In February of 1945, the Nazi war machine is getting desperate. From the west, the combined weight of the British and American counterpush from the Battle of the Bulge is gaining steam. From the east, twenty million Russian soldiers are marching onward towards the destruction of Nazi Germany. The Germans are attempting to find any way to turn the tide, and one avenue they have chosen is science. In two locations, one in Poland, and one in western Germany, two machines are being made. The Germans have discovered how to use them, and have discovered a new subject of interest through the gates of the machines......
I've been writing the rough draft of this for about two weeks now. The first few sections are ready, so they're up.
Chapters (7)
Only one suggestion. If you make a prologue (before they meat the ponies) dont put it in many chapters
476356 Thanks for the critique. Much appreciated, and will be applied next time.
hmmm... very awkvard.... very awkvard indeed
476704 This is actually kind of a commission for someone I know. I actually think the opening is terrible. If you really want a good example of my writing, check out http://shtebbie.deviantart.com/#/d4wfp4k.
That is a serious story I'm working on.
476745 Ok... if you need ANY help with world war 2, most specifically tanks (tank buff) just tell me... god knows im on this computer 24/7 and when im not playing games, and waiting for new fanfics... i need stuffs to do :P
Okay, this is the last one I had a rough draft for. The rest I have total leeway on.
Yay!
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477382 Huzzah!
For Whom The Bell Tolls - Metallica
Hemingway, Metallica, and ponies. Odd combination.
If I make a fanfic it will be a sequel to this and "Princess" Celestia will be killed for sending Johann to the Moon.
477869 Goin' bananas on the MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNN!
Nice but needs American, British, and Russian soldiers here.
478125 British and Americans will be a part of this. Russians were on the other side of Germany at the time, so they won't play much of a part. British involvement will be minor, but will involve SAS. That's al you need to know for now.
Btw, I just got done reading a TwiDash ship that my friend forced me to read (which I actually enjoyed), when lo and behold, someone with a TwiDash avatar comments on my story.
Awesomely strangely cool.
477503 DO WANT
477503 P.S. you should include the M26 Pershing... orr meybe prototype tanks? M103 tsk tsk
478150 That would be me.
It's all good but try and write more I am tormented when a story I like doesn't post new chapters!
490008 Well, I have school, and I am in the local theatre. I also write on deviantART, and I have been working on my 'The Duala Conflict' story as of late. I'll try to post the next part by next Monday.
I'm going to regret that, I just know it.
But thanks for the comment.
Here you go-
He shot her in the field...
WHAT!?!?! 
HOW IS SHE THERE THEN? AAHHH CURSE YOU CLIFFHANGERS 
496022 Referring to Thunder. I need to fix that, then.
Thanks for pointing that out.
THE NEXT! OR else Fluttershy and Atwater will see you.
is this continuing? because this interests me and i will track if ongoing.
502197 Yes, but School and a job are a bit more important to me right now.
Man, you deserve more views than my one, don't put TOO much action or you'll' end up like my fanfic (honestly don't know what was wrong with action) but you honestly did a great job on this, MOAR!
503540 Thanks! I've been trying to curb the action, and add more insight into the characters. Especially in making a German soldier not seem like the heartless killing machine everyone makes them out to be.
Thanks for the comment!
535637 Thank you, kind sir!
535637 I'm sorry, but I am going to be a while before I can update again. Possibly at the beginning of June. Many things are happening in my life right now, and it's hard to get away. Sorry, that's how my life is right now.
And there are a bunch of idiots that are making my life miserable, because apparently their computers aren't working or some crap.
What makes me interested in this is the fact that the Germans actually developed very strange technology FAR advanced then even us. In fact most of the recent developments in technology after WWII came from germant scientists that America captured and gave amenity*if this is wrong please correct me, but I know that some german scientists came to america to escape death* Anyway the one that the germans developed is related to the cover art. I can't remember the german name for it, but it was called pretty much The Bell. Now no one really knows what it was for, though the chief german scientist that was leading the project as well as several other nazi scientists that were working on this machine vanished without a single trace along with the bell.
A few years later something fell from the sky and when it was discovered it was an object that looked exactly like the german Bell. Interesting isn't it? Maybe the germans found a way to travel through time? To a different planet? Or maybe even to a completely different world....whatever the destination....it makes you think don't it.
852927 As Keppler calls it, it was known as Die Glocke.
Which, is The Bell in German. So imaginative.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
853452 Does the name really matter? Just think of what it could do...it makes you wonder what else they had in development. Makes you think.
853480 I was just responding to you saying that you couldn't remember the name.
And to be honest....I think out of all of the secret weapons built during that war, the United States takes the cake.
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Because 70,000+ people is quite a few, in my opinion.
853519 Oh. Thank you :) I have a hard time remembering names like that.
Eh, America just got lucky with the atom bomb. and now amazingly with all our fancy tech we haven't really progressed much as a nation or a species. I won't go into my thoughts on things cause I tend to get a bit ranty, but I think what this world needs is a big major event that really knocks us off our soap box. I don't even care what it is anymore as long as its big and its an event :P. Celestia walking up on the presidential podium and saying hello.
853557 God forbid it be what happened twenty years before Metro 2033....
This story is out of mein kampfert zone anne frankly it seems quite interesting.
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I come on this story for the title and see this work of gold. I realize, however, that I am 22 weeks late. Don't care. Regret nothing. Good comment. Okay story.
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lol
1805450 Checked Fimfiction for the first time in a long time.
Thanks for cheering me up, mate.
852927 I highly doubt that the Germans invented time and interplanetary travel far in advance of even modern standards. The closest we can come to time travel is either travelling near the speed of light or sitting outside a black hole. Gravity bends time similarly to how it bends light. And this is just a theory; we have no real method of testing it.
Whilst the Germans were responsible for some incredible inventions (the first intercontinental ballistic missile, for example) but I refuse to believe that they unlocked the mechanics of time travel. I suppose they discovered intelligent extraterrestrial life as well?
For Whom The Bell Tolls is a timeless classic, weaving the poignant threads of love and war. As the Glock Magazine symbolizes the relentless rhythm of conflict, Hemingway's narrative captures the toll it takes on the human soul. A gripping tale where every turn of the page echoes the resonance of both the bell and the Glock Magazine, marking the inevitability of fate.