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bahatumay


Simultaneously able to type 94 wpm and still take five years to finish a story. If you're feeling generous, throw a ko-fi at me.

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Rainbow Blitz. The name has instilled fear and dread into the sailors of Seaquestria for years. Applejack meets her as she's returning from selling cider, and by that it should be understood that she fought and lost and was taken prisoner. Now surrounded by crazy pirates, Applejack has only one objective: Escape.

Even if she has to pretend to love her captor.


Originally written for the AppleDash Contest 2: Applejack the Chaser; but finishing stories is hard. Original concept by Windy Daze. but there is no way I was going to use the name 'Rainbow Beard'

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 78 )

AWESOME! I LOVE IT CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! :pinkiehappy:

I love it! And i too am looking forward to the next chapter.

Actually, the idea is not mine.
It's from Windy Daze

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huh I totally forgot about that thread

... NEED... MORE... NOW..!

AWWWWWW! poor apple family :fluttercry: WHY U DO TIS TO DEM! :flutterrage: .... sorry? :fluttershysad:

:pinkiecrazy: More. More, I say!

I can't wait to see the look on the Apple Family's faces when they found out who kidnapped AJ. That probably sounded really heartless, didn't it? Ah well. Yay for Rainbow Blitz!

This story is getting better and better :pinkiehappy:

I absolutely love the refined sadistic Octavia. To be honest, she is probably my favorite part of this. Can't wait to see more, keep up the good work.

so awesome! :rainbowkiss: two escapes in one chapter? :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

Yeah but then AJ's plan is gonna back fire on her... smooth move AJ. THREE CHEERS FOR PIRATE APPLEDASH!

Hype acquired. Standing by.

YAY!!!!! I really don't think this is going to end well at all. Either dash will be the most heart broken mare EVER! or Aj will fall in love for reals and she will never make it home. :pinkiegasp: OR!!!! Rd will love her so much she would never let her go home and she will be trapped by a love crazed mare! :pinkiehappy:

Bet she could get the cannonball taken off if she dramatically jumped over the side with it, heh! Of course, that is, if she didn't drown before rescue. :derpyderp2:

Who else thinks that Applejack's plan has some major flaws in it? Let's face it, this is AppleDash. There ain't no way AJ can pull this off without falling in love. Unless she fails to get Rainbow Blitz to fall for her - in which case her plan still fails. Go ship, AJ. Go ship.

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Hip hip? Hooray!!!
Hip hip? Hooray!!!
Hip hip? Hooray!!!!!!

Looks like this story has a "ship" in it huehurhuehue

Turning around, she saw Li’l Scoots perched on top with her tiny wings spread to keep her balance, and grinning widely.

This is just to adorable to ignore I could look at that picture day! :scootangel:

Its a shame this story doesn't have more likes and follows than it does. Its teeth-rottingly cute, and the whole "Seaquestria" concept is a brilliant AU setting. I may have to borrow the idea for future fics. :raritywink:
Seriously, keep up the great work, I always enjoy reading.

Best Christmas present, just sayin.

YAY A NEW CHAPTER! AND IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!

Yay! But holy tense changes, Batman!

Woohoo! An update on Christmas! It's Christmas!

Eee! Great chapter!

Surprise was there! Yea!

Fantastic story. One thing though - Applejack cringes when she assists in piracy, but not when Octavia kills the enemy captain? I had gotten the impression that Rainbow and her crew were lovable rascals, but not cutthroats.

5566518 Pirate! Plus, its Octy...she's pretty hardcore in this story..

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Thanks!
Applejack didn't see that part; she was still on deck (and I don't think Rainbow saw, either). As for Octavia... she has a bit of a history. She's like the brute squad; she's quartermaster because she'll cross that line when nopony else will. dl.dropbox.com/u/21167245/FiMFiction/Emoticons/misc_Octy_something.png

Yay, an update! Oh no, Octavia is catching on :pinkiegasp:

Is it bad that Octavia is my favorite in this story? (though Applejack is a close second)Octavia's brute personality in this story makes here a very interesting character, though that does make me even more curious what the resoning behind why she is that way is. Still awesome story I look forward to more updates!

I think this was my favourite chapter so far. Although, I think that of every chapter until the next one comes out - it just keeps getting better.

Amazing, as always! :raritywink: Also, I wonder what Octi's thinking :derpytongue2:

Bitch Octavia. Bit different, but I likes.
:raritywink::heart::twilightsmile::heart:

Incredible. Nothing else can describe it. I'm a sucker for anything that includes pirates anyway.

I am enjoying this so far.

I'll be brutally honest here, this is far from the best writing I've ever read.
but I do enjoy your story very much, keep up the good work.:twilightsmile:

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I'll accept that. Honestly, if I were really good, I'd actually be getting paid for it :unsuresweetie: but I'm glad you've liked it so far.

5643569 *giggle* paid for it.
again I really like your book, if I may give a suggestion of getting your self a editor I think your book will be even better, hay it worked for me.:raritywink:

:derpytongue2: I used to be an musician like you, then I took a pony to the knee.:rainbowlaugh:

DUDE YOU SERIOUSLY NEED TO UPDATE! I'm dying to know what's gonna happen next! :applecry: :raritydespair:

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Sorry! :fluttershysad: I wasn't satisfied with the pacing of the next chapter and it kindof got put on the back burner. But soon!

Oh that's cool take all the time you need I get really into things and get very passionate about them sorry if I cause offence

YES YES YES!!!! ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!! HOORAY!!!!!

She's gonna betray all of them the moment a chance to save Vinyl shows up

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