Derpy participates in a tourney.
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Prowling with preposterous pretentiousness we permit petting of precious ponies
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Not bad at all. There are a few grammatical errors here and there and I'm not exactly a fan of having dialogue italicized unless the character is thinking in his or her head, but I don't regret reading it. The action was well-written and didn't drag on for too long and I could picture what was going on. Have an upvote, and keep on writing.
Well fought, Derpy. Well fought, Derpy.
"Tournament" not tourney.
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Tourney is short for tournament, always has been.
5080649 It is? Well, you learn something new everyday, I guess- sorry...
Eeee, Battle Derpy!
I admit, I was expecting her to do a sort of 'Drunken Master' thing.
Found this via the Seattle's Angels. I really enjoyed how both the festival and the fight was described. The worldbuilding regarding the Griffon Kingdom is excellent; honestly, it's much better than what we know of them in canon. My only complaint is this has far less recognition than it should.