• Member Since 13th Jun, 2014
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HocusPocus


I love to write, play bass, and play video games. My main goal when writing is to be sure that I have passion, so that it is never dry.

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400 years ago, the griffins lost the 25 Year's War, shrinking down their population and land size to fit a small island. Griffins slave labor in the Equestrian Empire as a result. But what happens when two sisters find a banned book?

I don't want to reveal too much because the prologue will unfold as I go along with the story, it's the style in which I like to write things. Makes a little mystery for you guys to solve, like a game inside of a story. Be prepared to be thrown right into the action and also be prepared to be thrown into different time periods in every chapter. Why? Because it's more fun as both a reader and a writer (also I like to write chapter by chapter instead of a huge outline).

Thanks to my editor best college pegasister ever. Also thanks to the Penn State Bronies for encouraging me to put this on FiMFiction.net and for being awesome. Most important, thanks to all who read my story it really means a lot. Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated in the comments (constructive).

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 4 )

This was written preety well. I think there isn't enough stories out there that show the other side of a war with Equestria. Especially if Celestia or Luna enter the Battlefield. Two words on that: SCORCHED EARTH. Anyways not bad at all, have a like! :pinkiesmile:

“The Complete History of the griffin Kingdom, and the Tyranny of Equestria.”

DUN DUN DUUUUN!

I'm certainly looking forward to what's in store. I'm generally not into stories like these, but I got a preview of this in real life so I'm willing to see how it goes. :raritywink: Also, I know this was said in previous comments, but it can't be stressed enough how badly a misspelled title will screw you over in terms of first impressions.

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