People are like books. You can't judge them by the outside and it's not cool to burn a big pile of them.
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When Spike gets the day off, he crashes into the CMC and strikes a conversation with them. After agreeing to go to their clubhouse to talk some more, Spike finds out that the three fillies have other things planned for the little dragon, showing that they wanted to crash into him in the first place, and it's the worst possible thing he could imagine. A makeover.
And, his makeup artist is Sweetie Belle, his long-time crush.
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It couldn't get any worse for Spike.
it was a nice story but it didn't feel like the focus of the story was on the event the title was based around. the makeover itself was only a couple paragraphs whereas the whole rest of the morning was the bulk of it. i give it zero tacos because i love tacos and you can't have any of mine, but it does get a silver star for a good try and with that good try even better results than a story i could write right now. 8.76/10 on the SCS-52 Official Story Ratings Scale.
This made me lol
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Glad it made you guys laugh.
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Thanks!
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Glad that it made you laugh.
5030871 love spike shipping
Best line ever!
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Glad you liked it.
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Thank you!
Almost hard to believe Spike just let her do that to him.
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No problem!
Page after page.
Twilight slowly read that book.
It was getting very boring.
Page after page after page.
This. I want to mention something about this. It's a bit too...meta for the fic. The first reference, I suppose, was funny, but making transitions like this are detracting from the fic, and take away from the immersion. We know it's a show, the characters don't. So why would Twilight be mentioning episodes?
Unless you're writing a trollfic/metafic, keep the episodic and television references out of the fic. It doesn't really work here, and it makes the ending fall flat because of it. You could use an editor's pass through the fic, and that might have caught the 'episode' references.
The idea, on the other side, is pretty silly. Coverart Spike is adorable
I'll trade with you, SpikeCould have been something really funny, but it petered out at the end.
Could have been better. Cute story regardless
I'm having a hard time discerning exactly why that was funny.
thats all i needed.'
BTW that was not the vid i ment but whateves it still fits.
Wat?
Hoooh boy, quite a bit wrong with this.
Just no.
So… Scootaloo's cussing
, Twilight's making a reference to the episodes (which she shouldn't even know about since she's not Pinkie Pie and does not have the power to break the fourth wall) 
, and Spike's calling Twilight dumb 
?
...wat
LOL That part was funny, including the ending.