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    • Going to Equestria
      A teenage boy named Wyatt is suddenly transported to Equestria, a world with ponies, but no humans.

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    Sorry if this chapter is short

    Two days after I left Canterlot

    I slowly cupped my hands in the stream and took huge gulps of fresh water.  I stopped to allow myself to catch my breath.  After I was done panting, I spread the water on my face to cool myself off.  I took one last gulp and filled up a bottle I packed with water.

    I stood up and sighed, time to continue this.  I turned South which was the direction Celestia had told me the Griffon Kingdom was and continued to walk through the dense forest I was in.

    During the walk I was thinking how I will even be able to do this.  I've never done a life threatening mission before!

    "This is going to suck." I said to myself.

    I continued my pace and would hear the common rustle of a bush and animals crossing my path. Soon my mind changed the subject of how dangerous this is to what will happen if I die.  I don't have my family or friends here to attend my funeral.  Instantly after I thought that I stopped walking.

    My mind began to flood with images of my family and how I was worlds away, dimensions even!  How can I get back to Earth and how would everyone here react if I just left when I know that I've started something here.

    "I wonder what they're doing right now." I said to myself thinking about if anyone has noticed I disappeared.  By now I would be in L.A. having a great time, like I never went here in the first place.

    "Everything happens for a reason." I said which was a quote a lot people had said to me.  I sighed and started walking again and reached a turn in the path.

    "Must be getting close." I said trying to forget about the memories.  Though it didn't work, I still continued to think about home on Earth.

    Then something brought me back to reality.  It was the whistle of an arrow and a loud thump of the arrow contacting to the tree next to me.  I quickly rolled into a nearby bush as an arrow hit the ground where I was just standing.

    I began to hyperventilate as adrenaline flooded my veins.  I stood there for a moment until I began to sneak through the bushes until I was a safe distance from the path.  I found a little spot to sit behind some trees and a large bush.

    I slowly lifted the leaves of the bush and quickly spotted a large castle.  My heart skipped a beat when I noticed a dozen of Griffon Guards on the top pathway.  Many of them had crossbows in there claws.

    "What, they get crossbows and I don't?  That's just cheating." I whispered to myself.  "I might steal one and return it to Silver Shield."

    After that plan passed I began to scan the area and where I can enter silently.

    After a few minutes of searching I noticed a blind spot where I can enter the castle.

    I looked up at the guards and waited for the perfect moment to make a dash to wall.  I quickly stopped at the wall to catch my breath.  Jesus this is hard as hell.  Once my panting had subsided, I looked straight up to see a ledge at the top of the wall.

    I quickly pulled out my bow and took a minute to find the right arrow.  Once I found the arrow with a rope tied to it I pulled back on the string and aimed it straight up at the bottom of the ledge.  I heard the bow creak and the rope stretch as I steadied my hand.

    "Please make it and please don't attract any attention." I whispered with hope and let go of the arrow.  I shot out like a bullet, not making a sound and impaled the stone with a quiet thud.  I strapped the bow to my back and tested the rope by pulling down hard.

    Once it passed I jumped up and grabbed hold of the rope.  My gloves made it hard for me to slide don the rope which is a good thing.  I slowly began to ascend up the rope to the ledge as quiet as I can.  Fear that I might catch some attention, but right now everything was going smoothy.

    Once I reached the top I slowly looked around to see if there was any guards around.  Thankfully there was none so I climbed on top of the wall, quickly scanned the area to see where else to go.

    I quickly spotted a roof top close to here.

    "Here goes nothing." I whispered to myself and sprinted to the edge of the wall and did the longest jump I could do.  I landed on the roof with a grunt and laid there for a second.  Recuperating from the fall.

    I stood up and looked out at the tough challenge ahead of me.

    "Well, no turning back now." I said to myself with worry and began my way to the tall building in the middle of the city.

    Announcement

    I have now decided to ask all of you if you want me to add your characters in the story

    If you want me to add your OC, just PM it to me with a picture/description, name, and other info like talent or personality

    Hope you've enjoyed the chapter

    Comments ( 10 )

    #1 · 52w, 4d ago · · ·
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    does it have to be a pony? if so then i still have one.

    #2 · 52w, 4d ago · · ·
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    One OC coming up!

    #3 · 52w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #4 · 52w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>574247 guess i was right about crossbows. then again you would expect the griffons o have more military tech than the ponies.

    #5 · 52w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Aww yeagh!

    #6 · 52w, 4d ago · · ·
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    New update yeah

    Sincerely the Doctor

    #7 · 52w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>628910

    That makes sense because Equestria is known for being a land of peace, not war.

    #8 · 52w, 3d ago · · ·
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    well here is my OC

    Pic: http://b-312.deviantart.com/art/Starshine-Kote-299905963

    Name: Starshine Kote

    Age: 20

    class: Pegasus

    Rank: Spec-ops leader

    bio:

    A brave, sarcastic pony who loves doing loop-de-loops and is a member of -the lightning strikers- a special operations team of royal guards. created after the changeling invasion.

    This pony has a cyan coat, a Brown-Red mane, blue eyes, and a crossed swords Cutie Mark.

    he is able to fly fast enough to break the sound barrier and when he does the resulting boom is heard for miles and causes a red and black streak through the sky with lightning coursing through it.

    this move has been designated the lightning strike which is what the spec ops division is named for.

    #9 · 52w, 1d ago · · ·
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    OC pic: Look left.

    Descrpition:  Basically, I'll do anything if I want to. I WILL follow directions when given. I have the ability to manipulate fire, and breaking the sound barrier creates a Sonic Flameboom. If I am not in the area at the time, I'm either away doing something, or, quite literally, wandering in my mind. I also can access the P.P.I.C. (Pinkie Pie Item Container)

    Personality: Carefree, makes a joke of things at times, and is friends with most of Ponyville. Spitfire is my Best Friend.

    Fire Fury is my Gender-Swap. She has similar, lighter colors, curly hair, and is actually my Marefriend. Come on, wouldn't you wanna date somebody with all of your likes, dislikes, and personality?:ajsmug:

    #10 · 52w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh, the Pinkie Pie Item Container contains all you could ever imagine. But it has it's limit on uses. 5 uses an hour.

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