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Twilight Sparkle has always believed that everything in the universe has an explanation. Everything.
That is, until Comet Tail transferred to Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns.
Now Twilight's been having strange sensations around him: things she just can't explain. For example, why does her stomach perform somersaults whenever he's around? Or why are there doodles of him on her notebooks? And most importantly, why can't she stop thinking about him?
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Now what I would have said, but this is Twilight we're talking about.
Normally I don't read these kinds of stories, but this one caught my eye because it wasn't immediately overrun with dislikes. Naturally, since this seems to be a romance story between one of the Mane Six and an OC, you can expect some backlash and simple hate dislikes. Don't let that discourage you, however, as this was pretty well-written.
I have my eye on this story, and wonder where it will go from here...
*Edit*
I have been made aware of the fact that Comet isn't an OC. That is a "my bad" on my part. I didn't know.
5303684 You do realize there is a background pony in the series named Comet Tail right? Just some info you need.
5303684 Thanks for your support! Comet Tail isn't an OC; he's actually a background pony who's often shipped with Twilight. Your encouragement means a lot to me, and I will definitely take your advice
5303699 Yes, that's the Comet Tail I had in mind
Woah, Twilight. Moving a bit fast there.
5303720
I see what you did there!
5303699
Whoops, I didn't know that.
Now I feel dumb...
5303741 No, you shouldn't. He isn't as well known as the other background ponies.
Twilight is adorable!
Also, Footloose when she has hooves.
5303772 Awww, thank you!
5303782 Welcome!
5303878 Thank you!
The story was very sweet.
5304414 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it
Very cute little story you should expand on it and make it more.
5307350 I'll definitely be writing longer stories soon. Thanks for reading!
wow this was good do I here the possibility of a second story
It's a very sweet story. My fav part might just be Spike, his whole attitude and personality is pretty spot on.
5308773 Thank you! I wasn't planning on writing another Comet Tail and Twilight story, but I'll definitely be considering it now
5309834 Thank you! And Spike is Best Pony
This story was so sweet it gave me diabetas.
5310009 Thank you so much!
Ah, the Florence Nightingale reference. My mother and grandmother are nurses XD. Also, could you make a Sequal about when twilight goes to live in Ponyville and visits him again?
5311196 My sister's a nurse
and yeah, I'm thinking about writing a sequel. Thanks for reading!
5311355 YES!!! And np.
5303684 Actually Comet Tail is a stallion in the show
5309864 Spike is not a pony. He is a dragon .
That is a mouthful of a name
Yeah like lemon Hearts twinkle shine Minuette Lyra and moondancer
Lol that is so like Harry Potter
Apparently Twilight is getting it really bad
Tell that to your school
"Are you sure, Twilight?" said Spike warily. "The other ponies seem fine. Even Footloose, who has been-"
Twilight growled at the sound of that name.
Ohhh somebody is a little jealous who ever thought Twilight would felt that way
"Of course you can," said Comet Tail, placing a hoof on the filly's shoulder. "And of course you'll come visit me in Ponyville someday."
"I promise," replied Twilight, placing her hoof over his.
Well she did made her promise because in season 1 premiere she will definitely move to Ponyville and that's where her Adventure Starts
This is actually a pretty cute story I kind of wish it continues on to the next sequel if she did meet up with him again but anyway it looks like the school of gifted unicorns starting and Twilight was pretty excited for this but things change when she saw the new kid named Comet Tail and apparently she really got it bad because she cannot stop thinking about him and when a girl talk with him she gets jealous and she thinks she's sick but then Celestia and Cadence mostly Cadence explain to her that she has a crush Twilight didn't want to believe it but she did felt that but she didn't have to rush it just become friends with him and she did and it was pretty nice to see her getting out of her comfort zone but unfortunately a few months later he has to move again and Twilight was devastated but he did promise that he will write to her and apparently he lives in Ponyville and in the future she'll be there too but anyway this was a pretty nice story keep up the good work