHO KILLER THiS NOT REALISM

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png

Sorry but We Psycho Antibrony To Kill pony Just Prove HE HATE THEY GUTS BY RIPING THE GUTS

-----> nothing more to say.

>> Insane ARE YOU INSANE?!

I love HiE fics about closet bronies. So... Fav.

Somepony call a medic! Or a vet!

Second comment FTW!!!

>>744717744717 lol no fail

let us see just how long our dear apple farmer was there behind our primary protagonist.

ONWARD, TO GOOD STORY!

This story is weird and those guys are idiots....I LOVE IT

And a cliff hanger............... WHY DOES AUTHOR HATE ME!>?>?>?>/\<V>?

Yea I don't know.

>>744734744734

I was first to comment on that section of the story... so there

MY COMPUTER IS FULL OF LIESSSSSSSSSSS!!

KHA!

i am Kha, the sssssssnake man.

SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSKAH!!

>>744717744717 Oh wait... shit

>A determined mare, she only needed to find-

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

>>744981744981

Image: http://img.ponibooru.org/images/6a/6a3fbda292d394eb7de1f4e8bd3c7ff7

>>745010745010

YOU SHALL BURN IN THE FIERY PITS OF HELL FOR YOUR CRIMES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>>745055745055 I'm slightly amused by this

>>745076745076

Image: http://iambrony.jsmart.web.id/mlp/gif/133588198154.gif?1336215226

lol you have no clue how funny this is for me XD

>>745095745095 Is Matt gonna become a child molester and/or rapist?

Well I guess its filly molester

>>745108745108

Image: http://iambrony.jsmart.web.id/mlp/gif/nope_s.gif?1329152047

Image: http://iambrony.steeph.tp-radio.de/mlp/gif/my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-brony-well-maybe-a-little.gif?1334139765

>>745134745134 I'm confused

Not sure if I should feel like or

>>745161745161

Image: http://iambrony.jsmart.web.id/mlp/gif/133578326977s.gif?1336215004

BE ENTRANCED BY THE LYRE!

Sounds like they need a medic.

Lol, Starcraft reference!

>>745161745161

And no, not rape and bad bad stuff... Matt is just a complete jerk basically

>>745222745222

Wait, really? Did i do a reference without meaning to?

Image: http://iambrony.steeph.tp-radio.de/mlp/gif/rainbowawesome.gif?1318143936

Oh no, now I have to wait to find out that it’s Twilight.

>>745237745237 Then why is he trying to touch little fillies and applejack with a weird expression on his face?

This shall prove to be an interesting story.

>>745255745255

Pffffffft~ so cliche~ do you really think I would take the AVERAGE route with this story?! Pshaw~

BUT I will say this... There will be twilight, there will be the mane, there will be lots and lots of idiotic things Matt and Xavier do! And... havent thought farther than that~ maybe~

>>745267745267

He doesn't believe that anything is real still... plus, he is the weirdest one of the three

Also, cuz i thought about what you said...

Image: http://iambrony.steeph.tp-radio.de/mlp/gif/133328216164.gif?1334139053

>>745270745270

Quite my good moustachian~

>>745293745293 I knew that from the beginning I just wanted to drag this on as long as possible

Your refrences were not lost for you see I, the master of unlocking picked them up.

Also...I didn't see enough mental collapsing.

I regret not being there for the picture war!!  Great story b.t.w.

As for the other stories being slightly neglected now...

Image: http://s54.radikal.ru/i145/1101/0c/737198b6542c.jpg

Lolz

>>745309745309

just lol

>>746074746074

Hehe... oh, you haven't seen ANYTHING yet~ Patience young padawan...

>>746539746539

lol XD sorry and yeah... kinda feel bad for them too...

Abwawabwabwa! *fury mode on*

Sadist, you are sadist mister.

Oh this is just hilarious.

Well, Matt was just being Matt and had a little ‘accident’ with another pony…” He shrugged. “That’s Matte for ya…

I thought he was Matt?

Nice chapters so far, and I am loving the frequency!

I love this story!

did find one typo: third paragraph, "beat to the stead rhythm" forgot the "y"

I feel as though there's a small chunk of this chapter missing. In this part of the story who is this "her" applejack is talking about?

" AJ cut her off with a hoof and put on a serious yet worried face. “Sorry sugarcube, but I am kinda busy today…” She shuffled about nervously. “I was wonderin’ if ya knew where she was. She wasn’t in her usual spot an’ I really need ta ask her somethin’…""

>>751065751065

Urgh... I was hoping that I got them all in my half- sleeping state... Apparently not

Thanks!

>>751259751259

Read above comment... Dangit!

>>751612751612

Uhm... Nope~ chapter is all there~ I did the "she" thing on purpose silly~

Just gonna have to wait til next chapter to figure out who this mysterious mare may be!

>>751612751612

Who AJ is looking for seems obvious to me, but perhaps I'm reading too much into the fanon of certain Background Ponies.

Uh, Applejack, you okay?

PONY.MOV, much?

>>751763751763

>>752070752070

Lol wait, where?

I always hate the premise 'Brony in Equestria' It takes 90% of the excitement out of it, mainly because he knows about everything.

>>752283752283

Depends on the Brony.

Throw one like me into Equestria, I'd be ruling Ponyville within a few hours, because I'm a devious bastard.

The ones that end up in Equestria are always the nice ones that sqee-at-pony-cute that would never utilize their knowledge of either Equestria, or Science. Pretty sure a primary/elementary school science experiment would impress most ponies.

WHY ARE THERE NO BRONY-IN-EQUESTRIA STORIES WHERE THE BRONY ISN'T A SIMPERING MORON!?!?

Don't you mean....

SlenderMANE?

*equips sunglasses*

YYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>>754632754632

Urghhhhh... at least Slendermane isnt NEARLY as bad

I thought twilights hair was dark purple.

>>755831755831

Depends on who u ask. To me, it's dark bluish hinting to purple~

I was a little burnt out on HiE fics there for a while, but this sounded different so I said, "why the heck not?"

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png

So far I'm loving it, I see great potential here, oh yes.

and to quote discord, "Looks like we might be due for a big old storm of chaos!"

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png

>>751704751704 Ok, I was just a little confused. Till, the next chapter then.

You have my sympathy for discovering slenderman. I mean, he's so annoying once you notice him, never leaves you alone really.  Hold up, I think I hear someth

BYOB? System of a Down reference?

LYRA!!!

I KNEW IT WAS HER!!!!!

>>804186804186

MY THOUGHT AS WELL. ALSO, humans.