I woke up to a cramped room. Escape was imperative, but perhaps it would've been better to just stay inside. Now I roam the land, seeking solace, and understanding. The land is wary of dragons, though, so I am faced with much loneliness, and even greater woes. I seek a place to call my own, and perhaps even someone to share my life with...
Credit for the Artwork goes to my good friend Claire.
My god! Number 31 on the top stories list the day after release!?! I've never been on there! Huzzah!
Chapters (2)
Ahoy! Thar she blows! Commence reading, captain!
did not disappoint now i request moar with the payment of thumbs up and favorite
Wow, it change a lot. :P
486612 Yes it did. It most certainly did.
486618 Glad to see that you improved it. +1
from your official critic.
Wow, this looks promising!
Just one thing I spotted=
-“The wanderers are incredibly powerful beings who travel between worlds. You are on of them.”-
i will pay in staches if you continue this. here is a down payment.
This fic's pretty good so far, even if it's just the prologue. It also reminds me of a song...
Can't believe this title hasn't been taken yet. :P
i agree with lord gremlin, will favorite this
486623 I found that the original was a bit too cliched, so I went with this instead. I think that this is much better than what I had earlier, so its a win-win for me.
486639 Fixed, and thank you. And I hope that you continue to read as I add more to it in the coming days, and weeks.
486656 No down payment is needed. I intend to continue writing this of my own accord.
486725 Every story starts with an intro, and this is mine. There will be more soon, so don't worry about the brevity right now.
487290 I'm surprised too. I was expecting to hear something about it being taken, but no. Ah well, better for me.
487515 You have my thanks, here, and on your page. I hope to hear more from you soon.
And a big thank you to all of you. There will be more soon, and hopefully this will live up to the expectations I have in my head. And, I modified the description, slightly. Number 31! Fuck yeah!
A wanderer ey? Sounding familiar already...
488121 ... I already said that it was going to be integrated with Rising Sun down the road.
488125 Down the road? You didn't make it past the egg. You have bad distance judging
488146 Other than that reference, there is nothing yet. But soon there will be a more solid connection between the two stories. Like when the two characters meet.
488153 Wouldn't that make the universe implode or something just as cool?
488176 No. Just some witty dialogue.
488203 I suppose I could live with witty dialogue, but still! The universe imploding would be cool! Like, Doctor Whooves cool! See what I did there? I know, I'm shameful.
488207 Yeah, but an imploded universe makes for bad plot development.
488209 Psh! If you simply dazzle people with the coolness that is the explosion, who needs plot lines? *cough*Micheal Bay*cough*
Will there be any contact with the mane six in this story?
488721 Eventually, yes.
its getting interesting
Looking forward to more, good so far. Might want to make more breaks in the layout though. It's quite, "wall of text" looking, if you scroll through it.
491180 I can do that. Although you are the first one to ever say anything about it, and I have over 100K words worth of story written, and no one has ever said anything about formatting.
491200
It definitely didn't cross my mind while reading so it didn't deter from anything and it's still fine the way it is, but when I scrolled back to the top of the page it seemed like it was just ALL words and no breaks, I've read a lot of stories on this website and I never had that feeling before. Just thought I would say something. Maybe someone else can voice an opinion?
491216 It's not really a problem, so I can do it... EVENTUALLY! Anyway, if you're reading Rising Sun, then I have good news, since it'll be updated with a new chapter soon.
Great job, thoroughly enjoyed it.
488215 Explosion? While definitely cool, I thought that you were talking about an IMPLOSION.
495121 When you get down to it, does it matter if it is an explosion, or an implosion? They're both awesome in their own ways.
495129 You speak true, my dear author. You speak true.
495149 Sometimes. Other times I'm a dirty, dirty liar. But that's not too frequent. Anyway, what do you think of the story?
495158 So far I think it's pretty interesting. It's something different in that it's a dragon's story, and not the story of a pony.
495285 That was the intention behind it. So many pony stories, not enough dragons. I aim to fix that with this story.
495293 Yeah, dragons are cool. You're story's pretty cool too. Dragons are awesome!
Ahem, now if you'll excuse me, I have a chapter of "The Ballad of Echo the Diamond Dog" to read. I bid you farewell until next time.
Tracking this. Will get to it soon.
I tracked this for a while, and now I'm waiting for the next chapter.
This I can handle
529201 I've got the first few hundred words down, but I'm waiting for real inspiration to continue it. Probably not too long till I get it up. In the mean time, give my other works a shot, if you haven't already.
i don't mean to sound impatient but how often will this fantastic story be updated?